Talk:Da la Vuelta/GA1
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Reviewer: Kingsif (talk · contribs) 02:21, 6 January 2020 (UTC)
I'll review this, comments should be added soon! Kingsif (talk) 02:21, 6 January 2020 (UTC)
Style
[edit]- Lead good length for article
- Well written throughout, with good tone and grammar
- Pass
Coverage
[edit]- Lead comprehensive
- The background is all about how he came to record an English-language album - the song is in Spanish and, while a promotional single for that album, there is definitely way too much coverage of the entire album process so much that I really thought text had been transplanted from the album article before I got close to the relevance.
- Music and lyrics is good
- Reception has good balance of detail and quotes
- Needs work
Illustration
[edit]- A few standard chart lists
- Album cover in infobox
- Fair use music clip
- Pass
Neutrality
[edit]- Seems fine
- Pass
Stability
[edit]- History looks clear
- Pass
Verifiability
[edit]- Sources look good
- Everything cited in line
- Pass
Copyright
[edit]- Check looks good
- Good rationale for use of song clip
- Pass Kingsif (talk) 00:34, 8 January 2020 (UTC)
Overall
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On hold A good portion of the article is the outside coverage of the album's arguments, which can be cut down quite a bit. Kingsif (talk) 23:44, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: I don't think the notifications are being sent to your talkpage, so ping. Kingsif (talk) 23:45, 13 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Kingsif: I'll get to work on this either this Thursday or Friday as I'm off work those two days. Erick (talk) 16:17, 14 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Kingsif: I cut the background information and merged the release information with musical style section. Erick (talk) 20:31, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: That's great - I think the mention of being
one of the three Spanish-language records included on Marc Anthony
is sufficient background, but if some background is also added, that should be fine as long as relevant. Nice.
Kingsif (talk) 22:56, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: That's great - I think the mention of being
- @Kingsif: I cut the background information and merged the release information with musical style section. Erick (talk) 20:31, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
- @Kingsif: I'll get to work on this either this Thursday or Friday as I'm off work those two days. Erick (talk) 16:17, 14 January 2020 (UTC)
