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Reviewer: Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk · contribs) 21:48, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
I'll take a look at this. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 21:48, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
Prelim
[edit]- Union blockade duplicated in the lede
- Fixed
- Image correctly licensed
- Article is stable
- Earwig reports copyvio unlikely
Lede and infobox
[edit]- Add |Ship type=Gunboat
- Done
- Either introduce the ship type for every ship in the lede, or do it for none
- Should be standardized now
- "inactivated" - either "inactive" or "deactivated"
- Changed
- "She continued service in the Savannah are in 1864" something missing here
- A spelling error; "are" should have been "area"
- "covered the Confederate retreat from the city" sentence doesn't say what covered the retreat
- Fixed
- Scuttling and "Burned to prevent capture" are not the same thing
- Have reworded both here and later in the article
- Suggest formatting the armament as * 1 × Dahlgren gun<br/>* 1 × Brooke rifle
- Done
Design
[edit]- Main text doesn't actually mention the ACW directly
- Done
- Do we know Maury's rank?
- Added, although I had to use a different source than Canney, who apparently never references Maury by rank
- Link Confederate States Navy
- It was linked earlier on Confederate in a kind of MOS:EGG-gy way, so I've cleaned up the linking there
- Give Chattahoochee her ship type
- Done, and have added a page to the cited page range for where this info came from
- "considers the use of more secure fastening to be significant" in what way?
- I've rephrased this fairly thoroughly
- "and the request davits" doesn't make sense
- A failed attempt at "requisite", fixed
- "Her draft was completed was 6 feet 6 inches" sp
- fixed
- Introduce who Porter is
- Done (CSA naval constructor)
Construction and service
[edit]- Link launched
- Done
- "March 19, 1863" repeated year
- Fixed
- "and after waiting for days"
- Done
- Give the ship types for Savannah and Sampson
- Added - I've gone with gunboat and receiving ship, which was the roles the two generally served.
- "which moved downstream"
- Done
- "desparate" is this a sp?
- I checked Browning, and this is a spelling error on my part
- "helsman" sp
- Ugh. Fixed. I blame the Missouri Department of Elementary and Secondary Education for my spelling issues
- "returning Kennard" Kennard isn't a ship!
- I cannot fathom why I would have italicized that
- Why were men being transferred to Charleston?
- added - Union forces were attacking the city
- "Charleton" sp
- oops, fixed
- What was Armstrong's rank?
- Added, Lt.
- "Causten's Bluff is circled in red in the upper right." upper left?
- Fixed, and have also fixed the spelling issue of "Causten" vs "Causton"
- "Permament command of Isondiga was Lieutenant Hamilton Dalton." something missing here
- Rephrased
- Give Sherman's rank, ibid Hardee
- Added, although I had to plug in Browning to support the exact ranks
- "On December 13, Fort McAllister was captured by Union forces." need some context as to why this is relevant
- Have expanded on this a bit
- "On December 18, Hunter ordered"?
- Fixed
- Give Firefly her ship type
- Added
References
[edit]- "The South Atlatnic Blockding Squadron" sp
- Done
- References otherwise look good.
@Hog Farm: Hi, that's all I have for now. Surprised that Savannah Squadron has no article! Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 21:48, 26 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Pickersgill-Cunliffe: - Thanks for the review! I've done my best to respond to all of the concerns listed above. Hog Farm Talk 02:40, 27 December 2023 (UTC)
- @Hog Farm: Passing this article as satisfying the GA criteria. Pickersgill-Cunliffe (talk) 14:46, 28 December 2023 (UTC)