Talk:Cale Morris

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Review: March 2, 2020. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Cale Morris appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 6 April 2020 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that ice hockey goaltender Cale Morris won Big Ten Player of the Year and Big Ten Goaltender of the Year after going undrafted into the United States Hockey League?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2020/April. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/Cale Morris.

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:08, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead

Delink American per MOS:OVERLINK

Early career

"Hayton was a friend of his sisters" - typo; sisters'
Wikilink goaltender
"Morris played AAA hockey with" - AAA hockey can be linked to Minor ice hockey

USHL

Wikilink Bartlett, Illnois
"with the Chicago Steel and lived with fellow Steel teammate Robby Jackson." - repetition of "Steel"
"Morris finished the season with a 19-6-3 record" - the hyphens should be en dashes
save percentage, shutout and goals against average should be wikilinked for those not well versed with ice hockey terminology
"While playing with the Black Hawks, Morris posted a 19-6-3 record" - all the hyphens highlighted in bold should be replaced by en dashes
"and was in the league's top goals-against average and save percentage."
"he went undrafted in the 2015 NHL Entry Draft." - this sentence should be cited to a reliable source
"he was selected to the USHL/NHL Top Prospects Game" - state what this is for those unfamiliar with the honor

Collegiate

"In his sophomore season, after beginning the season" - After beginning his sophomore season
Wikilink saves to Save (goaltender)
"to defeat the Michigan State Spartans in the Quarterfinals." - quarterfinals
"in the second round of the 2019 NCAA Division I Men's Ice Hockey Tournament against the UMass Minutemen, Notre Dame lost 4–0 and was eliminated from the tournament." - close reptition of "tournament"
"becoming only the second goaltender to wear a letter under head coach Jeff Jackson" - I think the middle of this sentence could be reworded a little for non-Ice hockey readers
Wikilink training camp

International play

"Morris was selected to play for the United States at the 2014 World Junior A Challenge." - perhaps state where the tournament was held?

References

References 1, 7, 8, 24 are dead and will need to be archived
References 23, 24 are missing their respective works
The titles of those references that are spelt out entirely in capital letters should be avoided per MOS:ALLCAPS

Will put on hold for the time being. MWright96 (talk) 19:25, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hello MWright96. Thank you so much for beginning this review. I hope I have fixed all of the issues. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 22:50, 1 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@HickoryOughtShirt?4: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:54, 2 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]