Talk:Diary of a Wimpy Kid (book)/GA1
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Reviewer: Ebe123 (talk · contribs) 12:48, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
General
[edit]- Referencing to itself is not necessary. At least put the page numbers.
Lead
[edit]- Diary of a Wimpy Kid should be in quotation marks, not italics
- "The books focuses on Greg's life as he enters middle school and faces many hardships with his family." that sentence is completely redundant to the previous one
- "The sequel to the book isRodrick Rules." There needs to be a space.
- 2nd paragraph, name should not be in italics, but in quotation.
- "Diary of a Wimpy Kid first appeared on FunBrain.com in 2004. The online book was read 20 million times." You could merge the two sentences.
Done
- "The sequel to the film is Rodrick Rules" there should be a point.
Done
Plot
[edit]- Could you merge some paragraphs
Done
- We do not need a tab after a paragraph.
Uh what do you mean by "tab"Greg Heffley 19:17, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
- Go here, and you can see it below this note.
- ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 20:08, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
- Done Saw that in history.
- "Not all goes to plan though and when they get home and Greg's dad, who was hassled by kids, throws water at them and the water soaks their candy.The Wizard of Oz play[5] is also a hardship for Greg, Patty Farell, who plays Dorothy, is coming on stage, and since Greg is a Tree, he thinks he can throw apples at her, but the director takes it out for health and safety." After 1st sentence, We need a space.
Done
Background
[edit]FunBrain
[edit]- Section to be expanded
- "The website made daily entries until June 2005.<ref name="greg">" There should be a slash right before ">" ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 20:21, 3 December 2011 (UTC)
Done
Sequels
[edit]Development and reception
[edit]- 2nd paragraph is too short.
Merged
Comments
[edit]This is on the borderline for speedy fail. I'm putting this on hold for 7 days. ~~Ebe123~~ → report on my contribs. 13:57, 3 December 2011 (UTC) I have corrected most of the mistakes said here.Greg Heffley 19:31, 3 December 2011 (UTC) GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
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