Talk:Dedie Rachim

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A fact from Dedie Rachim appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 25 May 2024 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Dedie Rachim was the first active member of the Corruption Eradication Commission to be elected to public office?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2024/May. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Dedie Rachim.

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The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 23:38, 16 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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~~... that Indonesian politician Dedie Rachim was the first Corruption Eradication Commission staff to resign to take part in an election?~~ Source: [1]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Missoula Children's Theatre
- Comment: -

Created by Juxlos (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 217 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

Juxlos (talk) 08:40, 21 April 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
Freely licensed: Used in article: Clear at 100px:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article new enough and long enough. Passes earwig, no close paraphrasing was found, and the hook is interesting, cited inline, and verified (AGF on Indonesian source). QPQ done. Image appropriately licensed. GTG. Pseud 14 (talk) 13:11, 1 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Juxlos and Pseud 14: as it stands, I have two issues: it's not immediately clear what the hook means, and I don't think it meets WP:DYKINT—it's not really that interesting. Is there anything more interesting available? ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:04, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @AirshipJungleman29 and Juxlos: My understanding was that Rachim was the first member/staff to leave his job at the commission (against corruption) in order to run for public office. Would that help if it is simplified? Pseud 14 (talk) 17:11, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  - Yes. Is it really interesting, though? I don't really see why any reader would be encouraged to click on the article. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:14, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    - @AirshipJungleman29 and Juxlos: Perhaps somewhere along the lines of Alt1: ... that Dedie Rachim was the first active Corruption Eradication Commission member to be elected to public office? Open to suggestions from Juxlos if they prefer something more interesting Pseud 14 (talk) 17:24, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      - I think that works better. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 17:25, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      - Sure. Juxlos (talk) 22:22, 11 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]