Talk:Evolution of seed size

I think you've got a good article here, the only thing I can really call into question is your heading of the first main body paragraph. I just remember anytime i was scanning wiki for something specific a heading that was just simply "mechanism" probably wouldn't entice me to read on further. Maybe be a little more specific and maybe expand upon your opening paragraph, other than that good job! ~~LMSVF6~~ — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lmsvf6 (talk • contribs) 19:50, 3 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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I would suggest adding a sentence in the leads page which you explicitly state what you mean by “evolution of seed size” (i.e. they are getting larger, smaller, diverging in size). I would also add a few explanation sentences to the “selection pressures” section to preface why selection pressures on seed size are important to their evolution overall.

The organization of the “mechanisms” section is a little confusing. It might be good to separate the two sections one being early/ancient seed sizes and another being the seed sizes and mechanisms maintaining them today. Also, I would move the “Temporal Selection on Seed Size” section to above the “Selection pressures” section as it is a major part of the page and topic. Overall, very well done and thorough! LetMinnow (talk) 21:59, 7 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]