Talk:Conversation Piece at the Royal Lodge, Windsor/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: APK (talk · contribs) 09:43, 27 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The infobox should have more details, including when it was completed, the artist, dimensions, etc.
Commas before and after "Princesses Elizabeth and Margaret" in the lead.
Add the abbreviation for the National Portrait Gallery in the background section, so it can be used in the following sections. Currently, sometimes it is, sometimes it isn't.
Royal Lodge should be linked the first time it's mentioned in the background section and unlinked in the description section.
Comma after "Margaret" in description section.
"It was designed by Jeffry Wyatville." The drawing room or the Royal Lodge?
"Second World War" should be linked.
Afternoon tea is linked twice.
"The Times" should be linked.
Add a comma after "boring"
"North Shore" should be linked.
"had lunch with Elizabeth" She's referred to as queen in the previous sentence, then just by her first name. I'd pick one or the other.
References should be archived.
Earwig's check looks fine. It's just reporting quotes.

It was a pleasure reading another one of your articles. APK hi :-) (talk) 09:43, 27 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good.

Done APK hi :-) (talk) 05:18, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@APK:, thank you so much! It looks in much better shape now. Right, I'm off to attend to the memorial chapel now. No Swan So Fine (talk) 10:33, 4 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]