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Reviewer: Soaper1234 (talk · contribs) 00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hello. I'm going to review this article. My comments are below. Soaper1234 - talk 00:01, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • The plot mentions a song being played, so should this be mentioned in the infobox?
 Done
  • Sam → Sam Winchester
Wouldn't that sound repetitive? "Sam and Dean Winchester" sounds better than "Sam Winchester and Dean Winchester".
Yeah, happy to let that go.
  • Add a comma after together
Expanded sentence so no longer necessary.
The new clause in the sentence is not mentioned - or sourced - anywhere in the article.
 Done Removed.
  • Add "to the show" after conclusion
 Done
  • Merge final sentence into the second paragraph.
 Done

Plot

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  • Characters need wikilinking and full names on first mention.
 Done
  • All characters need actors in parenthesis.
 Done
  • Missed Bobby's surname.
 Fixed
  • Context for characters and things such as "Roadhouse" and "the Impala" is needed in the plot.
 Done
  • Need context for who Castiel, Jack Kline, Rufus Turner, John Winchester, and Mary Winchester are.
 Fixed
  • Perhaps only link the "14 years prior" bit.
 Done
  • Remove "in Heaven" from final line.
 Done

Production

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  • Add "cast members" before Jared Padalecki
 Done
  • The longest-running show fact needs a source.
 Done
  • Add "Showrunner and executive producer" before Andrew Dabb.
 Done
  • Change "the March 23 episode" to "episode 13 of the season, broadcast on March 23".
 Done
  • Change "shutdown due to the virus outbreak" to "shutdown in production".
 Done

Reception

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  • It is very quote-heavy, so can you paraphrase some bits?
 Done

References

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  • All looks good.

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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Notes

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@Soaper1234: All of your suggestions have been addressed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:46, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Soaper1234: All of your new suggestions have been addressed. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:23, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Some Dude From North Carolina: Happy with everything. Could you change the link to the Impala to Impala (Supernatural) to make use of the redirect? Once that is done, I'll pass this. Soaper1234 - talk 14:28, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
@Soaper1234:  Done Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:38, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Passed! Well done Soaper1234 - talk 15:56, 23 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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