Talk:Capture of Grenada (1779)
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Reviewer: MathewTownsend (talk · contribs) 15:05, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
I'll start this review shortly. Interesting topic! MathewTownsend (talk) 15:05, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Review
- Lede
- "French forces were reembarked on the fleet" - I guess these is military terminology but I'm not sure what it means
- "Embarkation" is a fairly well-defined concept independent of military uses... Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- "French forces were reembarked on the fleet" - I guess these is military terminology but I'm not sure what it means
- Background
- "augmenting the fleet of Admiral Samuel Barrington" - so he was already there? (I must have missed that.)
- The Royal Navy had more-or-less permanent stations in the West Indies. I didn't think any specific reference this (or the arrival of its most recent commander) was particularly necessary. I've added words mentioning Barrington's post. Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- "the French at Martinique" - on Martinique? Fixed Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- "Governor the marquis de Bouillé" - looks funny. Should it be Governer François Claude Amour?
- Nobles are generally referred to by their title, so your suggestion would be wrong (or at least bad form). I've rephrased to make it less awkward. Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- "augmenting the fleet of Admiral Samuel Barrington" - so he was already there? (I must have missed that.)
- French capture
- "called for three columns to attack the back side of the fortifications with the bayonet" - with bayonets? Fixed Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- Aftermath
- What is the significant of John Paul Jones attending the performance?
- Nothing particularly significant, but I thought it an interesting bit of color. Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- "In order to better defend against a similar attack to the one they launched" - I don't quite understand this sentence - maybe it's me. Rephrased Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- "The divisions in Grenadian society" - social divisions? military divisions? Clarified Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- What is the significant of John Paul Jones attending the performance?
- Caption
- "French political cartoon depicting acclamation of d'Estaing for his successes on Grenada and against Byron "- sounds funny. Rephrased Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
- Everything else looks fine. A very clear, concise article.
- I made a few copy edits that you are free to reverse.[1]
MathewTownsend (talk) 21:04, 20 December 2011 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking the time to review; I think I've addressed your concerns. Let me know if not... Magic♪piano 16:06, 21 December 2011 (UTC)
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