Talk:Darryl Milburn/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 17:52, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this one. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 17:52, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Comments

• I copyedited the article here. Let me know if you disagree with any edits.
• He was able to increase his size to 6 ft 5 in, 264 lb, the way this is written, it makes it seem like he made himself grow longer. Maybe rerword to say he increase his weight to 264 lbs while also growing 2 inches in height?
• You can link Dispersal draft.
• Ref spot checks: 3, 5, 7, 8, 13, 17, 19, 22, 24, 31

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 18:37, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

• @Gonzo fan2007: I've addressed the issues. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:42, 25 August 2023 (UTC)
  • Looks good. Pass. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 19:44, 25 August 2023 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.