Talk:Cephalic Carnage/GA1
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GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- "The band dubbed their style 'Rocky Mountain hydro-grind'. Cephalic Carnage is also known for its humorous songs." Why not, "The band, which dubbed their style 'Rocky Mountain hydro-grind', is also known for its humorous songs." ? "Rocky Mountain hydro-grind" 'sounds humorous,' and fits with the next sentence.--Cannibaloki 18:36, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- The section Exploiting Dysfunction and Lucid Interval (2000–2004) is very short, need to be expanded.--Cannibaloki 18:36, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- This article don't have images.--Cannibaloki 18:36, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Expand that section and I'll see.--Cannibaloki 18:36, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
- Pass or Fail:
I expanded that section a bit, but I don't have sufficient sources that provide more information. The early history of the band has not been documented in detail. So I fused the first 2 subsections into 1. I think it is ok.
I did search in Flickr, but all the pictures over there are copyrighted. There is not much I can do about this. However, GA criteria do not require images if there are no available. So this should not be problem.
I hope this is satisfactory :) -- LYKANTROP ✉ 09:33, 21 July 2009 (UTC)
- Hmm, okay. Passed.--Cannibaloki 16:10, 21 July 2009 (UTC)