Talk:Charles Lappenbusch

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A fact from Charles Lappenbusch appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 13 March 2023 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that lectures given by Charles Lappenbusch were described as "so complicated that those in attendance often didn't know whether to take notes or laugh"?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2023/March. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Charles Lappenbusch.

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Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 19:06, 3 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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... that lectures given by Charles Lappenbusch were described as "so complicated that those in attendance often didn't know whether to take notes or laugh"? Source: Keeker, Korey (May 10, 1999). "Lappenbusch's students walked a Straight Line". The Bellingham Herald. p. 14 – via Newspapers.com.
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Zenni Optical

Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Self-nominated at 16:10, 28 February 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/Charles Lappenbusch; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.[reply]

I'll take a look at reviewing this. — Red-tailed hawk _(nest) 00:03, 1 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: - Not done
Overall: All we are awaiting is a QPQ. After that, we're good to go. — Red-tailed hawk _(nest) 03:20, 1 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Red-tailed hawk: Reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Zenni Optical as a QPQ. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:19, 1 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Seeing that a QPQ has been added, we're

good to go! — Red-tailed hawk _(nest) 15:20, 1 March 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

Passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:37, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

This review is transcluded from Talk:Charles Lappenbusch/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Gonzo fan2007 (talk · contribs) 22:12, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

Delete for a time, too colloquial
at which he served , you use "in which" later in the lead, which sounds better to me
for 20 seasons, and was their all-time wins comma not needed

Early life and education

Link pre-medical.

Coaching career

Lappenbusch was hired by the school as assistant line coach in 1931., not immediately apparent to the layman that this is referencing American football
mass produced should have a dash in it
of the day including Frank Leahy of Notre Dame. comma before including

Personal life and death

I'm not sure the first 2 sentences are encyclopedic. Anyway to merge them or summarize them in a more encyclopedia way? The way the yare written almost seem like "fun facts"
- I deleted the second sentence. I slightly reworded the first one - I kind of like it, but I can remove it if you want.
  - This is fine. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:16, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Works

No comments

Head coaching record

Could you distinguish that it is football without using a section header? Typically we don't have a single sub-header like this.
- As for as I'm aware that's how its done for college coaches of multiple sports, but I could change it to perhaps "Head football coaching record" if you'd like.
  - I think that makes sense since there are no other records in that section, just football. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:16, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
    - Done. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:18, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Add the text "Source:" before Ref #14
- I'm sorry, I'm not exactly understanding what you're asking me to do - could you elaborate? I'm not exactly sure adding "Source:" after and died in September 1996 in Enumclaw, Washington would make sense.
  - I fixed it. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:16, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

References

Spot check:
- 1. 3 looks good.
  2. 4 looks good.
  3. 8 looks good.
  4. 11 looks good.
  5. 12 looks good

Images

Image is non-free but appears appropriate.

Looks good, putting on hold. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 22:12, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@Gonzo fan2007: I've either fixed or replied to each of your points. BeanieFan11 (talk) 01:00, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
- Nice work, passed. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 02:35, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.