Talk:Dangerous Woman (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 10:07, 21 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there! I'm Cartoon network freak and my review for your GAN is going to arrive soon. I LOVE this song!! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:07, 21 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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Carlsson both serving as → Carlsson both acting as
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The song was first released → The recording was first released
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midtempo → mid-tempo
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song with → song, incorporating
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relationship and how a partner can bring out a different side of a woman. → relationship, while also approaching the way Grande's unidentified boyfriend brings out a different side of her.
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Link "music critics" to music journalism
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the mature, "sultry" feel of the song and Grande's vocal performance. → the song's "mature" and "sultry" vibe, while acclaiming Grande's vocal performance.
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In the United States, "Dangerous Woman" debuted at number ten on the Billboard Hot 100, becoming Grande's fifth single to debut in the top 10. With the feat, Grande became the first artist in the chart's 57-year history to debut in the top 10 with the lead single from each of her first three albums. The song went on to peak at number eight in its eleventh week on the chart. → With "Dangerous Woman" debuting at number ten on the Billboard Hot 100, Grande became the first artist to reach the top ten in the first charting week with every lead single of her three studio albums. Furthermore, the recording became her fifth single to debut within the top ten of the chart, later peaking at number eight in its eleventh week on the chart.
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Infobox

Flawless
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Background and release

In the first sentence, don't mention her full name. This is only to be done in the lead.
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which was called Moonlight → called Moonlight
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The song peaked in the top-ten on several charts. → The song was an immediate success, reaching the top ten on various charts worldwide.
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Grande stated that the song was the perfect transition from her previous album to the new one and that the song didn't represent the album as a whole. However, Grande decided to change the album's title to Dangerous Woman and subsequently released the title track as a single. → Although stating that the song was the perfect transition from her previous record to the new one, Grande ended up changing the album's title to Dangerous Woman, following which the title track was made available for digital consumption.
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dangerouswoman.com, specially to promote the album and its lead-single. → dangerouswoman.com in order to promote the album and its lead single.
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with some of the song's lines → containing few of the recording's lyrics
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released a one-minute preview → premiered a one-minute preview
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Special. Finally, on March 11, 2016, the song was fully released to digital download.[8] It was sent to US contemporary hit radio on March 15, 2016. → Special, before finally releasing "Dangerous Woman" for digital download the next day. Four days later, the track was sent to US contemporary hit radio.
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Composition and lyrics

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"Dangerous Woman" has a → the recording has a
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rock and roll," → rock and roll",
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while having → while incorporating
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"arena rock chorus" → remove ""
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Its sound was heavily compared → Various publications compared the track's vibe
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song is about → song discusses themes of
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where the singer talks → with the singer talking
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be herself and to be honest → acting naturally and being honest
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The song is performed → "Dangerous Woman" is performed
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the tempo of the song → its tempo
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in the song is from → spawns from
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thought that → felt
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besides, so I couldn't → besides, so [he] couldn't
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Picture > Producer Max Martin, 2015 → Max Martin (pictured) handled the producing process of the song.
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Critical reception

This section is pretty big, and I decided to edit it myself, as listing every issue would have been not that comfortably for me.

Commercial performance

As well as in the critical reception section, I prefer doing this by myself.

Live performance

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a video performing → a video which sees her performing
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account, in → remove comma
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release, wearing the latex bunny outfit seen on the album's cover art. → release; she is portrayed wearing the latex bunny outfit seen on the album's cover art.
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Grande performed her first televised performance of "Dangerous Woman" and "Be Alright" on Saturday Night Live on March 12, 2016. Grande performed her first live performance for "Dangerous Woman" as a special guest for Nicki Minaj at the opening of the T-Mobile Arena on April 8, 2016. She also performed "Dangerous Woman" with Jason Robert Brown on April 10, 2016 at the 2016 MTV Movie Awards, as well as the 2016 Billboard Music Awards. → Grande provided her first televised performance of "Dangerous Woman" on the March 2, 2016 edition of Saturday Night Live in a medley with "Be Alright". She additionally sung the track as a special guest for Nicki Minaj's concert at the T-Mobile Arena on April 8, 2016, while as well performing the single at the 2016 MTV Movie Awards with Jason Robert Brown, and the 2016 Billboard Music Awards.
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Music video

Grande previewed the music video through social media on March 26, 2016 and then again on March 29, 2016. → Grande previewed the accompanying music video for the single through social media on March 26, 2016 and March 29, 2016.
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The video made its official premiere on Vevo on March 31, 2016 at midnight. → The clip was officially premiered on Vevo in the night March 31, 2016.
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The video opens with Grande seen lying on a couch looking into the camera. Several shots are shown with Grande posing for the camera, along with various kinds of lighting, flashes and colors throughout the video. The video is directed by the production company The Young Astronauts. → Directed by production company The Young Astronauts, the video opens with Grande seen lying on a couch looking into the camera. Over the rest of the visual, the singer is portrayed posing for the camera, being surrounded by various kinds of lightening.
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after "Right There". → after "Right There" (2013).
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Credits and personnel

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Credits adapted from Dangerous Woman's liner notes. → Credits adapted from the liner notes of Dangerous Woman
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A&R → artists and repertoire
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Charts

Flawless

Certifications and sales

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Radio and release history

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Outcome: On hold On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:25, 22 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Passing... Congrats, 15:11, 22 August 2016 (UTC)Cartoon network freak (talk)

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