Talk:Don't Wake Me Up (album)/GA1
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Reviewer: Troubled.elias (talk · contribs) 04:50, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
Hello! I'll take up this review. I am about to eat lunch (12:50 p.m. my local time), so I will leave opening comments in a few hours elias. 🧣 💬reach out to me
📝see my work 04:50, 14 July 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking up this review! In case you need them, there are 2 offline sources in this article that are available online: Media notes (ref 1) and Love Rock Revolution (ref 2; free to borrow on Open Library). — PerfectSoundWhatever (t; c) 03:48, 15 July 2022 (UTC)
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Okay @PerfectSoundWhatever as I promised, I'll do the opening comments today Your Power 🐍 💬 "O Goldwing'd messenger..."
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Round 2
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@PerfectSoundWhatever, I'll be taking a look at the prose and see which parts need editing for clarity, if there are any Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?"
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Round 3
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@PerfectSoundWhatever ping. Finished work on another wikipedia project, so I can finally return to reviewing this
After these comments are resolved I'll move on to spotchecks Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?" |
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This batch of comments serves mostly to analyze the sources and spot OR or V issues, if there are any. There are some prose suggestions there as well. Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?"
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- Placed On hold. Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?"
📝 "Don't get complacent..." 09:48, 27 July 2022 (UTC)- @PerfectSoundWhatever, trying this ping again. I don't know what's happening with Wikipedia on my end but I tried this two times and the ping didn't go through 😭😭 Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?"
📝 "Don't get complacent..." 10:48, 5 August 2022 (UTC)- @Your Power: Haha that's odd. Don't worry about it too much though, I have this page on my watchlist and check it frequently — PerfectSoundWhatever (t; c) 15:39, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
- @PerfectSoundWhatever Hello! I've done a readthrough of the prose, and to close it off, I made some necessary copyedits etc. Here's a diff so you can review the changes and tweak/revert when necessary. There are no more outstanding issues with sourcing, and I feel that the prose is already up to GA quality. I will be passing soon, but please tell me if the final copyedits are good to go before I do so Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?"
📝 "Don't get complacent..." 07:51, 7 August 2022 (UTC)- @Your Power: Thank you! All the copyedits look good, just some minor stuff I corrected:
- [1] the source doesn't explicitly say they were impressed, just noting that it exists. I used a wordier, but more accurate, "described".
- [2] I think this is just a subjective thing but I would much rather have every statement cited. It's more clear, because a editor doing a cursory look won't be able to tell if the one reference is for the whole paragraph, or just one sentence, and the rest need {{cn}}'s. (also WP:CITEVAR sorta applies here) — PerfectSoundWhatever (t; c) 17:47, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
- Alright then! Thank you for letting me know. With that out of the way, this is a ✓ Pass from me Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?"
📝 "Don't get complacent..." 17:58, 7 August 2022 (UTC)
- Alright then! Thank you for letting me know. With that out of the way, this is a ✓ Pass from me Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?"
- @Your Power: Thank you! All the copyedits look good, just some minor stuff I corrected:
- @PerfectSoundWhatever Hello! I've done a readthrough of the prose, and to close it off, I made some necessary copyedits etc. Here's a diff so you can review the changes and tweak/revert when necessary. There are no more outstanding issues with sourcing, and I feel that the prose is already up to GA quality. I will be passing soon, but please tell me if the final copyedits are good to go before I do so Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?"
- @Your Power: Haha that's odd. Don't worry about it too much though, I have this page on my watchlist and check it frequently — PerfectSoundWhatever (t; c) 15:39, 5 August 2022 (UTC)
- @PerfectSoundWhatever, trying this ping again. I don't know what's happening with Wikipedia on my end but I tried this two times and the ping didn't go through 😭😭 Your Power 🐍 💬 "What did I tell you?"