Talk:Charlie Joiner
Charlie Joiner is currently a Football good article nominee. Nominated by Harper J. Cole (talk) at 12:50, 22 March 2024 (UTC) An editor has indicated a willingness to review the article in accordance with the good article criteria and will decide whether or not to list it as a good article. Comments are welcome from any editor who has not nominated or contributed significantly to this article. This review will be closed by the first reviewer. To add comments to this review, click discuss review and edit the page. Short description: American football player and coach (born 1947) |
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Nominator: Harper J. Cole (talk · contribs) 12:50, 22 March 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 23:23, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Spot checks:
- Zimmerman, Paul (October 8, 1984). "HE'S CATCHING UP TO THE CATCHING RECORD". Sports Illustrated
- The article says "the only child in a low income family" but I don't see low income in the ref?
- Distel, Dave (December 13, 1986). "Don't strike up band, just give Charlie Joiner a hand". Los Angeles Times
- The article says "Joiner was disappointed, but said that the younger receivers had practiced all week for the game and it would have been unfair to them if he had played" but I don't see that in the ref?
- Everything else for this ref looks good.
- Magee, Jerry (December 29, 1979). "Aging Charlie Joiner now a thinking man's receiver". Shreveport Times
- Articles says "Joiner struggled with post-surgery knee problems during the year" but I don't see surgery mentioned in the ref?
- Everything else for this ref looks good.
- Football's lopsided deal". Pomona Progress-Bulletin. United Press International. July 27, 1971
- Looks good.
- "Stewart, D.L. (July 19, 1973). "Bengals trade may prove OK". Dayton Journal Herald"
- Looks good.
- Dolan, Steve. "For Joiner, Career Had Thrills and a Regret : He Recalls Records, but Missed Super Bowl". Los Angeles Times.
- The article says "Joiner excelled despite neither being among the quickest nor most talented receivers in the NFL" but the ref is paywalled so could you tell me what the ref says in regards to that? Just wanted to double check because that is a significant claim.
- Ref 139 for the below says "broken anchor"?
- "In addition to good health and longevity, Joiner was an intelligent player and precise pass route runner"
- "Joiner". Los Angeles Times. November 14, 1984. p. III-8 – via newspapers.com.
- Looks good.
Comments:
- Add Category:Buffalo Bills coaches
- Add Category:Coaches of American football from Louisiana.
- "Joiner's parents couldn't afford to send him to college" change bolded part to "could not".
- "Joiner had a breakout sophomore year as a receiver; his teammates voted him the Tigers' Most Valuable Player (MVP) for the season." Do you know how many catches or touchdowns he had, etc.
- How many touchdowns did he have during his senior year or career. The only part of the college section that mentions touchdowns says he had two in his final game.
- "with the 93rd overall pick by the AFL's Houston Oilers" write out American Football League
- "4.5 in the 40" change to "4.5 seconds in the 40-yard dash"
- "Oilers in receiving with 16 receptions for 307 yards and 2 touchdowns" Leading in "receiving" is a little ambiguous. What categories was he leading them in?
- "Walsh, who had just joined the Chargers as their offensive coordinator" link offensive coordinator
- "Joiner was often double covered" unlink double covered. That is linked earlier.
- "enough to led all Chargers wide receivers" change led to lead
- "Ray Perkins became the Chargers' offensive coordinator in 1978, their third offensive coordinator in three years" unlink offensive coordinator
- "his former team the Oilers overcame key injuries to surprise" add commas as noted "his former team, the Oilers, overcame key injuries to surprise"
- "his former team the Oilers overcame key injuries to surprise San Diego 17–14 in their own stadium" Whose stadium, Houston or San Diego?
- "44–7 win over the New York Giants" New York Giants is already linked earlier.
- "penultimate play of the game set up" change bolded part to "game to set up"
- "game-winning 29-yard field goal" link field goal.
- "During the offseason Joiner intimated" comma after offseason?
- "kind of looking forward to camp" I see training camp is linked here but there is a specific article just for NFL training camp (Training camp (NFL)).
- "hadn't thrown the record-breaking pass" had not
- "He would turn 39 during the course" change to "He turned 39 during the course"
- "saying that the Joiner's streak and potential last home game didn't cross his mind" change to "saying that Joiner's streak and potential last home game did not cross his mind"
- "He joined the Marv Levy's Buffalo Bills" remove the
- for final stint working with their receivers" change to "for his final stint working with their receivers"
- His second-team All-Pro selection should go in the honors section too.
- "Charles B. Joiner Jr." needs a reference but references don't go in the lead so his full name should be cited in the first sentence of the early life section.
- In lead: "with over half his catches coming after his 32nd birthday" I don't see that in the body?
- It looks like a lot of the newspapers and publishers in the references section could be linked.
- I'm not sure if Air Coryell should actually be italicized? Its own article isn't in italics.
- "He scored two touchdowns in his final college game" link touchdowns
- "was the Tigers' primary quarterback" link quarterback
- I think the article should say how the Oilers were absorbed into the NFL in 1970.
Amazing research. Great article! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 23:23, 4 November 2024 (UTC)
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