Talk:Far from the Tree (film)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Kaleeb18 (talk · contribs) 14:17, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Well this makes me so sad. I reviewed the entire article, and while I had another tab open that I was looking at I came back to this one and the page refreshed so now I must redo the entire review :( ― Kaleeb18^Talk_Caleb 14:17, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

...relatable Pamzeis (talk) 15:04, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Prose

• There is not much in the lead that talk about the producion section of the article
  •  Added
• The infobox says the music was done by Nami Melumad, but I do not see that anywhere in the article
  • ...because there's nowhere else to put it? There is no coverage of her work on the short
    • Then shouldn’t there be a RS backing that up?
      • Well, the film's credits already serve as the WP:PRIMARY source for the information
• I feel like the November 24, 2021, release date in the infobox should also have something with parenthesis around it saying something like theatrical release
  • Why, though...
    • Well, if I’m the reader I guess I would want to know what the second release was for. Or maybe I’m just dumb and should know the second release means theatrical.
      • Well, according to {{Film date}}, it's for the locations... and there's a discussion somewhere that says it should not include the location if it was the location in which the film was produced
• Also is English really needed in the infobox, because the character do not even talk
  • I mean, Rotten Tomatoes lists the language as English
• listening to the ocean waves in it – I would put ocean wave noises so it does not sound like there are ocean waves in the seashell
  •  Done
• angrily scolds her for leaving, pointing out his scar – this sounds like the father is talking to the coyote
  •  Fixed
• who acts much as she did – as much as?
  •  Fixed
• research trip to Canon Beach. – I would add Canon Beach, Oregon.
  •  Done
• Nourigat noted the abundance of raccoons in their natural habitat while on a research trip to Canon Beach. She immediately considered them as the short's main characters. – These two sentences can be combined
  •  Done
• and story artist, respectively. – respectively is not needed
  • Needed to clarify one was a production supervisor and one was a story artist, not that they were both of these or something
    • Gotcha
• Disney's Meander drawing system – If Disney's Meander refers to meander (art), I think meander should link to that. But idk if it is referring to that since I have no clue what Disney's Meander is
  • Don't think so, reading the linked article
• simple accessory but ended – comma before but
  •  Done. Pamzeis (talk) 12:46, 12 April 2022 (UTC)
• released alongside theatrical screenings Encanto – of Encanto
  •  Done
• received positive response – is it supposed to be responses? you could also maybe say a positive response
  •  Fixed
• Romper stated it – should be a that after stated unless the quotation marks were just forgotten
  •  Done
• considering it have some of – to have
  •  Done
• Maybe you can use an image of Cannon Beach in production so readers can see what it look likes compared to the short
  •  Done. Pamzeis (talk) 09:01, 6 April 2022 (UTC)

Well, that's it for my review. This is just my two cents, but if your looking for a DYK hook you could create one based off how the raccoons were originally going to be humans, cause that was interesting. ― Kaleeb18^Talk_Caleb 16:50, 2 April 2022 (UTC)

Alright I think the article is ready to pass the review. ― Kaleeb18^Talk_Caleb 13:08, 13 April 2022 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed