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Former featured article candidateBusbridge War Memorial is a former featured article candidate. Please view the links under Article milestones below to see why the nomination was archived. For older candidates, please check the archive.
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Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on March 11, 2016.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Sir Edwin Lutyens designed four memorials in the same Surrey churchyard, including the Busbridge War Memorial?

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Very nice piece. Just some minor points from me:

  • Should 'War Crosses' be capitalised?
  • 'It became a listed building': The church, churchyard or cross? I presume the latter, but the other two are recently referred to in the text too
  • "Lutyens's association with Busbridge": could just go with 'it' here, instead of Busbridge
  • "The monument stands in the graveyard of St John's Church in Busbridge, where Lutyens also designed a chancel screen—the same churchyard as the war memorial": this needs a bit of a tweak, unless the chancel screen stands in the graveyard, which is what it says at the moment.

That's my lot - please ping me when you go to FAC. Cheers - SchroCat (talk) 08:10, 8 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]