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History copied from company website

Hello, just stumbled across this article on Detonics, the "company history" section to me reads like some kind of promotional piece the company wrote about themselves. I went to Detonics' website, and sure enough the company history section on the Wikipedia article is almost word for word copy and pasted from Detonics own website at http://www.detonicsdefense.com/history/

The first paragraph under "company history" in the Wikipedia article are word for word copied from the company's website. The second paragraph only has one sentence removed, otherwise is a word for word copy. The next two paragraphs only the opening sentence is reworded, otherwise a word for word copy. The first and last sentence of the fifth paragraph are again copied word for word.

I don't consider myself to be involved enough to make edits myself, just a loyal reader of Wikipedia and I hope this helps.208.107.88.177 (talk) 03:34, 12 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]