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Spinning out new articles to reduce clutter
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Since both CorrectKnowledge and Mrt3366 have suggested that Caste in Europe article should be created. I am proposing that we: 1) create Caste in Europe as a parent article for the very long Europe section (and then reduce the section drastically), 2) create Caste in East Asia as a parent article for the very long East Asia section, and reduce that too drastically 3) (Since the Africa section is longer than its parent article, Caste system in Africa) drastically reduce the Africa section on the same scale that the India section has been reduced from its parent article, Caste system in India, 4) move India to its own section (it being the most important ethnographic example) and not list it under South Asia, and 5) expand the India section. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 05:21, 5 September 2012 (UTC)
CorrectKnowledge - This article can certainly be improved, by addressing some of your cogent suggestions about weight and balance. On my to-do list has been to move some stuff from Africa here to the main article and leave a NPOV summary here. I agree with you that caste in Africa section here is incomplete, work-in-progress; that main article Caste system in Africa is very weak on its own. Here are couple of points to keep in mind:
When I consider these points, and note that many countries in Europe etc. have a small summary like section here, I do not see the merit of spinning off caste in Europe etc. What is the rationale of having a main article and summary for each country sections here which are similar? If other wiki contributors or you have persuasive ideas, time and willingness to do this, within wiki's guidelines above, I welcome and enthusiastically support the effort. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 13:52, 5 September 2012 (UTC)
I am fine with above suggestions from Mrt3366 and CorrectKnowledge. I will try my best to constructively comment so that the spin-off articles and summaries here reflect reliable secondary sources in a manner that as best as possible reflects the balance of those sources. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 12:11, 7 September 2012 (UTC)
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China
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There are a lot of problems with the Chinese section. The most blatant are the following:
The entire section needs to be rewritten, with more reliable sources. I plan to do so soon.--Ninthabout (talk) 10:41, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
@Mrt3366. Very well then. Some sources and excerpts to begin a discussion with:
I'd also like to point out that the source cited for labeling imperial Chinese society as a caste, Chinese Outcasts: Discrimination and Emancipation in Late Imperial China, is completely misrepresented. The source never actually uses the term describe Chinese social stratification, and labeling it so on Wikipedia is WP:OR. In fact, the source states that "the complex Indian caste system is sui generis and no equivalent can be found in other cultures." (p. 10) Describing the classes of the Ming and Qing dynasties, the author writes that "upward mobility into the elite was theoretically possible for virtually all male commoners," (p. 30) which is not a characteristic of a caste.--Ninthabout (talk) 13:06, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
All of the above is irrelevant until the RfC closes. - Sitush (talk) 15:49, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
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Specific suggestions to improve this article
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The recent discussion suggests this article, along with linked main articles, needs rework. Some sections additionally need better support, or possibly revised/removed, to address WP:NOR concerns. Sections with links to main independent articles need to be appropriately summarized, and comply with WP:SS and WP:SYNC. This section seeks to focus the discussion to improving this article. It is separated by sub-sections. This upper section is to help reach consensus on layout and other general matters. The specific sub-sections below aim to help improve the respective section of the Caste article and reach consensus on content/links therein. Comments are welcome. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 23:22, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
Suggestions for LeadInstead of picking one side or other, I suggest we include the following in the lead Caste is an age-old socio-cultural phenomena that has evolved through centuries and is generally described as any group of people that combine endogamy, hereditary transmission of occupation, and status in a hierarchy.[1][2]3] Caste is considered a closed form of social stratification.[4] There are two broad schools of thought on caste: (1) that caste system is best defined in terms of its Hindu attributes and rationale and, therefore, is unique to India in particular, and south Asia in general; (2) that caste system is best defined broadly and has existed and is found in a number of other societies as well.[5] Those who hold the second view describe caste or caste-like societies in such widely scattered areas as the South Asia, southeast Asia, east Asia, Polynesia, Arabian Peninsula, north Africa, east Africa, southern Africa, the Americas, and Europe.[6][7][8] The word caste is sometimes used to refer to any rigid system of social stratification, segregation or distinctions.[9][10] ApostleVonColorado (talk) 23:22, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
By the way, the idea of two broad schools of thought is itself dated. The mostly Berreman-led American school has long retired (and, in many cases, long of happy memory). Ever heard of a recent structural-functional Ph. D. thesis? For someone who is insistent on the very latest World Bank figures, I'm surprised you are giving star billing to Berreman (1968). Btw, if you want a description of the structural-functional vs. symbolic school debate, you are better off reading Charles Lindholm's article (reference number 26 in my list, from 1998, I believe) than one throwaway line in Madan's essay written for Britannica's major revision of 1979. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:59, 11 September 2012 (UTC)
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WikiProjects
Per guidelines, WikiProjects should be informed of the RfC. This article makes some rather skewed claims about societies outside of South Asia, so it's only fair that editors familiar with regions outside of South Asia are brought here to provide a wider range of outside opinions. I wouldn't have realized the article was like this, as an editor with no interest in articles on South Asia, had I not accidentally stumbled onto it while browsing.--Ninthabout (talk) 16:44, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
- I did post on WT:INDIA and the RfC itself informed the History and Social-something-or-other projects. But you are right. Other projects need to be informed. Do you have any ideas? Should the England, China, Korea, Poland, etc projects should be informed? Part of the reason why this article is warped and stuffed with OR is that it lies neglected. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 16:55, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
- Please feel free to post on other projects. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 16:57, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
- Per guideline, editors from the Irish, German, French, Polish, Italian, British, and Korean WikiProjects have been notified.--Ninthabout (talk) 14:52, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks, Ninthabout. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 15:29, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Per guideline, editors from the Irish, German, French, Polish, Italian, British, and Korean WikiProjects have been notified.--Ninthabout (talk) 14:52, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Please feel free to post on other projects. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 16:57, 12 September 2012 (UTC)
Fowler&fowler's 30 tertiary sources published within the last 25 years on the subject of "caste" and of the centrality of India, especially Hindu India, in it
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Wikipedia uses secondary sources for details, but tertiary sources for determining emphasis within an article.
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Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:24, 4 September 2012 (UTC)
Not B-class
This article seems closer to C-class than B-class. Quick fail criteria: a number of unreferenced paragraphs, outstanding citation needed/verification tags, ongoing discussion about neutrality. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:13, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- Agreed. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 17:31, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- I agree. Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 14:01, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
Castes outside India
I definitely think this article has some major issues, and most certainly a lot of sections about castes outside India are pure UNDUE/FRINGE lunacy. Coming from WikiProject Poland and WikiProject Sociology, and speaking with two hats on (as a Pole and as a professional sociologist), Caste#Poland is simply idiotic. That a few people used the word caste does not make it correct (UNDUE/FRINGE). I am not familiar with any serious scholar, or any serious body of work, which supports the idea that Poland has/had a caste. The correct term is social class. That's why we have the article on Aristocracy (class) there and not at Aristocracy (caste). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 18:06, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Piotrus, Could you please move this (or at least copy it) to a proper Comment in the RfC. It will be easier that way, when the time comes, for the closing administrator to evaluate where the spectrum of opinion lies. Thanks. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:40, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Frankly, I don't have time to analyze the intricacies of this RfC at this point, I however grant you or any other editor permission to copy my statement (just post a diff in reply here or at my talk page). Or if you want to be more clear what part of this RfC I should post in, link it and I'll consider it. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 20:26, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks, Piotrus. Please see this, starting page 59. It is a chapter titled Caste. The focus is entirely Poland. The author is Aleksander Hertz, a sociologist.
- Of course, we should not rely on one scholar for FRINGE reasons. We must strive to check for more support. On caste and Poland, Hertz is not alone. As another example, see Celia Stopnicka Heller, another sociologist whose book On the Edge of Destruction: Jews in Poland Between the Two World Wars has been widely cited. See page 58 onwards of this book. Celia Heller discusses Max Weber's concept of caste, then discusses caste in Poland. Beyond Hertz's publications and Heller's publications, there are many more.
- Verifiability not truth is our content guideline. If content is verifiable and widely discussed, it belongs here. I agree with your comments on Aristocracy etc.; the section needs to be rewritten for balance and due. But, I am not convinced how works by sociologists such as Hertz, Heller, etc. are fringe or undue? If you have evidence that these independent sociologists are unacceptable, or that they are a minority, please provide relevant evidence that can be verified. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 19:09, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- You, AVC, are not in a position to evaluate the weight of opinion in the literature by citing one, two or three sources. That needs to be acknowledged in the tertiary literature. Do you have some (not just one) recent tertiary sources (published in the last 25 years) that mention the Caste system in Poland in their article on "Caste." That is the proper benchmark for such evaluation. Otherwise, why can't we also have sections on the "caste system in baseball?" There are many more books written on that, or on the "caste system in cricket?," which too has received significant coverage in the literature? Fowler&fowler«Talk» 20:15, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Some good points. I am pretty sure there is no such thing as "caste system in Poland". I see three hits on Google books using this term, all referring to the Polish Jews. As I noted below, this theory is probably notable (perhaps even deserves its own article), but a) majority of scholars of Poland don't see it as a country which had or has castes and 2) even those who argue otherwise (and who are in a very small minority) agree there was only one caste in Poland (Jews). To imply otherwise is quite misleading, and we should avoid this. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 20:29, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks for pointing to those two works, I looked at them briefly. They make an interesting point (I also found a review of Hertt'z book here, but I cannot make much of it due to snippet view only). Same for [10], which may be another Polish work discussing Polish Jews as a caste. Aleksander Hertz in particular seems to be big proponent of the "Polish Jews as a caste" theory. In fact, I think his argument is somewhat convincing; however we again run into undue or fringe. Even if we have another reliable scholar using this term (Celia Stopnicka Heller), they are, as far as I know, in minority. I would like to see more reviews of their work and learn what others have wrote in reply to them, but I am pretty sure that his theory is at best just gaining acceptance - and I certainly don't have any sources to back this optimistic statement. With regards to the current section Poland, my recommendations are as follows: 1) remove quote attributed to Francis W. Palmer (I guess?). 19th century controversial claims fails reliability. 2) Remove Lenin claim (for similar reasons), replace it with a sentence saying that Aleksander Hertz and Celia Stopnicka Heller (explain who they are) made arguments that Polish Jews should be seen as a caste. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 20:26, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks Piotrus. I have read a number of reviews for these books, one in a peer reviewed journal. Yes, I agree that the section needs to be rewritten. Here is Heller (it is not about baseball or cricket or non-sociological stuff; I skip her citations which she includes in her book):
- Caste, as defined by Max Weber, is a closed status group. The Jews of Poland were such a group - closed and shared status of compelling inferiority. Their caste status, which emerged in the middle ages and continued....(skipped to save space)
- Here is Aleksander Hertz (again it is all sociology, I am quoting parts to save space):
- Throughout their centuries in Poland, until their destruction, the Jews formed a caste.....
- This was not the only caste in Polish society. However, no other group - except the Gypsies - had such characteristic and conspicuous caste features as the Jews....
- The caste system is not confined to such social systems as that of the Indians or the ancient Egyptians. In one form or another it emerges in various systems, in various civilizations, countries and epochs.
- I have seen peer reviewed journal articles on Jewish/Roma people as caste or caste-like and Poland/Eastern Europe (see one example here). I agree, we should revise the section with content that is balanced, due and properly cited. I agree the Palmer quote should be taken out. Do you mind if I move your section as one of the comments in the RfC section above? ApostleVonColorado (talk) 21:14, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Perhaps the best thing would be to transclude the section there by adding it under a new heading and then noting that the discussion is here through a redirect? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 21:58, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- ApostlevonColorado, You need to clearly understand the difference between due weight and original research. Using some academic sources that discuss "caste" in Poland might be used as an argument against OR. However, Caste is a core topic, featured in English language encyclopedias, references, and university textbooks, for over 150 years. If the overwhelming majority of modern tertiary sources on "Caste" do not mention Poland, then we cannot have a section on Poland in this encyclopedia's article on Caste. It simply means, that while there may be some literature on "caste" in Poland, the concept of "Caste in Poland," has not been deemed notable enough to receive coverage in the scholarly tertiary sources' article on "Caste." You may attempt to add that section to Society of Poland, provided it has due weight there, but not here in any significant fashion. A note could be added at the end that states something like, "Caste-systems (or systems akin to caste) are found in Poland. See ....." I am asking you again, do you have some modern scholarly tertiary sources, published in the last 25 years, that discuss the caste system in Poland. If so, please cite them here. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 21:36, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- I think this article (caste) should discuss more than just India, but it is probably not necessary to have a section on Poland (and many other countries). With regards to Jews, I would expect that the cited literature could be situated within a larger body of work on Jews in Europe (if not more general) as a caste. Such a section could be encyclopedic. Alternatively, we could try to have sections on castes in Europe and so on, and within it, a paragraph on Poland (I still think that Jewish caste in Poland could be a notable article on its own). In either case, our text should make it clear that that the Jewish caste in Poland is an idea that is not universally recognized (but I do agree it is notable enough to be discussed somewhere in this project in more detail, and likely, deserves a passing mention - but not necessarily a section - here, in the caste article). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 21:58, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks Piotrus. I have read a number of reviews for these books, one in a peer reviewed journal. Yes, I agree that the section needs to be rewritten. Here is Heller (it is not about baseball or cricket or non-sociological stuff; I skip her citations which she includes in her book):
- You, AVC, are not in a position to evaluate the weight of opinion in the literature by citing one, two or three sources. That needs to be acknowledged in the tertiary literature. Do you have some (not just one) recent tertiary sources (published in the last 25 years) that mention the Caste system in Poland in their article on "Caste." That is the proper benchmark for such evaluation. Otherwise, why can't we also have sections on the "caste system in baseball?" There are many more books written on that, or on the "caste system in cricket?," which too has received significant coverage in the literature? Fowler&fowler«Talk» 20:15, 13 September 2012 (UTC)
As I say in a comment section upstairs, the article on Caste in Leonard, Thomas M. (2006), Encyclopedia of the Developing World, Taylor & Francis, p. 255, ISBN 978-0-415-97662-6 (please click on this link), published in 2006, could be used as a model. Accordingly, I propose that this article should devote 25% to definitions and review of literature; 40% to India; 10% to other countries in South Asia; and 25% to countries outside South Asia. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 11:45, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
- Seeing that this article is also about the concept of Caste, and agreeing with AVS's comments somewhere upstairs) that this article needn't be a clone of other articles, I could go along with: 30% to definitions, historiography, and review of literature (from Marx and Weber to Dumont to the Post-Colonialists.); 30% to Hindu India; 10% to non-Hindu India and rest of South Asia; 30% to cultures and countries outside South Asia. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 13:08, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
- I'd cut half of the coverage of outside India and replace it with more on the social (sociological) aspects (would partially fall under expanded literature review). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:09, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- Piotrus - I like your idea: Jewish caste in Poland could be a notable article on its own. If you want to start it, I will help along. We can link that as the main article to a summary here. Here are two additional reviews of Hertz articles: review 1 and review 2. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 17:29, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- Piotrus - On ideas to improve and rewrite this article, I had started a discussion section after RfC was opened, elsewhere on this talk page. See this. But, the discussion was stopped, and held off while the RfC is open based on comments in there. If you disagree with Fowler&fowler or Sitush there on procedure, I will appreciate your comments there. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 18:00, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- @AVC, That discussion is closed and collapsed. This discussion is open only because it the same as Piotrus's statement. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:14, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- @Piotrus: So (if one interprets "hut" to be a typo, and assumes you mean "half"), are you suggesting that 45% should be devoted to Caste (sociological and anthropological concept) and Review of literature, 30% to Hindu India, 10% to non-Hindu India and non-India South Asia, and 15% to Caste outside South Asia? I am happy to go along with this as well. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:38, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- With the disclaimer that I have not read much of the RfC and other's views, which also means I think my opinion is fairly neutral - yes, this is the structure I'd propose for this article. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:52, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- Piotrus - On ideas to improve and rewrite this article, I had started a discussion section after RfC was opened, elsewhere on this talk page. See this. But, the discussion was stopped, and held off while the RfC is open based on comments in there. If you disagree with Fowler&fowler or Sitush there on procedure, I will appreciate your comments there. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 18:00, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- Piotrus - I like your idea: Jewish caste in Poland could be a notable article on its own. If you want to start it, I will help along. We can link that as the main article to a summary here. Here are two additional reviews of Hertz articles: review 1 and review 2. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 17:29, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
- I'd cut half of the coverage of outside India and replace it with more on the social (sociological) aspects (would partially fall under expanded literature review). --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:09, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
A proposal based on Piotrus's proposal
In light of Piotrus's proposal above, I am offering some page statistics and amending his proposal to the one below. (Piotrus, author of 7 FAs and one of Wikipedia's most prolific contributors since 2004, is a professional sociologist.) (Updated: In light of user:Ratnakar.kulkarni's comment below, I have decided to keep Piotrus's original proposal above, in conjunction with Wikipedia article size guidelines. See Second proposal below. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 15:00, 18 September 2012 (UTC) )
- Analysis
The current article, Caste, has a readable prose size of 9,443 words. (Readable prose size means actual prose within the paragraphs and does not include prose in tables, bulleted text, infoboxes, photo captions, references etc.) Of the 9,443 words in Caste, the Lead + etymology and two abstract sections at the end constitute 1,160 words; India, 478 words; rest of South Asia, 365 words; caste outside South Asia, 7,444 words: of this, caste in East Asia has 2,260 words, caste in Africa has 1,163 words, caste in Europe has 2,877 words.
Contrasting this with other major related articles, we find: the FA India has 8,091 words of readable prose, Sociology has 7,759 words of readable prose, Anthropology has 6,735 words, Social Science has 5,445 words. Among subject topics in Sociology and Anthropology, Social class has 2,039 words, Social mobility has 4,900 words, Social stratification has 1,667 words, Cultural anthropology has 1,785 words, Social anthropology has 1,190 words, Ethnography has 2,730 words, Kinship has 3,733 words, Social group has 2,401 words
- Proposal
- The entire article should have a readable prose size of no more than 5,000 words (ie. approximately half the current size). This is in well in keeping with other Sociology and Anthropology topics, such as Social mobility. Of this,
- Definitions, concepts, review of literature, should constitute (40%) or 2,000 words.
- Hindu India should constitute 30% or 1,500 words (note this is 1/6 the prose size of the spinout article Caste system in India which has 8,462 words, but has issues of its own.)
- non-Hindu India and extra-India South Asia should constitute 10% or 500 words
- Caste outside South Asia should constitute 20% or 1000 words
- We end the RfC and move towards rewriting the article:
- user:ApostleVonColorado should rewrite 3. and 4. (non-Hindu India and rest of South Asia; and Outside South Asia) a total of 1,500 words. AVC, has experience in writing Wikipedia articles on socio-economic indices, poverty, and nutrition.
- user:Sitush should write 2. (Caste system in Hindu India, a total of 1,500 words) Sitush has vast experience in the myriad India-related caste articles and is principal author of the FA James Tod, the first British author on the Indian Caste system.
- I, user:Fowler&fowler write 1. (Definitions, historiography, Review of literature, a total of 2,000 words). I have experience in writing FAs (Political history of Mysore and Coorg (1565–1760) (which, for example, has a historiography section; India (History, Geography, Biodiversity), and soon to be FAs (Mandell Creighton and Company rule in India.
- The others taking part in the RfC (in particular those such as user:Ninthabout, user:CorrectKnowledge, user:Ratnakar.kulkarni, who have contributed significantly, help the three editors above by offering critical insights, sources, writing, etc.
- That these various editors work on their different sections for the next six weeks, and then have user:Piotrus weigh in on 1 November 2012.
- This I believe is the best and the least disruptive option; otherwise, we risk debating this endlessly and accomplishing nothing. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 20:38, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- I suggest we hold off on this. Not because I do not like parts of your proposal Fowler&fowler or your initiative, but because there is a major unresolved issue on spin-off articles and wikipedia guideline on how main article must be summarized. I plan to include this statistical and "due weight" analysis in my reply to the RfC. I will show that, per wikipedia guidelines, the majority of encyclopedic article on caste, which is sum total of 'caste articles that are linked and sub-linked per wiki spin-off guidelines' is already on India. It is already far more than what Piotrus and others have suggested.
- @Piotrus - We have an independent main article on Caste system in India, which is linked to this article, Caste. The situation is similar to the articles you wrote. For example, consider your article on Max Weber; that article links to the main article The Protestant Ethic and the Spirit of Capitalism, The Religion of India: The Sociology of Hinduism and Buddhism and others. A short summary of the linked articles are provided in Max Weber article. I see no persuasive need to copy heavily from The Protestant Ethic and the Spirit of Capitalism, or The Religion of India: The Sociology of Hinduism and Buddhism, or The Religion of China: Confucianism and Taoism, or others into the Max Weber article. Shouldn't this family of articles be structured in a way similar to the way you have structured Max Weber and other articles?
- ApostleVonColorado (talk) 21:13, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- The Caste system in India article (also mainly contributed by AVC) has more issues than this article. That too will need to be rewritten. However, like many flagship articles, such as India, which too had problematic spinouts, the summary section here, "Caste in India," will need to be independently written (based on scholarly secondary sources and guided by scholarly tertiaries) and the problematic spinout, Caste system in India, then rewritten/expanded based on the summary sections. That happens all the time on Wikipedia. Otherwise, we risk being here until the end of the world (which I'm told is happening in December 2012). Fowler&fowler«Talk» 21:23, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- As for Max Weber, the essay The Protestant Ethic and the Spirit of Capitalism later published as a book, is one of the dozen themes in Weber's life. Tertiary articles on Weber don't devote 75% to 100% of their content on that book. In terms of numbers; Max Weber has a readable prose size of 7,906 words; of these 521 words are devoted to "Protestant Ethic" section (which is summarized from The Protestant Ethic and the Spirit of Capitalism, a page of size 2,288 words; in other words, we have a reduction to 23%. Caste system in India, on the other hand, has 8,420 words. In keeping with Weber, 23% of that is: 1,936 words. However, this article only devotes 478 words to "India." We are only asking for 1,500 words in the proposal! Fowler&fowler«Talk» 21:47, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- Compare, for example, how even concise tertiaries treat caste vs. Weber. Here is the Concise Dictionary of Social and Cultural Anthropology (which takes a point of view more sympathetic to the comparative method).
Now see the same source's entry on Weber:caste. The hereditary and hierarchical (see HIERARCHY) division of SOCIETY in (usually) India, associated there with HINDUISM. Members of a caste share the same profession and STATUS and traditionally avoid physical con-tact with members of other castes. Subdivisions of castes ("jatis") are linked to particular obligations and rights (the "jaimani" system). Anthropologists disagree on whether caste should he read in ways similar to SOCIAL structures outside India or as something unique. The nature of jajmani conventions has also been disputed. The word "caste" derives from Spanish and Portuguese, casta (" race" ). Further reading: Dumont (1980); BeteilIc (1996).
But you get the idea: compare the weight given to India in the first and to "Protestant Ethic" in the second. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 22:09, 17 September 2012 (UTC)Weber, Max (1864-1920). German sociologist, born Erfaut, Thuringia. Weber studied law at Heidelberg, Berlin, and (Gottingen, gaining a doctorate in 1889. He became professor of political economy at Freiburg in 1894, soon moving to Heidelberg. He had a breakdown and was unable to teach from 1898. He traveled, wrote, and lectured, and co-founded the German Society for Sociology (1909). From 1919 he taught in Munich. Much of Weber's work was published after his death: key texts include Die protes-tantische Etbik und der "Geist" des Kapitalismus (1904; The Protestant ethic, 2009), Konfiizianismus told Taoismus (1920; The religion of China, 19.i I), Theory of social and economic organization (tr. Henderson & Parsons, 1947; originally part one of Wirtscbaft und Gesellschaft, 1921), and Gerth and Mills collection Front Max Weber (2009 [19461). Crucial ideas developed by Weber include AUTHORITY. CHARISMA, the PuonsTANT (WORK) ETHIC, the IDEAL TYPE., and RoulmizATIoN. See also CAPITALISM, CLASS, CONFUCIANISM, DAOISM, FEUDALISM, POWER, PROPHECY, STA MS, vt:RsTEIIEN. Further reading: kasler (1988)." (Sorry about the last few sentences; the scanned image is blurry and my character reader is choking.)
- Compare, for example, how even concise tertiaries treat caste vs. Weber. Here is the Concise Dictionary of Social and Cultural Anthropology (which takes a point of view more sympathetic to the comparative method).
- As for Max Weber, the essay The Protestant Ethic and the Spirit of Capitalism later published as a book, is one of the dozen themes in Weber's life. Tertiary articles on Weber don't devote 75% to 100% of their content on that book. In terms of numbers; Max Weber has a readable prose size of 7,906 words; of these 521 words are devoted to "Protestant Ethic" section (which is summarized from The Protestant Ethic and the Spirit of Capitalism, a page of size 2,288 words; in other words, we have a reduction to 23%. Caste system in India, on the other hand, has 8,420 words. In keeping with Weber, 23% of that is: 1,936 words. However, this article only devotes 478 words to "India." We are only asking for 1,500 words in the proposal! Fowler&fowler«Talk» 21:47, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- The Caste system in India article (also mainly contributed by AVC) has more issues than this article. That too will need to be rewritten. However, like many flagship articles, such as India, which too had problematic spinouts, the summary section here, "Caste in India," will need to be independently written (based on scholarly secondary sources and guided by scholarly tertiaries) and the problematic spinout, Caste system in India, then rewritten/expanded based on the summary sections. That happens all the time on Wikipedia. Otherwise, we risk being here until the end of the world (which I'm told is happening in December 2012). Fowler&fowler«Talk» 21:23, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
Not quite. But allow me to reflect on your suggestions.
On one point, we agree; long before you got involved with this, I expressed the same concern: that Caste system in India article is not in good shape. The early 2012 version had major sections without any citation and tags galore plus lots of vandalism, that was before I made my first edit; yet, let us give credit where it is due: the significant majority of that article's structure and content is by a combination of many wiki contributors, not me. Sitush on 21 March 2012 wrote this on its talk page, for the version before I started contributing to, 'I know that the version of some months ago was very poor... [...]' Both Sitush and I agreed, back in July 2012, the Caste system in India article needs lots of work. A good article there will help improve this article.
I do not think it is prudent to set any limits for each part. The best course is to use as many words as necessary and sufficient to summarize the main article in a balanced, NPOV and complete manner. The summary of that linked main article should be summarized here properly, and not copied in large parts here. If main article for some encyclopedic aspect or section is missing, but notable and important, it should be written in as many words as necessary and sufficient to summarize that aspect - if it gets too big, it too should be spun off. The DUE versus UNDUE is best defined by weighing verifiable and reliable published sources out there. Our goal should be to summarize quality notable information and significant encyclopedic aspects of a subject from reliable published sources. Our goal should not be agenda or advocacy articles that focus on: 'highlight the social ills of this or that country; or, hide the social ills of this or that country.'
There is no rush or deadline on wikipedia. Let us wait for what Piotrus and others have to say about summary and linked main articles.
ApostleVonColorado (talk) 22:22, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- I'm afraid limits are very important. They indicate weight assigned to a particular section or idea. The article will need to be similar in size to other "Social structures" articles, such as Social class (2,039 words), Social mobility (4,900 words), Social stratification (1,667 words). Those clearly have no more than 5,000 words. The "caste outside South Asia" sections in this article will need to be very drastically reduced from the current 7,444 words to no more than 1,000 words. Otherwise, the content-related bias in this article will continue unabated. Wikipedia is not an indiscriminate collection of information. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 22:49, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
- I just checked, until user:ApostleVonColorado edited this article, it had a readable prose size of 5,155 words, more in keeping with what is mentioned in the proposal, (see here the version that existed before AVC made his first edit on 9 February 2012); of this, 3,200 words were devoted to the India section. Furthermore, there was no section on "Caste in Europe." (Only East Asia, West Asia, Africa, and Latin America were mentioned.) AVC single-handedly doubled the size of the article by reducing India to 478 words and increasing "Caste outside South Asia" to 7,444 words. The major issues of bias we are dealing with in this RfC is the work of one single editor. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:25, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- PS Here is a brief history of the article: Version of February 2010 (4,942 words), Version of Feb 2011 (4,744 words), Version of 8 Feb 2012 before AVC's first edit (5,155 words), Current article as a result of 224 edits by AVC (9,443 words). Furthermore, AVC has not only single-handedly doubled the article size, he has, since his first edit repeatedly removed other editors contributions (see article history). Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:56, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- You do realize that the three social articles you cite are start/C class and in need of much expansion, do you? --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:20, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- I just checked, until user:ApostleVonColorado edited this article, it had a readable prose size of 5,155 words, more in keeping with what is mentioned in the proposal, (see here the version that existed before AVC made his first edit on 9 February 2012); of this, 3,200 words were devoted to the India section. Furthermore, there was no section on "Caste in Europe." (Only East Asia, West Asia, Africa, and Latin America were mentioned.) AVC single-handedly doubled the size of the article by reducing India to 478 words and increasing "Caste outside South Asia" to 7,444 words. The major issues of bias we are dealing with in this RfC is the work of one single editor. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:25, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
And, of those 5,000+ words, how much of the article lacked even one citation for verifiability? Answer: some 60%. How many 'citation needed' tags were there on sentences and whole paragraphs. Answer: Many. Did the summary in this article on India sync with the main article per wikipedia community agreed linked article guidelines? Answer: No. Did wiki contributors discuss, before May 2012, that caste article are too big and we must trim to a smaller, more readable/manageable size. Answer: Yes. Did removing unverifiable content in the India section of this article per wiki guidelines, and leaving link to the main article, help reduce the overall size of this article? Answer: Yes. Can the current article be further improved? Answer: Yes. Should this article disruptively change into a biased advocacy article on 'highlight the social ills' (see Fowler&fowler comments elsewhere on this talk page), or ignore the secondary sources and reliable published literature on caste outside India. Answer: No. This article should focus on summarizing all sides of scholarly published literature on caste respecting wiki's balance, DUE and NPOV guidelines.
I invite Fowler&fowler to assume good faith, welcome others, and remember wikipedia is an encyclopedia anyone can contribute content to if it meets wikipedia content guidelines. Collaborative sharing of ideas and editing content is what improves wikipedia. This discussion is proof. Piotrus, for example, mentions above the idea of creating an article on Jewish caste in Poland. One of the key disputes here is: how to best summarize and sync main independent articles linked to an article? ApostleVonColorado (talk) 13:46, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- How many watchers did this article have while the edits were being made in past? Answer: over 150. On other relevant policies, see this: Being bold is a fundamental principle of Wikipedia. No editor is more welcome to make a positive contribution than you are. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 13:54, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- I agree we need not follow Fowler's arbitrary and — I must say — unhelpful proposal. Fowler, you must assume good faith. Let's not make it any more complicated and time-consuming than it already is. Now as it seems (I may be wrong), it's one of fowler's many fortes (i.e. creating confusion, obfuscation and needless complications). That is what he has done in WP:DRN (which failed by the way), Talk:India (see archive no 37 for more), at least one RfC and whatever article or page he has edited lately. Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 14:17, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
One major problem with the proposal is that we just cannot put restriction on the number of words, ofcourse we need to give proper weight to every section but the restriction of number of words is too much. --sarvajna (talk) 14:32, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- Fine I won't put in my amendment and go back to Piotrus's original proposal. However, there are some Wikipedia guidelines; See Wikipedia:Article size recommend an upper limit of 50 kb of readable prose, ie. 10,000 words for the article. Article's longer than that compromise reader comprehension; I'm happy to write out Piotrus's original proposal in its light. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 14:56, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
Regarding length and summarizing. I have already suggested how much of each topic I would like to see mentioned, subject to revisions pending on the literature review. Which means that yes, the section on India should grow, as should the current coverage of sociological/anthropological theories on caste, while the section on other countries should shrink, with many articles split off into subarticles (perhaps only "caste in continent" should be linked here, with "caste in country" being linked from those subarticles). Size wise, the caste article seems probably at the length we want to keep it. More detailed discussion of various concepts should be split off. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 15:20, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- Piotrus - Would you be interested and available to help write this article? or at least review proposed drafts of each major part you propose? ApostleVonColorado (talk) 16:15, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
Piotrus's original proposal in concrete terms
- Total article size should be no more than 10,000 words of readable prose. (See WP:Article size)
- Definitions, concepts, review of literature, should constitute no more than (45%) or 4,500 words.
- Hindu India should constitute no more than 30% or 3,000 words.
- non-Hindu India and extra-India South Asia should constitute no more than 10% or 1000 words
- Caste outside South Asia should constitute no more than 15% or 1,500 words
Piotrus, as I've already said, is the author of 7 FAs, one of Wikipedia most prolific contributors since 2004, and a professional sociologist. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 14:56, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- I feel a few suggestions might improve this proposal:
- Concepts related to caste system in India like sanskritization, jajmani etc. should only be discussed in India's section. The general section on definitions, concepts etc. should not include these.
- Contemporary context of caste in India should be discussed in some detail regardless of its weight in Caste system in India. For details see article by Veena Das which dedicates 25% of its space to it.
- Since non-Hindu India is being discussed separately, it might be best to have one section on South Asia with subsections on Hindus, Muslims etc. instead of India, Pakistan...
- Neutrality and balance issues of sections on caste in other continents should be discussed further. For instance, caste in Europe should probably focus on Roma.
- Limits should be flexible. We can agree to various percentages, but common sense should finally dictate section lengths. In other words, minor variations should be permissible.
- Finally, 45% for literature review, concepts etc. is too much; 15 % for castes outside South Asia is too less. Please also keep an eye on what readers want to see in this article. Correct Knowledge«৳alk» 17:20, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
I feel the % would vary before and after articles are ready for a split off. I agree with Piotrus that India section should grow, so should the current coverage of alternate sociological/anthropological theories on caste. Initially, it may have larger section on rest of the world. As the article splits, and the content stabilizes, we may end up with a balanced and consensus for a complete and quality article. We do not have to decide or debate % now.
I am fine with keeping the article about the current size, splitting out specific sections into independent articles with good, balanced, NPOV consensus summary in this article. FWIW, I just took a rough look: after deleting/revising some parts, splitting off some sections and summarizing it here, setting aside about 5% for lead, I arrive at relative % that is quite different than above proposal. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 17:28, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- The proposal to spin out new articles to reduce clutter was a good one and might solve all the weight issues. Maybe we should discuss that first. In any case, why should that proposal be collapsed and this be open for discussion? Btw, what were the relative percentages you arrived at, just a bit curious? Correct Knowledge«৳alk» 17:35, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
"The proposal to spin out new articles to reduce clutter was a good one and might solve all the weight issues."
— I agree with CorrectKnowledge and I echo the concerns of CorrectKnowledge as laid out on my talk page, “What troubles me most about the new proposal on Talk:Caste is that older proposals (changes to lead, spinning out new articles etc.) were collapsed on the pretext that they were distracting from the RfC. It seems odd if not hypocritical to discuss a new proposal there, no matter how good it is.” Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 18:10, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- (edit conflict)"Piotrus, as I've already said, is the author of 7 FAs, one of Wikipedia most prolific contributors since 2004, and a professional sociologist." — the problem is, you see Fowler, we're not arguing against his proposals nor are we trying to deliberately foist our own incongruous proposals in his name while constantly assuming bad faith and demeaning other editors, but you are. Let him speak for himself, he is better. You, Fowler — no matter how great an expert you think an editor is — need not certify/judge/represent anybody other than yourself. Unfortunately, any editor's credentials are of no use here on Wikipedia (in terms of his credibility); what matters is verifiability (along with other policies). Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 18:31, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- @Mrt3366, Your histrionics aside, Wikipedia is not a referendum in which people hold hands, sing Kumbaya around the fire, and try not to step on each others toes. Expertise is valued on Wikipedia. Jimbo Wales himself has said it very clearly in a New York Times interview:
Fowler&fowler«Talk» 19:09, 18 September 2012 (UTC)Greatest misconception about Wikipedia: We aren’t democratic. Our readers edit the entries, but we’re actually quite snobby. The core community appreciates when someone is knowledgeable, and thinks some people are idiots and shouldn’t be writing.
- @Mrt3366, Your histrionics aside, Wikipedia is not a referendum in which people hold hands, sing Kumbaya around the fire, and try not to step on each others toes. Expertise is valued on Wikipedia. Jimbo Wales himself has said it very clearly in a New York Times interview:
- Well listen Fowler, since it's clearly decided that you are not going to listen to what others say anywhere unless they support your personal gobbledygook or behave like your entourage, I think it is a total wastage of my time to try to break it to you that wikipedia is not an anarchy either. Don't you think that you've wasted enough time? Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 08:03, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
- @AVCThe above proposal (in terms of percentages) is exactly what Piotrus has proposed. (45% Definitions etc; Hindu India 30%; non-Hindu India and rest of South Asia 10%; Caste outside Asia 15%. It is true that I didn't factor in the lead. If you want to literally keep it at the current size, then here goes: The current lead is 320 words. That means the rest of the article is 9,443 - 320 = 9,143 words. If we are to follow Piotrus's suggestion of keeping the current article size, then in percentage terms, we have:
- Definitions, Review of literature etc 45% (no more than 4,114 words)
- Hindu India, 30% (no more than 2743 words)
- non-Hindu India and rest of South Asia, 10% (no more than 914 words)
- Caste outside South Asia, 15% (no more than 1,371 words)
- To this we can add a 5% lead per AVC's suggestion, ie. no more than 457 words. That means the total article size will be 9,143+457 = no more than 9,600 words. No one is suggesting that we change to these percentages in a week, but they are our ultimate guidelines. They don't have to be the exact numbers, but the approximate proportions are important. I, for example, will not agree to much more than 15% devoted to Caste outside South Asia. That is what Piotrus has stated and that is what I agree with.
- @CK It may be that we might not be able to write 4,500 words on Definitions etc, but the 4,500 words are our upper limits. I think we should keep the current subsectons: India (Hindu, non-Hindu), rest of South Asia, Outside South Asia. Reorganizing the subsections into Hindu (India, Nepal, Bali), Moslem (India, Pakistan, Bangladesh, ...) etc would run counter to the tertiary sources, and would introduce major POV. 30% is Hindu India, which has a separate subsection. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:15, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- @CK, AVC. You are welcome to carry on the discussion on the spinning out. You can spin out the Caste outside South Asia sections any way you want. I have little interest in them. I think most of it is OR and these articles will likely go to AfD. Also remember, there is a vast literature on Caste in the US, more notable than Caste in Finland, Sweden, Poland, ... that will need to be accommodated. Much of it is written by Gerald Berreman, who has thus far received star billing in this article. In fact, Berreman has categorically said that if caste existed anywhere outside India it did in the southern United States. But anyway, that is your concern. Just remember the summary of it here will need to be less than 15% of the total article lenth, ie. approximately 1,400 words, per Piotrus's statement, which I support. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:20, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- I oppose this Hindu India POV that fowler is trying to impress upon us. India is a secular Nation and there is no India for only Hindus. It must all be under one heading and that's "India" (Moslem, Hindu, Sikh, Buddhist, etc). Don't differentiate based on Religion. Religion has got nothing to do with it. That will trigger a whole new dimension of debates. Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 18:49, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- Calm down Mrt. Since caste is centrally a Hindu social division that is codified in the religion, it is a religious concept. Madan, for example, says that it hardly exists outside Hinduism except amongst converts to Christianity in South India and amongst some Sikh converts. Amongst Muslims, he says, it is mainly a trade related thing. It makes sense to differentiate between the relatively formal, rigid and institutional existence of caste amongst Hindus and the lighter, informal and conversion specific, version amongst other religions. Perhaps you could propose other terms for the section heading ("Hereditary social divisions amongst Hindus" would be one possibility), but there is nothing extraordinarily wrong with what fowler is saying. (Though I'm not sure I agree with the relative weights. The parallels with other social divisions seem more like a minority viewpoint to me.)--regentspark (comment) 19:08, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- It is a minority viewpoint, a miniscule minority viewpoint, but I've gone along with it for the sake of moving ahead. My own personal viewpoint is that Caste outside South Asia should get no more than 5%. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 19:21, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- Calm down Mrt. Since caste is centrally a Hindu social division that is codified in the religion, it is a religious concept. Madan, for example, says that it hardly exists outside Hinduism except amongst converts to Christianity in South India and amongst some Sikh converts. Amongst Muslims, he says, it is mainly a trade related thing. It makes sense to differentiate between the relatively formal, rigid and institutional existence of caste amongst Hindus and the lighter, informal and conversion specific, version amongst other religions. Perhaps you could propose other terms for the section heading ("Hereditary social divisions amongst Hindus" would be one possibility), but there is nothing extraordinarily wrong with what fowler is saying. (Though I'm not sure I agree with the relative weights. The parallels with other social divisions seem more like a minority viewpoint to me.)--regentspark (comment) 19:08, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- I oppose this Hindu India POV that fowler is trying to impress upon us. India is a secular Nation and there is no India for only Hindus. It must all be under one heading and that's "India" (Moslem, Hindu, Sikh, Buddhist, etc). Don't differentiate based on Religion. Religion has got nothing to do with it. That will trigger a whole new dimension of debates. Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 18:49, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- @CK, AVC. You are welcome to carry on the discussion on the spinning out. You can spin out the Caste outside South Asia sections any way you want. I have little interest in them. I think most of it is OR and these articles will likely go to AfD. Also remember, there is a vast literature on Caste in the US, more notable than Caste in Finland, Sweden, Poland, ... that will need to be accommodated. Much of it is written by Gerald Berreman, who has thus far received star billing in this article. In fact, Berreman has categorically said that if caste existed anywhere outside India it did in the southern United States. But anyway, that is your concern. Just remember the summary of it here will need to be less than 15% of the total article lenth, ie. approximately 1,400 words, per Piotrus's statement, which I support. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:20, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
(ec) Whatever proposal finally gets us down the pike, I think it is important to reiterate that social divisions amongst Hindu's are central to the concept of caste. The word, in the context of Hindu social divisions, was originally used to represent exactly that. The Oxford English Dictionary defines it as One of the several hereditary classes into which society in India has from time immemorial been divided and states, unequivocally that This is now the leading sense, which influences all other. Britannica expounds on it in those terms. While 'caste' is used when talking about social divisions in general, the concept is centrally Hindu in nature and the article should reflect that centrality, not hide it.--regentspark (comment) 18:54, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- The 914 words allotted to non-Hindu India and South Asia can start from within the India section and extend to other countries. We don't need to title sections Hindu India, Muslim India etc. Correct Knowledge«৳alk» 19:02, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- @CK That's fine as long as RPs concerns are kept in mind. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 19:12, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- @CK and as long as sentences of the type, such as this doozy in the current lead, "Castes have been observed in societies that are, for example, predominantly Muslim, Christian, Hindu or Buddhist" where Hinduism is snuck way in the back, are removed forever. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 19:16, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- @CK That's fine as long as RPs concerns are kept in mind. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 19:12, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
Fowler and RP: Caste system is very much found outside Hinduism in India(something that we discussed and never arrived at a consensus on India page). Terms like "Dalit Christians" are very well and cannot be a minority view point. The section about India can also have details about how the caste system is present in other religions in India.--sarvajna (talk) 20:34, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- While there may be Dalit Christians (and Mazhabi Sikhs), the point to bear in mind is that these Dalits and Mazhabis exist because they were Dalit Hindus before they converted to Christianity or Sikhism. Caste, in Christianity and Sikhism is a carryover from Hinduism and is fairly marginal. I'll give you Madan's exact statement on this tomorrow, but that's more or less what he says. --regentspark (comment) 21:06, 18 September 2012 (UTC)
- I am behoved to tell you this RP, the caste-based discrimination in India is almost dead and the Government of India brought in many legislative changes (Law of reservation for minority groups esp. dalits, proscription against the practice of untouchability, etc) which has helped and is playing a major role in destroying the idea of discrimination based on caste. That has nothing to do with the core tenets of Hinduism. BTW, Hindu culture is not outside of Indian culture. Don't gloss over the social initiatives that the Government and other Hindu activists have taken. Don't just gloss over the preachings and endeavours of Hindu leaders (e.g. Mahatma Gandhi, Swamy Vivekananda, Dayanand Saraswati, etc and, in present day, Subramanian Swamy et al). Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 07:50, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
- Mrt, this article is about caste, not discrimination on the grounds of caste. Even if all discrimination on the grounds of caste had ended, the article would more or less stay the same. That "Caste" essentially describes a hereditary system of social divisions amongst Hindus. That this system is fairly rigid and intra-caste movement is not something that is permitted (the irony of the discussion involving adding caste labels to everyone from India should escape no one!). That there has been, historically discrimination on the basis of caste amongst Hindus. That this discrimination has spilled over into Christianity in South India and Sikhism and Buddhism. I agree that there is far less caste based discrimination today as compared to 1947, and am open to saying that here, there and everywhere, but the essence of the article has to be about social division amongst Hindus. --regentspark (comment) 13:18, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
- Come on! The article talks about "endogamy", "social stratification in which membership is determined by birth and remains fixed for life" and "hierarchy" which generally means "system of grades of status or authority ranked one above the other" (per Oxford dictionary definition), now if you say that none of this has anything to do with discrimination then I think you're not being 100% neutral to yourself. Besides, endogamy, social hierarchy - they currently do not exist in any sub-urban, semi-urban or urban parts of India. You cannot just implicitly denigrate a religion (be it Islam, Hinduism, Christianity, Sikhism, Buddhism, Judaism, etc) but not let the voice of their prominent modern leaders be heard. Many Hindu activists/leaders have vociferously spoken against this hierarchical caste system. We ought to mention that part too, if we are gong to be neutral about this. Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 07:45, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- Mrt, this article is about caste, not discrimination on the grounds of caste. Even if all discrimination on the grounds of caste had ended, the article would more or less stay the same. That "Caste" essentially describes a hereditary system of social divisions amongst Hindus. That this system is fairly rigid and intra-caste movement is not something that is permitted (the irony of the discussion involving adding caste labels to everyone from India should escape no one!). That there has been, historically discrimination on the basis of caste amongst Hindus. That this discrimination has spilled over into Christianity in South India and Sikhism and Buddhism. I agree that there is far less caste based discrimination today as compared to 1947, and am open to saying that here, there and everywhere, but the essence of the article has to be about social division amongst Hindus. --regentspark (comment) 13:18, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
- I am behoved to tell you this RP, the caste-based discrimination in India is almost dead and the Government of India brought in many legislative changes (Law of reservation for minority groups esp. dalits, proscription against the practice of untouchability, etc) which has helped and is playing a major role in destroying the idea of discrimination based on caste. That has nothing to do with the core tenets of Hinduism. BTW, Hindu culture is not outside of Indian culture. Don't gloss over the social initiatives that the Government and other Hindu activists have taken. Don't just gloss over the preachings and endeavours of Hindu leaders (e.g. Mahatma Gandhi, Swamy Vivekananda, Dayanand Saraswati, etc and, in present day, Subramanian Swamy et al). Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 07:50, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
Proposal based on Piotrus's original proposal and RfC experience
Total article size should be no more than 10,000 words of readable prose. (See WP:Article size)
- Definitions, concepts, review of literature, should constitute no more than 55% or 5,500 words.
- Hindu India should constitute no more than 15% or 1,500 words.
- Of the 15%, three-fourths should be in a historical sense, in the past tense. This is roughly 11% or 1100 words.
- The remaining 4% can be in present tense, roughly 400 words
- Non-Hindu India and extra-India South Asia should constitute no more than 10% or 1000 words
- Caste outside South Asia should constitute no more than 20% or 2,000 words
This is based on Piotrus's original proposal as well as what I read in the RfC above. Hoshigaki (talk) 02:09, 19 September 2012 (UTC) I note that some people are finding the term "Hindu India" offensive. I apologize to them for using this term and make the following observations.
- This proposal gives 25% space to India and the Indian sub-continent. This is the largest proportion of coverage and it should satisfy those who think India deserves more coverage than the rest.
- We need to determine if caste coverage will be by religion, countries or geographical regions. While the caste system originated in Hinduism, it is now present and very firmly established in the Muslim communities of the Indian sub-continent. It is also present in other religions. Hoshigaki (talk) 05:47, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
- Hoshigaki - Those are cogent suggestions. How would you accommodate some of wikipedia's linked main article and summary style guidelines? India already has a separate linked article, which then links to other main articles, including to non-Hindu caste articles, Varna, Jati, etc. Per guidelines, these must be summarized, not duplicated. See these featured articles created by Piotrus: Polish culture during World War II, which links to main article Partitions of Poland. The summary is short. As another example, see History of Solidarity with the linked article Martial law in Poland. Again a short summary. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 13:18, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
- This is not about Piotrus's contributions. The question has already been answered more globally at Wikipedia_talk:Neutral_point_of_view#WP:DUE_and_length_of_sections. Overwhelming majority of tertiary source general articles on "Caste," devote 75 to 100 per cent of their content to India, consequently, per DUE, a large portion of the content of this article as well will need to be devoted to India. It's as simple as that. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:37, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- Fowler - My proposal devotes the largest portion of content on caste to India. Hoshigaki (talk) 04:04, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- ApostleVonColorado - We can consider Fifelfoo's proposal to completely avoid examples in this article. We have a concise summary of all examples linking to the various caste articles. Hoshigaki (talk) 13:14, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- Hoshigaki - Fowler&fowler is misrepresenting a 'discussion between wiki users on a talk page' as 'answered more globally' wikipedia policy. Talk pages of wikipedia are neither official wikipedia policies nor a measure of community consensus. For policies and latest consensus content guidelines, see WP:NPOV, WP:V, WP:VNT, WP:SUMMARY, WP:RS, etc.
- We can better understand Piotrus by studying examples of his work and featured wikipedia articles. I just went through many featured articles - the 'briefly summarize the main article' is the predominant practice in articles. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 13:36, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- This is an incorrect characterization of the WT:NPOV talk page, where our own CorrectKnowledge had asked a question. The respondent is a professional neuroscientist who routinely responds there. His answer is a good approximation of WP policy. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 15:31, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- Tryptofish answer is, "major topics should retain a reasonable amount of detail (see WP:Summary style), whereas minor points could be scaled back to a short link or a see also." I provided the same link. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 16:01, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- This is an incorrect characterization of the WT:NPOV talk page, where our own CorrectKnowledge had asked a question. The respondent is a professional neuroscientist who routinely responds there. His answer is a good approximation of WP policy. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 15:31, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- This is not about Piotrus's contributions. The question has already been answered more globally at Wikipedia_talk:Neutral_point_of_view#WP:DUE_and_length_of_sections. Overwhelming majority of tertiary source general articles on "Caste," devote 75 to 100 per cent of their content to India, consequently, per DUE, a large portion of the content of this article as well will need to be devoted to India. It's as simple as that. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 03:37, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- Hoshigaki - Those are cogent suggestions. How would you accommodate some of wikipedia's linked main article and summary style guidelines? India already has a separate linked article, which then links to other main articles, including to non-Hindu caste articles, Varna, Jati, etc. Per guidelines, these must be summarized, not duplicated. See these featured articles created by Piotrus: Polish culture during World War II, which links to main article Partitions of Poland. The summary is short. As another example, see History of Solidarity with the linked article Martial law in Poland. Again a short summary. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 13:18, 19 September 2012 (UTC)
Criteria for selecting content and reliable sources on caste, based on Piotrus example and RfC comments
Published secondary and tertiary literature on caste is extensive, conflicting and diverse. I like the way Piotrus was willing to consider, read and accept additional sources. I also feel Piotrus is constructive in suggesting: 'Jewish caste in Poland' could be a notable article on its own. Based on the example and comments by Piotrus, how about the following criteria for selecting content and reliable sources to help improve this article:
- Summarize all sides of significant and mainstream scholarly literature. It is important that the included summary does not leave a wrong impression about caste in any society.
- Casual use of word caste by any published source, once or twice, is an unacceptable basis to include that source in this article. Just because someone has casually called something a caste at some point in history, does not mean it should be included in this article.
- We will consider the following as adequate basis to consider including a mention or summary in this article: multiple secondary sources discuss caste in a country / region / culture, and one or more reliable tertiary source include this mention.
- Substantive discussion of caste in a society by multiple secondary sources, in sociology/anthropology/cultural and similar scholarly fields, suggest such sources will be considered for inclusion in this article. Review of books, journal review articles, multiple citations in scholarly reliable sources, if identified, suggest the content has entered mainstream scholarly discussion. This will qualify for a possible mention or summary in this article. The following discussion would be considered substantive: the sources include a discussion about caste, and contrast it with class system or include description of hereditary / hierarchical / exclusionary / etc aspects that define the concept of caste in that society.
- Scholarly published secondary and tertiary literature from around the world, on caste, are acceptable and welcome.
What else? ApostleVonColorado (talk) 15:06, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- Piotrus's proposal is what is being considered. That is the only one I am amenable to.
As Fifelfoo has said, you don't have the competence to write this article.You have already done inestimable damage to Wikipedia by doubling the size of this article with biased original research. No point, in addition, damming up this page with more polite trolling. Piotrus is a professional sociologist. The talk page you disingenuously refer to above (after having sanctimoniously recited for the hundredth time all the Wiki links for good behavior) as just another talk page hosting just another conversation, is the WT:NPOV talk page. There our own CorrectKnowledge had asked a question. The editor who replies is a professional neuroscientist who routinely answers these questions and what he has said is fairly close to Wikipedia policy. If you are disputing that have an RfC on that. The content about Caste outside South Asia, according to Piotrus's proposal, will not have more than 15%. The content that you have thus far added to the Caste article is unencyclopedic. You have done it singlehandedly. It can't be laid at someone else's doorstep. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 15:26, 20 September 2012 (UTC)- Not a constructive comment there, Fowler&fowler. Don't misquote Fifelfoo now. Fifelfoo explained what he meant by competence concern in requesting more bibliographic information, 'The publisher and the place of publication is pretty damn essential to evaluate the quality of sources.' Neither you nor I had included place of publications.
- I urge you to study and follow Piotrus' example. Please welcome all wiki contributors and assume good faith. If you have any constructive comments to make on above specific ideas, please add them in this section. Else, let us wait for comments from other wiki editors. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 15:52, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- I'm not talking about citations. Here is Fifelfoo in his own words:
I rest my case. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 16:05, 20 September 2012 (UTC)In the scholarly tertiaries, India is mentioned as a critical example repeatedly. This article should, therefore, give prominence to the summary style section dealing with the significance to the sociology of caste of the Indian example. This example should probably be ordered first if examples are used in writing this article. If examples are not used then a summary style section with a main link to caste in India is probably required due to the prominence of this example to the development of the social science concept. While this article has a responsibility to the social science concept of caste across all human societies and cultures, and across all sociologies of stratification, at the same time this article has a responsibility to reflect the development of the concept in relation to the "paradigmatic example" (Kuper and Kuper 2003). I have now read your article. It is a coatrack of the most disturbing kind. If I wanted a list of examples I would go to category:caste. If I wanted a discussion of the social phenomena and sociological classification of strata known as caste I would come here. The section on Italy is OR, the only theory in use is from 1917 and is a just-so story. This isn't an article on caste, it is a list of OR related to stratification."
- I'm not talking about citations. Here is Fifelfoo in his own words:
- Piotrus's proposal is what is being considered. That is the only one I am amenable to.
Common on, now! Before that paragraph, Fifelfoo qualifies his comment with the admission that he read just your tertiary sources, and that he did not consider or read disputing tertiary sources I provided because it lacked full bibliographic details (which later he confirmed as names of publishers and place of publication). Please skip irrelevant attacks in this section. People can read Fifelfoo's comments and associated discussion if they want to, in full, elsewhere on this talk page. There is no need to repeat. In this section, let us focus on suggestions to improve this article per Piotrus/RfC comments please. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 16:17, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- In that paragraph, Fifelfoo has criticized the article, but Fifelfoo does not attack any wiki contributor in that paragraph, with claims of 'you don't have the competence to write this article.' Such misrepresentation is uncivil. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 11:35, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- You mean after you added the place of publication, he has now accepted Encyclopaedia Britannica, 1911, as a reliable source? And Veena Das's article, your first reference, which bereft of its place of publication, was discussing only India and nothing but India, is now magically waxing eloquent about Caste in Sweden, Finland, Poland, England, Ireland, Netherlands, France, ....? Fowler&fowler«Talk» 16:29, 20 September 2012 (UTC)
- I have scratched that sentence, and my apologies, but please be aware that disruption can also be caused by pretending to follow Wikipedia guidelines, by quoting chapter and verse at every instance, but by persistently and subtly misinterpreting what others say. Both Fifelfoo and Piotrus have made pretty damning comments about the content you have added. As far as I am aware, they have not changed their opinion of the article (especially your contributions to it) one whit in light of your long essay-length replies. It is a misinterpretation to highlight what Piotrus said, about Jewish people in Poland, and minimize his proposal here: that the Caste outside South Asia should not constitute more than 15% of the article length. That, form of persistently polite misinterpretation, especially when practiced at every instance, is disruptive. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:18, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- AVC, as it seems now, Mr Fowler has a lot of spare time. He called me "an obsessively tendentious editor" who, if didn't follow fowler's commandments, will soon be gone, whether forcibly or voluntarily. And now you are, at least to him apparently, a disruptive and an incompetent editor. It appears that only those who agree with Mr Fowler are the ones who should edit wikipedia in Fowler's opinion. WOW! And why not, after all he claims to know a great deal more about India (both ancient and modern) than I have any clue.
Damn!! Ain't he a class-act?BTW, your proposal looks good and based on common sense rather than arbitrary and incongruous limits. Mr Fowler, like I told you before you should try to judge only yourself. You have been far too judgmental. I, for one, think AVC is as competent an editor as you're on your best day. So let's not get in over our heads. Fowler, for the umpteenth time, stop obfuscating this issue.Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 13:50, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- It may come as a surprise to some here to know that Fowler&fowler is a well-respected and highly knowledgeable contributor. He is also a human being and as likely to get fed up of frustrating situations as anyone else. And rather less likely to do so than I. This discussion is descending into unnecessary name-calling. Stop it, all of you. - Sitush (talk) 13:57, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- No, it's not a surprise, Sitush (not from you anyway). He has experience, yes, but respect is earned my friend. He doesn't behave like a respectable human. He doesn't assume even a wee bit of good faith. He is combative, snobbish and demeaning. If somebody wants to get respect he better start showing respect. His experience doesn't give him the license to demean anybody, rather it's his obligation as an experienced editor to behave reverentially and at least with civility (which I have observed in AVC's conduct and other knowledgeable editors). But you're not going to take my word for it. Hence, let's not digress too far. Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 14:06, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- Mr T, your tone in at least a few recent comments is wildly inappropriate. It's deeply ironic to complain of another user's alleged incivility with this tone, and in these terms. Listen to those who urge calm, please. MartinPoulter (talk) 09:38, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- No, it's not a surprise, Sitush (not from you anyway). He has experience, yes, but respect is earned my friend. He doesn't behave like a respectable human. He doesn't assume even a wee bit of good faith. He is combative, snobbish and demeaning. If somebody wants to get respect he better start showing respect. His experience doesn't give him the license to demean anybody, rather it's his obligation as an experienced editor to behave reverentially and at least with civility (which I have observed in AVC's conduct and other knowledgeable editors). But you're not going to take my word for it. Hence, let's not digress too far. Mr T(Talk?) (New thread?) 14:06, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- It may come as a surprise to some here to know that Fowler&fowler is a well-respected and highly knowledgeable contributor. He is also a human being and as likely to get fed up of frustrating situations as anyone else. And rather less likely to do so than I. This discussion is descending into unnecessary name-calling. Stop it, all of you. - Sitush (talk) 13:57, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
I do not see any issues in this proposal at all, infact point no 2 Casual use of word caste by any published source, once or twice,.. is something even fowler would agree, I do not understand why he would say Piotrus's proposal is what is being considered. That is the only one I am amenable to. . This is a different proposal, this is not a proposal about structure of the article but the selection criteria for the sources.--sarvajna (talk) 14:47, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- No he says clearly: 45% definitions, review of literature; 30% Hindu India; 10% non-Hindu India and extra-India South Asia; 15% Outside South Asia. Here is the exchange:
@Piotrus: So (if one interprets "hut" to be a typo, and assumes you mean "half"), are you suggesting that 45% should be devoted to Caste (sociological and anthropological concept) and Review of literature, 30% to Hindu India, 10% to non-Hindu India and non-India South Asia, and 15% to Caste outside South Asia? I am happy to go along with this as well. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 18:38, 16 September 2012 (UTC)
With the disclaimer that I have not read much of the RfC and other's views, which also means I think my opinion is fairly neutral - yes, this is the structure I'd propose for this article. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 17:52, 17 September 2012 (UTC)
The 800 pound gorilla in the room is not Jewish caste in Poland, or adding locations of publishers to references, but that we have an article on "Caste," which spends a staggering 85% of its content-length discussing caste outside India. By creating such lopsidedness singlehandedly, during three weeks in February and March this year, AVC has done Wikipedia a great disservice and compromised its credibility. It has compromised WP's credibility because the overwhelming majority of the scholarly tertiaries spend 75 to 100% of their content on India. AVC's proposal is more of his desperate attempt to hold on to the OR he has stuffed in the article. What the chances that reference in "one" tertiary source and say two secondary sources, (AVC's point 3) will make inserting an edit about Caste in Finland legitimate in the article? The answer is zero. This is because 30 tertiary sources, the best-known, don't mention Finland. (or Sweden, England, Ireland, ...) Fowler&fowler«Talk» 15:05, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- I really don't think you have made your objections clear rather than taking names it would be wise to concentrate on the matter. Well if 30 best known tertiary source do not say anything about caste in Finland so what? Why would you reject the other sources which say about the caste in Finland, because you did not find that source?. whatever you are suggesting sounds like My way or Highway. When there are sources (plural) which write about caste in Finland I do not see any reason not to include it. --sarvajna (talk) 15:20, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- It is hardly my way or the highway. People who say that don't go around finding 30 of the best tertiary sources. What it means is that including Finland in Wikipedia's general article on Caste would violate WP due weight. Read WP:TERTIARY (policy). And, by the way, most of the abstract discussion of caste (the 45% in the beginning) has taken place historically around the paradigmatic example, Hindu India. All the great theorists of Caste, Max Weber, Emile Senart (Les Castes dans L'Inde, 1894), Célestin Bouglé (1927), Georges Dumézil, G. S. Ghurye, Edmund Leach, M. N. Srinivas, F. G. Bailey, Louis Dumont, J. C. Heesterman, Ronald Inden, Stanley Tambiah, McKim Marriott, R. S. Khare, Veena Das, Jonathan Parry, Andre Beteille, T. N. Madan, Richard Burghart, and others have theorized in the context of Hinduism and India. Do you know of any great anthropologist or sociologist who has made "Caste in Finland," "Caste in Ireland," ... his life work? Even the one anthropologist, Gerald Berreman, who during the 50s, 60s, and early 70s advocated the comparative approach, for which he has been cited a dozen times in the Caste article, has spent most of his lifetime working on India. Seriously, where are you guys coming from? Fowler&fowler«Talk» 15:49, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- If someone can provide reliable sources about the caste system in some other country(not just a mention of caste in passing) I do not see any reason to ignore those reliable sources. We can give due weight to Caste in India and I am sure you will do a good job there but we just cannot ignore other sources. The other way I interpret your argument is Caste is something that is present only in India. I am sure you don't mean that as you have already mentioned somehwere above --sarvajna (talk) 09:59, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Isn't it uncharitable to say the least to imply that a user has advocated ignoring relevant sources, or that they have argued Caste is something that is present only in India, when many times in the discussion visible further up this page, that author has argued against directlyl that assertion and has been discussing the proper balance of the different sources. Please address the comments that people are actually making: there's no end to the pointless discussions that could be had if we argue against what someone could hypothetically have said, but didn't, and in fact disagree with. MartinPoulter (talk) 12:21, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- @RK Like Martin says, I'm already on board for devoting 15% of article space to Caste outside South Asia (Piotrus's proposal). A mention of caste or cast-like stratification in Finland would be fine, but making a section for it would be undue. My concern above is that the very general statements (as in AVC's) proposal might be used to drag out the revisions until long after most people have lost interest. After all the only reason the edits made it into the article is that people (the interested and the knowledgeable) weren't watching. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 12:43, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Isn't it uncharitable to say the least to imply that a user has advocated ignoring relevant sources, or that they have argued Caste is something that is present only in India, when many times in the discussion visible further up this page, that author has argued against directlyl that assertion and has been discussing the proper balance of the different sources. Please address the comments that people are actually making: there's no end to the pointless discussions that could be had if we argue against what someone could hypothetically have said, but didn't, and in fact disagree with. MartinPoulter (talk) 12:21, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- If someone can provide reliable sources about the caste system in some other country(not just a mention of caste in passing) I do not see any reason to ignore those reliable sources. We can give due weight to Caste in India and I am sure you will do a good job there but we just cannot ignore other sources. The other way I interpret your argument is Caste is something that is present only in India. I am sure you don't mean that as you have already mentioned somehwere above --sarvajna (talk) 09:59, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- It is hardly my way or the highway. People who say that don't go around finding 30 of the best tertiary sources. What it means is that including Finland in Wikipedia's general article on Caste would violate WP due weight. Read WP:TERTIARY (policy). And, by the way, most of the abstract discussion of caste (the 45% in the beginning) has taken place historically around the paradigmatic example, Hindu India. All the great theorists of Caste, Max Weber, Emile Senart (Les Castes dans L'Inde, 1894), Célestin Bouglé (1927), Georges Dumézil, G. S. Ghurye, Edmund Leach, M. N. Srinivas, F. G. Bailey, Louis Dumont, J. C. Heesterman, Ronald Inden, Stanley Tambiah, McKim Marriott, R. S. Khare, Veena Das, Jonathan Parry, Andre Beteille, T. N. Madan, Richard Burghart, and others have theorized in the context of Hinduism and India. Do you know of any great anthropologist or sociologist who has made "Caste in Finland," "Caste in Ireland," ... his life work? Even the one anthropologist, Gerald Berreman, who during the 50s, 60s, and early 70s advocated the comparative approach, for which he has been cited a dozen times in the Caste article, has spent most of his lifetime working on India. Seriously, where are you guys coming from? Fowler&fowler«Talk» 15:49, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
Concerns regarding duplication and duplication to highlight the perceived social evils of India
- Going by Fowler&fowler's logic, it seems that if 99% of all literature on royalties be about British royalty, (which is very much possible/likely, given the Brit obsession with their royals, particularly with Lady Diana), 99% of an article on "World Royalty" would be a duplicate of an article on "British Royalty" and about 70-80% of that would be on Lady Diana alone (newspapers too count as secondary sources), even if we have dedicated articles on "British Royalty" and "Lady Diana". This seems senseless to me. I am wholly against duplicating information. IMHO, since we already have an article on "Caste system in India", a section on "Caste in India" should comprise no more than 300-500 words in this article. I understand NPOV and DUE, but the issue of duplication has been brought up in the rfc and it should not be ignored. IMHO, it is non neutral to plaster same info in multiple articles just to highlight India's percieved social evils. Duplicating material to highlight social evils is not the job of this encyclopedia. If someone wants to do it, they should write their own books or blogs.OrangesRyellow (talk) 01:50, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- We are talking about scholarly tertiary sources here, ie. signed articles in major encyclopedias, specialist scholarly references (such as the Oxford Dictionary of Sociology), review articles in academic journals, or widely used university text books published by internationally recognized academic presses. These do not discuss British royalty 99% (or 50%, or even 30%) of the time in their articles or sections on "World Royalty," which they typically don't have, but let's say, in their articles or sections on "Monarchy." Fowler&fowler«Talk» 02:17, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- My example/analogy also has some similarities with the topic at hand. All analogies/examples will have some differences and delving on those differences is a classic way of avoiding to address the logic/substance of an argument. Please try to address the argument itself. I have also said that it is not the job of this encyclopedia to highlight the perceived social evils of India. I would certainly like to see your opinion on this. Do you agree/disagree?OrangesRyellow (talk) 04:24, 21 September 2012 (UTC)I have inserted a subheading to avoid distracting the discussion above.OrangesRyellow (talk) 06:22, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- F&F has addressed your argument by showing the real justification for his position on weight, and why he disagrees with the rationale you've put forward. By accusing him of "avoiding to address the logic..." and "just to highlight India's perceived social evils" you are speculating about intention, and in effect accusing F&F of bad faith, which we are supposed to avoid in Wikipedia discussion. Please take your own advice and address the logic and substance of the argument presented by F&F. MartinPoulter (talk) 15:36, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- My example/analogy also has some similarities with the topic at hand. All analogies/examples will have some differences and delving on those differences is a classic way of avoiding to address the logic/substance of an argument. Please try to address the argument itself. I have also said that it is not the job of this encyclopedia to highlight the perceived social evils of India. I would certainly like to see your opinion on this. Do you agree/disagree?OrangesRyellow (talk) 04:24, 21 September 2012 (UTC)I have inserted a subheading to avoid distracting the discussion above.OrangesRyellow (talk) 06:22, 21 September 2012 (UTC)
- Fowler&fowler has avoided addressing my argument by saying that they are discussing tertiery sources and such like things. Why are they discussing tertiery sources? To gauge the centre of opinion/weight in secondary sources. Right? In my example, I am using secondary sources directly. I don't see much of a difference there and I see Fowler&fowler's response as unnecessary hairsplitting. Moreover, if you read my comment, you will find that I have not speculated on anything and only wanted to know Fowler&fowler's opinion on what is or is not the legitimate job of this encyclopedia. Now that he/she has ignored to respond, I see his/her reluctance to respond as indicating that his/her opinion contains something which he/she cannot divulge. Why?OrangesRyellow (talk) 08:15, 23 September 2012 (UTC)
Comment by Tijfo098
I agree with the comments of Fifelfoo and Piotrus. I've only read the sections on Poland and Italy insofar, and they should be clearly deleted. In both cases sources from 100+ years ago are abused by playing on the terminology confusion from a long bygone age. What those authors called caste modern authors call social classes. I don't care if the mistake was a gross case of incompetence or blatant POV pushing, but whoever was responsible for that needs to stop editing this article for quite some time. Tijfo098 (talk) 13:54, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Agreed. That's what I said in my first post here in early August. AVC's long essay-length replies, however, were difficult reply to. So I left the discussion until such time as we had more eyes watching. That came a month later with the RfC. AVC has single handedly added the "Castes in Europe" sections, increased the "Caste outside South Asia sections" from 30 to 80% of article space, and reduced the India section to a mere 478 words, and doubled the size of the article. See my analysis upstairs. Fowler&fowler«Talk» 14:11, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Tijfo098 - That section is indeed poorly supported and not well written. It should be deleted, or revised with better support. Forgetting to add sources does not necessarily mean bad faith, or that citations never existed. There are over 100 reliable secondary sources and books that discuss social stratification in city states of Italy and refer to these as caste. See this, which I briefly quote from page 149, (Venice: Lion City: The Religion of Empire, Garry Wills, 2002, ISBN 978-0671047641):
- The third caste in Venice made up ninety percent of the populace. Like the other two castes, it was not an exclusive economic category. [...deleted rest...]
- Examples of peer reviewed journal publications, where modern authors call elements of social structure in city states of Italy as caste that was endogamous/closed/etc are: 1. "Virtuous Riches": The Bricolage of Cittadini Identities in Early-Sixteenth-Century Venice, Monika Schmitter, Renaissance Quarterly, Vol. 57, No. 3 (Autumn, 2004), pp. 908-969, see here 2. Political Adulthood in Fifteenth-Century Venice, Stanley Chojnacki, The American Historical Review, Vol. 91, No. 4 (Oct., 1986), pp. 791-810, see here 3. Ulrike Strasser, The Journal of Modern History, Vol. 75, No. 1 (March 2003), pp. 189-191, see here;
- ApostleVonColorado (talk) 14:34, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Tijfo098 - That section is indeed poorly supported and not well written. It should be deleted, or revised with better support. Forgetting to add sources does not necessarily mean bad faith, or that citations never existed. There are over 100 reliable secondary sources and books that discuss social stratification in city states of Italy and refer to these as caste. See this, which I briefly quote from page 149, (Venice: Lion City: The Religion of Empire, Garry Wills, 2002, ISBN 978-0671047641):
- I also note that Piotrus, after his initial, strong criticism of Poland section, reviewed the literature I provided after he noted his concern. He then noted the following: 'I (Piotrus) think this article (caste) should discuss more than just India' and 'that Jewish caste in Poland could be a notable article on its own'. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 14:50, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- 90% of the present section on Poland has nothing to do with Jews and is based on the 1903 source. The claim by Lenin is also iffy and one author agreeing is a bit thin. I'll look into it. Tijfo098 (talk) 15:07, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Okay, Heller has a bio here. For two years she was president of the Association for the Social Scientific Study of Jewry, so she's probably a recognized academic in that field. The Lenin-Heller bit indeed seems wp:due in light of that. I don't know if there are modern competing views though to be added per wp:npov. Heller does say that "some Jewish intellectuals" contemporary with Lenin didn't agree that Jews were a caste (p. 59) Tijfo098 (talk) 15:16, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Tijfo098 - On your concern that the current 90% of Poland section needs be thrown out, both Piotrus and I have already agreed on that above (we felt Lenin part needs to be thrown out too). The summary here for Poland, or any other section, should be based on recent publications by respected sociologists such as Heller, Hertz etc. For what it is worth, inclusion of Jewish people and Roma people in articles dedicated to caste is already in tertiary sources - here is one example: Encyclopedia of Developing World, Thomas Leonard (Editor), ISBN 1-57958-388-1, London & New York, Routledge, Volume 1, 2006. The books on Jewish people/Roma people as caste, by modern authors, have been reviewed formally, including journals (for four sample reviews, see above discussion). I agree with your suggestion that we find and include competing views - see this section for more. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 15:57, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Tijfo098 - On Poland, the sociologist Hertz has written that Jewish caste were not the only caste in Polish society. Please see this (see lines 6-7 on page 59 for direct support). There is an entire chapter titled Caste, and it is exclusively focussed on Poland. You can read about Hertz's qualifications here (in Polish, use a translator) or this NY Times review. I just ran Aleksander Hertz's citation index scores. For his Jewish caste literature, excluding irrelevant publications, I get a score of 164 citations. Celia Heller's Jewish caste in Poland publications score 624 citations. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 17:34, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Okay, he says Jews and Gypsies were the most "conspicuous" castes in Poland. He does not name any other castes except "blacks" in the US South. And certainly does not call all Polish social classes castes. Tijfo098 (talk) 01:31, 23 September 2012 (UTC)
- Tijfo098 - On Poland, the sociologist Hertz has written that Jewish caste were not the only caste in Polish society. Please see this (see lines 6-7 on page 59 for direct support). There is an entire chapter titled Caste, and it is exclusively focussed on Poland. You can read about Hertz's qualifications here (in Polish, use a translator) or this NY Times review. I just ran Aleksander Hertz's citation index scores. For his Jewish caste literature, excluding irrelevant publications, I get a score of 164 citations. Celia Heller's Jewish caste in Poland publications score 624 citations. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 17:34, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- Tijfo098 - On your concern that the current 90% of Poland section needs be thrown out, both Piotrus and I have already agreed on that above (we felt Lenin part needs to be thrown out too). The summary here for Poland, or any other section, should be based on recent publications by respected sociologists such as Heller, Hertz etc. For what it is worth, inclusion of Jewish people and Roma people in articles dedicated to caste is already in tertiary sources - here is one example: Encyclopedia of Developing World, Thomas Leonard (Editor), ISBN 1-57958-388-1, London & New York, Routledge, Volume 1, 2006. The books on Jewish people/Roma people as caste, by modern authors, have been reviewed formally, including journals (for four sample reviews, see above discussion). I agree with your suggestion that we find and include competing views - see this section for more. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 15:57, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
- I also note that Piotrus, after his initial, strong criticism of Poland section, reviewed the literature I provided after he noted his concern. He then noted the following: 'I (Piotrus) think this article (caste) should discuss more than just India' and 'that Jewish caste in Poland could be a notable article on its own'. ApostleVonColorado (talk) 14:50, 22 September 2012 (UTC)
I think we would be better of using "cast-like" for these situations. I saw Heller's book. Since it is WP:RS by Wikipedia's definitions, I can't say it is wrong, but it defines, by attributing to Weber, caste to be a "closed status group." Weber, however, in Religion of India did not exactly caste is equivalent to a closed status group. He first defined a closed status group and then went on to say,
Caste is doubtless a closed status group. All the obligations and barriers that membership in a status group entails also exist in a caste, in which they are intensified to the utmost degree. The Occident has known legally closed "estates," in the sense that intermarriage with nonmembers of the group was lacking. But, as a rule, this bar against connubium held only to the extent that marriages contracted in spite of the rule constituted misalliances, with the consequence that children 'of the "left-handed" marriage would follow the status of the lower partner. Europe still acknowledges such status barriers for the high nobility. America acknowledges them between whites and Negroes (including all mixed bloods) in the southern states of the union. But in America these barriers imply that marriage is absolutely and legally inadmissible, quite apart from the fact that such intermarriage would result in social boycott. Among the Hindu castes at the present time, not only inter-marriage between castes but even intermarriage between sub-castes is usually absolutely shunned. Already in the books of law mixed bloods from different castes belong to a lower caste than either of the parents, and in no case do they belong to the three higher ("twice-born") castes.
He is really saying that caste is more extreme than other "closed status groups;" in other words, caste is a subset of the (larger set) "closed status group." This sort of fudging of language is what I have found in much of the usage of the word "caste" for non-South Asian societies. Most tertiary sources, if they at all mention them, use the word "caste-like" instead of "caste" for these other examples. I'm on board for having 15% article space devoted to these societies, but in my present view, they should be called "caste-like societies." Anyway, in the coming weeks, I will take a closer look at these sourcesFowler&fowler«Talk» 12:23, 23 September 2012 (UTC)
- That paragraph is a good find. Sources which contrast various aspects of caste[-like] groups are very useful for developing this overview article. Such sources should help move it away from the current structure which is mostly an amorphous enumeration of what one author or another called a caste for some definition thereof, definition not necessarily spelled out. (The current structure of this article is a bit reminiscent of the article we have on fashion faux pas and of the "Allegations of apartheid" arbitration where "they do it too" articles kept popping up based on mere mentions in the press.) Tijfo098 (talk) 12:55, 23 September 2012 (UTC)
- Yes. In fact, Heller attempts to spell it out, but as you can see she herself is using "caste-like" as well, and she seems to have misread Weber. Here she is: Heller, Celia Stopnicka (1980), On the Edge of Destruction: Jews of Poland Between the Two World Wars, Detroit, MI: Wayne State University Press, pp. 58–, ISBN 978-0-8143-2494-3, retrieved 23 September 2012 Quote:
Fowler&fowler«Talk» 23:59, 23 September 2012 (UTC)The chief elements of the prevalent social definition of the Jews in Poland were their foreignness and inferiority. By demanding equality, let alone the way they did it, Jews defied this definition and were perceived as offending Polish honor. The secularized Jews' behavior vis a vis the Poles often impinged on the old caste-like structure, challenged its assumptions, and violated the hitherto governing caste etiquette. Caste, as defined by Max Weber, is a closed status group. The Jews of Poland were such a group—closed and with the shared status of compelling inferiority. Their caste situation, which emerged in the middle ages and continued throughout the period of Elective kings and during the partitions, persisted after independence was gained. Here I must digress to discuss the appropriateness of caste ....
- Yes. In fact, Heller attempts to spell it out, but as you can see she herself is using "caste-like" as well, and she seems to have misread Weber. Here she is: Heller, Celia Stopnicka (1980), On the Edge of Destruction: Jews of Poland Between the Two World Wars, Detroit, MI: Wayne State University Press, pp. 58–, ISBN 978-0-8143-2494-3, retrieved 23 September 2012 Quote: