Talk:Cyclone Tessi/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contribs) 21:50, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

• "The ninth cyclone and fourth severe tropical cyclone..." - What is a severe tropical cyclone? Link to the scale.

• You know darn well what it is, don't play dumb. – Juliancolton | ^Talk 22:45, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

• "...peaking as a Category 3 tropical cyclone on the Australian cyclone scale..." - And since we've linking above, you can delink here.
• "Cyclone Tessi had its origins..." - Not a fan of this wording personally. I'd suggest rewording to "Cyclone Tessi originated from..."
• "the Bureau of Meteorology's (BoM) Tropical Cyclone Warning Center in Brisbane identified the system as a tropical low and began issuing gale warnings." - Link gale.

• I linked gale warning instead, hope that's OK. – Juliancolton | ^Talk 22:45, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

• "as it approached the coast at 19 km/h (12 mph)." - Is the specific forward motion necessary here? That changes advisory by advisory, and 12mph isn't exactly notable.

• 19 km/h sounds a lot faster than 12 mph, though. – Juliancolton | ^Talk 22:45, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

• "Streets on the island were littered with rocks and other debris" - Large rocks, like boulders? Otherwise, I can go to my street or any street and get you a rock lol. Nothing special.

• They're minerals, Marie. – Juliancolton | ^Talk 22:45, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

And that's it. TropicalAnalystwx13 (talk · contributions) 21:50, 28 February 2017 (UTC)

 Done with everything. Thanks so much for the review! – Juliancolton | ^Talk 22:45, 28 February 2017 (UTC)