Talk:Dai Sil Kim-Gibson

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Hi @Reagle:, I am trying to submit my article for peer review per these guidelines Wikipedia:Peer_review/guidelines but I only get the message above saying the template should be on the talk page, although it already is. Do you know if a draft article can not be submitted to peer review? Thanks! Casey.ha (talk) 18:21, 24 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Casey.ha, congrats on going live! To request peer review, you should add the template {{subst:PR}} at the top of this talk page. (You could put it after all the WikiProject templates.) If I'm not understanding, we can discuss on Friday. -Reagle (talk) 21:27, 24 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Good outline and set of sources. I'm looking forward to seeing it all develop. -Reagle (talk) 17:29, 25 September 2018 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi @casey.ha,

I really enjoyed reading your article, and it is really cool that it is part of three different WikiProjects. I made one or two very small grammar edits, but overall this is very well written. One suggestion I have is about the career section, I am not sure if you need the sentence about Don Gibson since you provide the same information again in the personal life section. Also, the spacing between paragraphs three and four of the career section seems a little off but I wasn’t sure how to fix it.

I think your article is notable and features enough relevant information from reliable sources. I also appreciate how many other articles are linked within your article. I think it will be great if you are able to add a photo, which I know you are working on. Overall, great work! Dipilato.k (talk) 19:34, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi @casey.ha,

I like your Wikipedia article, there are two things I suggest is that maybe add the photo on it and move the personal life section after the education. –Hsienhsienlee (talk) 06:49, 2 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]