Talk:Courbet-class battleship/GA1

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Reviewer: JonCatalán^(Talk) 03:57, 11 October 2010 (UTC)[reply]

"...spending most of their time escorting French troop convoys from North Africa and covering the Otranto Barrage." → escorting troops from North Africa to?
Related to above, later on in the history section, this is never mentioned (maybe I am missing it). It either needs to be mentioned, or it should have a citation attached in the lead.
I did the usual light ce, and also re-arranged a few sentences.
"The Courbets were longer than their predecessors..." → Perhaps it would be useful to include some of these predecessors ("... such as the (insert ship name) and (insert ship name)..."). You do this in the next sentence.
The list under the subheading of "postwar modernization" would probably be better incorporated as text with a standard sentence structure. Lists are oftentimes considered better than text by certain publishers, but I think Wikipedia editors prefer paragraph structure.
Images check out.
Referencing looks good.
The link to "Parsons" may need to be disambiguated.