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[edit]I think the name of this article is misspelled? This article in People I saw writes it as "CorePower" yoga and when I search it, other articles like this story in Advertising Age have it spelled that way too.. Ill try to change it to fix the apparent typo GreerPedal7 (talk) 22:02, 30 November 2015 (UTC)
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50.78.86.177 (talk) 21:43, 16 January 2020 (UTC)
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CorePower Yoga is the largest community of yoga studios in the US, operating more than 200 company owned studios in 30 U.S. cities.
• Explanation of issue: Unclear overview of CorePower Yoga’s offerings, out of date information
• References supporting change: https://apnews.com/dbb3cb60dad54036bf895e4f96e9d696
50.78.86.177 (talk) 21:43, 16 January 2020 (UTC)
Not done per WP:ABOUTSELF, A press release is not a reliable source for a self serving claim. - MrOllie (talk) 22:52, 16 January 2020 (UTC)
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[History] The first CorePower Yoga studio was opened in Denver in 2002 by founder Trevor Tice with Dave Porter, Brandon Cox, and Tim Johnson. Tice had experienced firsthand the transformative benefits of yoga and saw opportunity in an emerging yoga market to make what was then a fringe activity more approachable for the mainstream. His vision was to create a strong, supportive community where the life changing benefits of yoga were accessible to everyone. Tice served as Chief Executive Officer until 2014 when the company was purchased by private equity firm L Catterton. Following Tice’s death in 2016, his CEO successor, Eric Kufel, ran the daily operations of the company from 2017-2019. In 2019, CorePower Yoga was purchased by TSG Consumer Partners. In 2019, Niki Leondakis was appointed as CEO. • Explanation of issue: Out of date and incorrect information • References supporting change: https://www.journalmpls.com/news/2005/01/a-105-degree-winters-day/ https://profilemagazine.com/2014/corepower-yoga/ http://adage.com/article/cmo-interviews/corepower-yoga-stretches-resources-maximize-branding/237721/ http://www.inc.com/kimberly-weisul/best-industries-2015-yoga-and-pilates-businesses.html https://www.pehub.com/tsg-to-acquire-corepower-yoga-from-l-catterton/ https://www.corepoweryoga.com/content/our-team 50.78.86.177 (talk) 21:43, 16 January 2020 (UTC) • Information to be added or removed: [Products and services] CorePower offers consistent class formats. Standard classes are 60 minutes, heated and sequenced Core class formats include CorePower Yoga 2 (C2), a heated power yoga flow and Yoga Sculpt (YS), a weighted cardio yoga sequence. Studios also offer a beginner friendly CorePower Yoga 1 (C1) and a slower restorative Hot Power Fusion (HPF). Since 2018, CorePower Yoga On Demand has offered subscription based online yoga classes. Core class formats remain consistent with the studio experience. In addition to the standard 60-minute format, shorter 20- and 30-minute classes are also available. CorePower Yoga Retreats take place in several destinations throughout each year, including Costa Rica, Maui and Thailand. The retreats are open to all levels and are tailored to the specific group attending. Since 2017, CorePower Yoga has partnered with Yoga Foster to equip educators with yoga and mindfulness tools for the classroom. • Explanation of issue: Out of date information, more detail about products / services • References supporting change: https://www.corepoweryoga.com/yoga-fitness-classes https://www.corepoweryoga.com/yoga-teacher-training https://www.corepoweryoga.com/yoga-on-demand https://www.corepoweryoga.com/yoga-lifestyle-programs/yoga-retreats https://www.prnewswire.com/news-releases/corepower-yoga-partners-with-yoga-foster-to-bring-yoga-and-mindfulness-to-kids-across-the-country-300667514.html |
50.78.86.177 (talk) 21:43, 16 January 2020 (UTC)
Reply 17-JAN-2020
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Regards, Spintendo 12:59, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
- In addition, the Conflict of Interest remains, and the fact that the press releases cited do not constitute reliable independent sources. Chiswick Chap (talk) 15:34, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
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CorePower Yoga is the largest privately held chain of yoga studios in the United States.[1] The company is based in Denver, Colorado[2] and headed by Eric Kufel, the CEO.[3] Each yoga studio teaches the CorePower yoga style developed by founder Trevor Tice that combines power yoga, Ashtanga yoga, Vinyasa yoga, and Bikram yoga.[2][4] In April 2019, a class action lawsuit was filed against the company by more than 1,500 employees, alleging gross underpayment of wages -- the fourth such lawsuit against the company.[5]
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CorePower Yoga is the largest community of yoga studios in the US, operating more than 200 company owned studios in 30 U.S. cities.
• Explanation of issue: Unclear overview of CorePower Yoga’s offerings, out of date information
• References supporting change: https://www.nytimes.com/2019/04/06/style/corepower-yoga-teacher-training.html https://www.everydayhealth.com/columns/my-health-story/what-wish-knew-before-my-first-corepower-yoga-class/
50.78.86.177 (talk) 16:21, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
| Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented. Well part of this is acceptable, but there's no good reason to do any whitewashing, if there have been multiple class action lawsuits, that is a relevant fact for a neutral account (see WP:NPOV). |
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History Trevor Tice (died December 2016) founded CorePower Yoga in 2002.[1] Tice funded the first 20 studios with the proceeds from the sale of his previous company, Tech Partners International.[2] The company later received an additional investment of over $100 million from Catterton Partners. ColoradoBiz included the company on its list of top companies in 2011.[6] In 2012, CorePower Yoga generated $45.2 million in revenue.[2] The company was included on Chicago’s best of Chicago 2014 list.[7] CorePower Yoga was voted “Best Yoga Class in Minnesota” by CBS Minnesota viewers in January 2015.[8] It was also included on Well+Good’s “Best Yoga Studios” list.[9] By November 2016, the company had 160 studio locations throughout the United States.[10][11] Eric Kufel succeeded Amy Shecter as CEO of CorePower Yoga in January 2016.[3][12]
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History The first CorePower Yoga studio was opened in Denver in 2002 by founder Trevor Tice with Dave Porter, Brandon Cox, and Tim Johnson. Tice had experienced firsthand the transformative benefits of yoga and saw opportunity in an emerging yoga market to make what was then a fringe activity more approachable for the mainstream. His vision was to create a strong, supportive community where the life changing benefits of yoga were accessible to everyone. Tice served as Chief Executive Officer until 2014 when the company was purchased by private equity firm L Catterton. Following Tice’s death in 2016, his CEO successor, Eric Kufel, ran the daily operations of the company from 2017-2019. In 2019, CorePower Yoga was purchased by TSG Consumer Partners. In 2019, Niki Leondakis was appointed as CEO.
• Explanation of issue: Out of date, irrelevant and incorrect information
• References supporting change: https://www.journalmpls.com/news/2005/01/a-105-degree-winters-day/ https://profilemagazine.com/2014/corepower-yoga/ http://adage.com/article/cmo-interviews/corepower-yoga-stretches-resources-maximize-branding/237721/ http://www.inc.com/kimberly-weisul/best-industries-2015-yoga-and-pilates-businesses.html https://www.pehub.com/tsg-to-acquire-corepower-yoga-from-l-catterton/ https://www.corepoweryoga.com/content/our-team
50.78.86.177 (talk) 16:21, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
| Part of an edit requested by an editor with a conflict of interest has been implemented. Implemented in part; again the tone is way too promotional for Wikipedia. The outdated info has been removed. |
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Products and services CorePower Yoga offers a variety of heated and non-heated yoga class styles, including classes that utilize weights and other equipment to build strength. Studios provide occasional special classes and workshops, such as themed classes and arm balance and inversion workshops. The other classes offered are CorePower Yoga 1.5, CorePower Yoga 3, Hot Yoga and Core Restore.[13]
CorePower Yoga conducts Yoga Alliance certified 200-hour teacher training programs, yoga vacation retreats, and two-week boot camps.
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Products and services CorePower offers consistent class formats. Standard classes are 60 minutes, heated and sequenced Core class formats include CorePower Yoga 2 (C2), a heated power yoga flow and Yoga Sculpt (YS), a weighted cardio yoga sequence. Studios also offer a beginner friendly CorePower Yoga 1 (C1) and a slower restorative Hot Power Fusion (HPF).
Since 2018, CorePower Yoga On Demand has offered subscription based online yoga classes. Core class formats remain consistent with the studio experience. In addition to the standard 60-minute format, shorter 20- and 30-minute classes are also available.
CorePower Yoga Retreats take place in several destinations throughout each year, including Costa Rica, Maui and Thailand. The retreats are open to all levels and are tailored to the specific group attending.
Since 2017, CorePower Yoga has partnered with Yoga Foster to equip educators with yoga and mindfulness tools for the classroom.
• Explanation of issue: Out of date information, more detail about products / services
• References supporting change: www.corepoweryoga.com https://www.popsugar.com/fitness/CorePower-Yoga-Prices-2019-45925774 https://www.latimes.com/health/la-he-roundup-20180915-story.html https://www.self.com/story/ive-never-liked-yoga-so-i-went-on-a-retreat-and-it-totally-changed-my-mind https://www.forbes.com/sites/jeannecroteau/2018/08/20/how-corepower-is-bringing-yoga-and-mindful-leadership-to-classrooms/#3c212871210b
50.78.86.177 (talk) 16:21, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
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This is far too corporate and promotional in tone for Wikipedia. Even the current text is straying very close to that boundary, I shall cut it down now. Popsugar is not a suitable source; nor is self.com. Chiswick Chap (talk) 17:01, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
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[edit]Looks as though the entire "History" and "Products and Services" sections have been removed — was that the intent?Can I resubmit with a less corporate tone? Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.78.86.177 (talk) 19:20, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
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The first CorePower Yoga studio was opened in Denver in 2002 by founder Trevor Tice with Dave Porter, Brandon Cox, and Tim Johnson. Tice served as Chief Executive Officer until 2014 when the company was purchased by private equity firm L Catterton. Following Tice’s death in 2016, his CEO successor, Eric Kufel, ran the daily operations of the company from 2017-2019. In 2019, CorePower Yoga was purchased by TSG Consumer Partners. In 2019, Niki Leondakis was appointed as CEO.
• Explanation of issue: Out of date, irrelevant and incorrect information
• References supporting change: https://www.journalmpls.com/news/2005/01/a-105-degree-winters-day/ https://profilemagazine.com/2014/corepower-yoga/ http://adage.com/article/cmo-interviews/corepower-yoga-stretches-resources-maximize-branding/237721/ http://www.inc.com/kimberly-weisul/best-industries-2015-yoga-and-pilates-businesses.html https://www.pehub.com/tsg-to-acquire-corepower-yoga-from-l-catterton/ https://www.corepoweryoga.com/content/our-team — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.78.86.177 (talk) 19:30, 17 January 2020 (UTC)
- I'm not sure that this article meets WP:ORGCRIT, so I'm hesitant to add these claims. Regards, Spintendo 04:42, 18 January 2020 (UTC)
- Spintendo - which article are you referring to? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.78.86.177 (talk) 15:49, 20 January 2020 (UTC)
- The CorePower Yoga article. Spintendo 01:13, 3 February 2020 (UTC)
- Spintendo - which article are you referring to? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 50.78.86.177 (talk) 15:49, 20 January 2020 (UTC)
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Hello! I work for TURNER, representing CorePower Yoga. We have been trying to provide objective information about the company, its history and services/offerings, but our suggestions have been declined and the CorePower Wikipedia page has been cut down to the bare minimum, despite providing sources such as the LA Times, Forbes and Inc. Is there some guidance you can provide so that the CorePower Wikipedia page offers users a wider range of information? We're looking at the SoulCycle page as an example: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/SoulCycle. Thank you for your time! 50.78.86.177 (talk) 16:35, 20 January 2020 (UTC) Some proposed changes[edit]
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• Information to be added or removed: ADD History The first CorePower Yoga studio was opened in Denver in 2002 by founder Trevor Tice with Dave Porter, Brandon Cox, and Tim Johnson [SOURCE: https://journalmpls.com/news/2005/01/a-105-degree-winters-day/]. Tice served as Chief Executive Officer until 2014 when the company was purchased by private equity firm L Catterton [SOURCE: https://www.inc.com/kimberly-weisul/best-industries-2015-yoga-and-pilates-businesses.html]. Following Tice’s death in 2016, his CEO successor, Eric Kufel, ran the daily operations of the company from 2017-2019 [SOURCE: https://businessden.com/2016/01/15/new-ceo-takes-the-lead-at-corepower/]. In 2019, CorePower Yoga was purchased by TSG Consumer Partners [SOURCE: https://businessden.com/2019/03/14/corepower-yoga-has-a-new-owner/]. In 2019, Niki Leondakis was appointed as CEO. [SOURCE: https://www.corepoweryoga.com/content/our-team]. • Explanation of issue: The current page doesn’t include any information on the history of the company. • References supporting change: https://www.nytimes.com/2019/04/06/style/corepower-yoga-teacher-training.html https://businessden.com/2019/03/14/corepower-yoga-has-a-new-owner/ https://www.journalmpls.com/news/2005/01/a-105-degree-winters-day/ http://adage.com/article/cmo-interviews/corepower-yoga-stretches-resources-maximize-branding/237721/ http://www.inc.com/kimberly-weisul/best-industries-2015-yoga-and-pilates-businesses.html https://businessden.com/2016/01/15/new-ceo-takes-the-lead-at-corepower/ https://www.corepoweryoga.com/content/our-team
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• Information to be added or removed: ADD: Products and Services CorePower Yoga offers heated and non-heated yoga class styles, including classes that utilize weights and other equipment to build strength. [SOURCE: https://www.msn.com/en-ph/health/fitness/corepower-yoga-is-a-killer-workout-heres-what-to-know-before-your-first-class/ar-BBVkc7C] Since 2018, CorePower Yoga On Demand has offered subscription based online yoga classes. Core class formats remain consistent with the studio experience. In addition to the standard 60-minute format, shorter 20- and 30-minute classes are also available. [SOURCE: https://www.latimes.com/health/la-he-roundup-20180915-story.html] Since 2017, CorePower Yoga has partnered with Yoga Foster to equip educators with yoga and mindfulness tools for the classroom. [SOURCE: https://www.forbes.com/sites/jeannecroteau/2018/08/20/how-corepower-is-bringing-yoga-and-mindful-leadership-to-classrooms/#3c212871210b] • Explanation of issue: The current page doesn’t include any information about the company’s offerings. • References supporting change: https://www.msn.com/en-ph/health/fitness/corepower-yoga-is-a-killer-workout-heres-what-to-know-before-your-first-class/ar-BBVkc7C https://www.latimes.com/health/la-he-roundup-20180915-story.html https://www.forbes.com/sites/jeannecroteau/2018/08/20/how-corepower-is-bringing-yoga-and-mindful-leadership-to-classrooms/#3c212871210b |
50.78.86.177 (talk) 16:30, 30 January 2020 (UTC)
Wiki Education assignment: Online Communities
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This article is currently the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 September 2024 and 6 December 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Janekraaijvanger (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Olivechine, Carmencsd, Giselleflores16.
— Assignment last updated by ConorStudebaker (talk) 23:27, 25 October 2024 (UTC)
Evaluating article — Janekraaijvanger (talk)
[edit]- The article does seem neutral but it seems that there is more focus on the 2019 lawsuit than some of the main parts of the company
- A lot of missing key information about values, memberships, classes, and more
- Out of date, seems as though hasn't been updated since 2019
- Everything in current article is relevant but is lacking key relevancy topics
Evaluating sources:
- some of the sources are not full citations
- repetitive sources
- slightly out of date but are good
- come from a variety of publications
- overall there are only 5 sources tho
Talk page:
- lots of suggestions for changes and calling out misspelling Janekraaijvanger (talk) 22:01, 4 October 2024 (UTC)