Talk:Don't Say You Love Me (Fifth Harmony song)/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 02:40, 27 December 2018 (UTC)

Infobox

• No source for its genre. Please add the source and in the prose, composition section.

Genre in infobox is “tropical-pop” while genre given on iTunes is simply pop. Trillfendi (talk) 00:31, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

iTunes not a good source for genre. Source for its genre, please. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:12, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

Lead

• song recorded → remove recorded
• tropical music → source
• music critics → link to music journalism
• in the room that remains open as the last member leaves. → re-word this
• Total Request Live → year of when the show was rebooted in between brackets.

Background

• Add instrumentsation, recording, enginner and so on...

Composition and lyrics

• A midtempo song built on a moderate tropical, dembow rhythm,[3][4] "Don't Say You Love Me" is a torch song that finds the group asking for an honest relationship → "Don't Say You Love Me" is a midtempo song built on a moderate tropical, dembow rhythm. Lyrically, it is a torch song that finds the group asking for an honest relationship. Wath is dembow?

Critical reception

• The song received positive reviews from all the music critics. → add in the beginning with wikilink of music critics to music journalism.

Music video

• Why did you remove this subsections?

Background and synopsis

• Image on the top of the article.

Reception

• his written article published on Billboard website → , in her article published on the Billboard website,

Live performances

• Total Request Live → year of when the show was rebooted in between brackets.
• They also performed in February 2018 on Hollywood Boulevard to a small crowd of fans → this source is not the official channel on Youtube, find another source.
• they sang the song last out of all the others → awful. "Don't Say You Love Me" was the last song they performed/was on their setlist. + source
• The performance also included songs such as "Work from Home", "All in My Head (Flex)" and "Down" → what do you mean with this? The song was interpolated with these ones?

Credits and personnel

• Use only 2 collums
• Use {{spaced ndash}}

References

• Reference 7 needs work and the author needs to have last name in the first place and then first name
• Same for the reference 8, 9, 12, 14, 15...all the other until the end (regarding the author)
• Reference 28 no date or author?
• 23 no date
• Buzzfeed is dead and unreliable, so remove it.

Overall

• No lyrics on external links?

@Trillfendi: You seem to try to improve the article, however, you are making a mess of certain sections such as Credits and personnel, you can remove the "Management" subsection, but let everything else in there. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:14, 10 January 2019 (UTC)

• • I'm do, so, so sorry for my late response @MarioSoulTruthFan: I'm so freakin busy lately and barely see Wikipedia, I promise you that I'm going to edit everything until Tuesday. Okay? Urban (talk) 13:58, 12 January 2019 (UTC)

Yes be aware of some changes done by another editor. I will revert them all. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:19, 12 January 2019 (UTC)

Status query

What is the status of this review? It has been over three weeks since the above posts, and the promised edits were not made. UrbanJE's only edit this year was the one on this page, and they only had time for one edit to the article responding to this review; before that, their previous edits were on November 12. Perhaps the thing to do is to close this review now; if so, MarioSoulTruthFan, you can always offer to review again after UrbanJE has done the necessary work to the article and renominated it. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:28, 3 February 2019 (UTC)

I will give it a couple more days and close it on the weekend. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:36, 4 February 2019 (UTC)

MarioSoulTruthFan, it's way past time to close this. UrbanJE hasn't edited on Wikipedia since I posted the status query at the beginning of February. Please take care of this the next time you're editing on Wikipedia. Many thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:18, 25 March 2019 (UTC) Huge apologies; I don't know how I ended up on this page, since the nomination was closed on February 10. I'm so sorry, MarioSoulTruthFan. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:20, 25 March 2019 (UTC)

@BlueMoonset: It's fine, perhaps removing it from your watchlist will help. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:12, 25 March 2019 (UTC)