Talk:Eurovision: Come Together/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:17, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
Reviewing for the GAN October 2020 Backlog Drive. MWright96 (talk) 13:17, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
[edit]- "19 previous Eurovision entries," - don't begin a sentence with a digit per MOS:NUMNOTES
- "contested the event," - try to use an alternative word other than "event"
Background
[edit]- "a look at what would have been in 2020." - this portion of text closely resembles that of the BBC source that verifies it. It will need rewriting to pass WP:LIMITED
- "official replacement programme to the 2020 Eurovision Song Contest," - 2020 edition,
- "and broadcast live from Hilversum on 16 May 2020," - the source does not mention it occurred in Hilversum. Another source is needed to verify this fact
- "instead via the BBC iPlayer." - through BBC iPlayer
- Wikilink Graham Norton
- "This press release also confirmed that Eurovision: Come Together would give viewers the opportunity to take part in a live vote." - needs a reliable source at the end of this to verify that it is correct
Selection process
[edit]- "all songs from the contest pre-2020." - before 2020.
- "were not eligible." - ineligible
- "Panellists was asked to choose ten Eurovision songs" - select
Participants
[edit]- "and each account holder was able to cast a vote up to three times." - cast up to three votes.
- "of the live show, and the top 10 results were announced via the BBC website following the show." - close repetition of "show"
- Each one of the table's columns should include "scope="col" per MOS:DTT
- All of the artist names in the artist column should be put into the Template:sortname template
References
[edit]- Reference 2 is linked to the incorrect article from the BBC
- Reference 16 is missing the publication date
- The Guardian is the work not the publisher
The review shall be put on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the suggestions raised above. MWright96 (talk) 15:03, 5 October 2020 (UTC)
- @Sims2aholic8: Are you going to make the changes or do you need some help? Grk1011 (talk) 17:22, 12 October 2020 (UTC)
- @MWright96: I went ahead and made the changes. Please let me know if you see any other issues. Thanks for your patience! Grk1011 (talk) 14:07, 15 October 2020 (UTC)
- Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 19:26, 15 October 2020 (UTC)