Talk:Cale Morris/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Lead

• Delink American per MOS:OVERLINK

Early career

• "Hayton was a friend of his sisters" - typo; sisters'
• Wikilink goaltender
• "Morris played AAA hockey with" - AAA hockey can be linked to Minor ice hockey

USHL

• Wikilink Bartlett, Illnois
• "with the Chicago Steel and lived with fellow Steel teammate Robby Jackson." - repetition of "Steel"
• "Morris finished the season with a 19-6-3 record" - the hyphens should be en dashes
• save percentage, shutout and goals against average should be wikilinked for those not well versed with ice hockey terminology
• "While playing with the Black Hawks, Morris posted a 19-6-3 record" - all the hyphens highlighted in bold should be replaced by en dashes
• "and was in the league's top goals-against average and save percentage."
• "he went undrafted in the 2015 NHL Entry Draft." - this sentence should be cited to a reliable source
• "he was selected to the USHL/NHL Top Prospects Game" - state what this is for those unfamiliar with the honor

Collegiate

• "In his sophomore season, after beginning the season" - After beginning his sophomore season
• Wikilink saves to Save (goaltender)
• "to defeat the Michigan State Spartans in the Quarterfinals." - quarterfinals
• "in the second round of the 2019 NCAA Division I Men's Ice Hockey Tournament against the UMass Minutemen, Notre Dame lost 4–0 and was eliminated from the tournament." - close reptition of "tournament"
• "becoming only the second goaltender to wear a letter under head coach Jeff Jackson" - I think the middle of this sentence could be reworded a little for non-Ice hockey readers
• Wikilink training camp

International play

• "Morris was selected to play for the United States at the 2014 World Junior A Challenge." - perhaps state where the tournament was held?

References

• References 1, 7, 8, 24 are dead and will need to be archived
• References 23, 24 are missing their respective works
• The titles of those references that are spelt out entirely in capital letters should be avoided per MOS:ALLCAPS

Will put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 19:25, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Hello MWright96. Thank you so much for beginning this review. I hope I have fixed all of the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:50, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:54, 2 March 2020 (UTC)