Talk:Data Protection Commissioner

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Neutrality, promotion etc

I've taken out some statements with promotional tone, but there are some left, eg "The Office adopts an engaged approach to regulation, with open channels of communication between the regulator and those regulated. The Office proactively engages with the private and public sectors, helping to shape how organisations work with data, rather than simply watching for transgressions". Article needs more citations.

I also wonder whether it should be renamed Data Protection Commissioner (Ireland) as there seems to be one in Guernsey also. Tacyarg (talk) 18:40, 7 February 2018 (UTC)[reply]