Talk:Cyclone Osea/GA1

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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 02:20, 5 June 2013 (UTC) Review will commence in a few days. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:20, 5 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Lead and infobox

Both fine.

Meteorological history

"...to the northeast of the Northern Cook Island: Manihiki." "...to Manhiki, in the northeastern Cook Islands." This is more suitable for a reader unfamiliar with the region.

I personally prefer the current wording as its a lot easier to understand and more factually correct since Manhiki is more in the Central Northern Cook Islands.Jason Rees (talk) 22:58, 7 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with him actually. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:59, 7 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"...French Polynesia sialnd group." Island group.

Changed to just French Polynesia.

"...the low level circulation center due to increased wind shear." Please wikilink wind shear.

Unless im mistake WP:Overlink prevents us from linking it twice (its linked in the lead).Jason Rees (talk) 22:58, 7 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Consistency is the most important thing. They should all be correct now. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 23:59, 7 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Preparations, impact, and aftermath

Please wikilink Scilly.

Conclusion

A very nice concise article. I will pass when everything has been addressed. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 20:57, 7 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Should be sorted.Jason Rees (talk) 23:01, 7 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]