Talk:Derrick Harden/GA1

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:22, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 01:34, 16 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 14:55, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 14:55, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Add "(NFL)" to the lead and then remove "National Football League" from the "Early life" section
I would consider removing "as well as the most recent" as something that likely become out-of-date at some point. Or maybe add "as of 2024".
of his career. consider rewording, as high school football isn't really "career" worthy
A wide receiver, he helped Ellsworth recommend adding "As" to the beginning
on c. May 25, 1986. I would drop the circa and maybe reword to "around May 1986".
Aldridge suggested the team to give Harden a tryout and he signed with the Packers on c. May 2, 1987. --> Aldridge suggested to the team that it should give Harden a tryout; he signed with the Packers in May 1987.
Ref spot check:
- Add access-dates to website references (1, 17, 19, 20)
- Link The Waukesha Freeman in Ref #5
- All other refs look good with formatting
- Spot checks matched what they were citing.

Nice work BeanieFan11! « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 15:17, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: I think I addressed everything. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:47, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 20:21, 17 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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