Talk:Effie Maud Aldrich Morrison/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:48, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Comments

• "in the United States," no need to link.
•  Done

• "Cumberland County Welfare Board" any link for Cumberland County?
•  Done

• "Massachusetts on January" comma after Mass.
•  Done

• "(1871-1954)" en-dash.
•  Done

• "Aldrich(1880-1970)," space before ( and en-dash.
•  Done

• "got a job as an " ->"was employed as an"
•  Done

• "Building. the two were" The.
•  Done

• "Philadelphia in 1915" the following year.
•  Done

• "and in 1917 her" and the next year
•  Done

• "and she was running" no need for "she".
•  Done

• "In May of 1931" May 1931.
•  Done

• "her son have filed for" -have.
•  Done

• "where she came up with a concept " where she developed a concept.
•  Done

• "initiated a series of contacts" what does that mean?
•  Done

• "who passed the concept" what does that mean?
•  Done

• "Leon Henderson. Henderson" repetitive.
•  Done

• "the Roosevelt Administration" not sure Admin needs a capital A.
•  Done

• "He transmitted the idea to First Lady Eleanor Roosevelt, who shared the concept with her husband" ehhh?? So, the idea was shared amongst a bunch of people. I'm not sure we need the Chinese whisper version here!
•  Done

• "Thence" bit archaic.
•  Done

• "the Works Progress Administration as" put (WPA) after this.
•  Done

• "spent $30,000 to build" inflate.
•  Done

• "town of Millville, which" overlinked.
•  Done

• "300 acres" convert.
•  Done

• "cottage style" hyphenate.
•  Done

• "for $7 per" etc etc, inflate.
•  Done

• Link "stroke".
•  Done

That's all I have Doug, enjoy. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:06, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

Thanks for review. I'll get started on resolving the issues tomorrow, after a good night's sleep.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:14, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

@The Rambling Man: Couldn't resist. Addressed all the issues today. Can you take another look at it. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:20, 6 September 2021 (UTC)