Talk:Con Los Años Que Me Quedan/GA1

GA Review

Passed.

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:15, 16 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 09:15, 16 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

Crescent Moon Studios in Miami, Florida → Crescent Moon, Miami, Florida in the infobox
Pipe Emilio Estefan Jr. to Emilio Estefan
"It was written by" → "The song was written by"
Anglo release of the version is not sourced
"It was released as" → "The song was released as"
Add what critics praised about the song
"Commercially, it topped" → "Commercially, the song topped"
Mention the ceremony for Pop Song of the Year

Background and composition

First para looks good!
Remove comma before Emilio Estefan
Shouldn't you mention the instrumentation here per the sources used in reception?
"the lyrics, she chants:" → "the lyrics, Estefan chants:" and cut down the amount of this quoted per WP:OVERQUOTE
Ditto for the translation quote, however both should have punctuation inside quote marks per MOS:QUOTE

Critical reception and accolades

"filmic number", and the" → "filmic number" and the"
Remove wikilink and re-introduction on Mi Tierra
End the lovely melodies quote
Pipe ballads to Sentimental ballad
"called it "another" → "called the song "another" and re-invoke the ref for this sentence
Pipe acoustic to Acoustic music on the direct mention instead
"describe as a pop hit."" → "describe as a pop hit"." per MOS:QUOTE
"gave it three out of five," → "gave the song three out of five,"
Remove pipe on Latin
"and emotional shading."" → "and emotional shading"."
Last para looks good!

Promotion and commercial performance

"Its accompanying music video directed" → "An accompanying music video was directed"
Pipe Billboard Music Video Awards to Billboard Music Awards
"her fourteenth studio album Brazil305 (2020) and" → "Estefan's 14th studio album Brazil305 (2020), and" per MOS:NUM
Remove pipe on Billboard
"in the US," → "in the United States,"

Formats and track listings

Good

Charts

Good

Personnel

Make this section the one after track listings
Add a space before guitar

References

Copyvio score looks strong at 23.1%!!!
Pipe Epic to Epic Records on ref 1 instead of ref 21
Pipe Penguin Random House Group to Penguin Random House on ref 9
Ref 11 is missing an author and remove wikilink on AllMusic
Wikilink Telemetro on ref 26
WP:OVERLINK of AllMusic on ref 27

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 09:58, 16 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I will get to work on this from next week as I'm feeling burned out from Wikipedia. Erick (talk) 17:04, 18 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Kyle Peake Hey Kyle, thanks for your patience. I think I got everything. Erick (talk) 02:00, 24 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Magiciandude: It is good you appreciate that, however the comma needs to be removed before Emilio Estefan, use the surname Estefan at the chants part and pipe Epic to Epic Records on the first instance instead. --K. Peake 09:33, 24 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
@Magiciandude: The Epic link is still the wrong way around and you need to fix the parameter issue. --K. Peake 11:37, 24 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Argh, I can't believe I missed it again. Did I get it this time? Erick (talk) 20:26, 24 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]
✓ Pass now, you nailed the link at last! --K. Peake 07:37, 25 April 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.