Talk:Bryce Cotton/GA1

GA Review

Passed. 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 17:02, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: DaHuzyBru (talk · contribs) 14:32, 19 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Yovt (talk · contribs) 15:07, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one on. Ping me if I'm not back by next week. 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 15:07, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

No way, since February? Sorry about that. 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 15:08, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I seem to have some time on my hands. Looking at the references, the following are WP:GUNREL and must be removed or replaced: refs 3, 4, 20, 62, 72, 110, 129, 132, 164, 174, 185, 193, 195, 232, and 252. I found out using this CiteHighlighter script (which you can use as well). I will be back later this week to review more. 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 16:59, 1 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Yovt: Forgive the delay in my response here. I did not see your follow up. Thanks for reviewing the references. I have gone through all 15 you have flagged and removed or replaced them all. I look forward to hearing more from you. DaHuzyBru (talk) 15:58, 7 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have returned. I will asses this article some more now.

Lead looks good, I’m sure clarification is on the body; third paragraph lacks blue links though (not a requirement).
Early life and high school college is ok for the most part, although I’d clarify on … his father worked as a police officer on the other side of the country (what part of the country?)
An image of Cotton with an NBA jersey on this section would substantially improve the credibility of his professional career.

I really have no further doubts on this passing GA, great work. - 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 16:05, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

I have added links to third lead paragraph. Everything in the lead is covered and sourced in the body.
Regarding clarity for "other side of the country", the same source notes reconnecting with his father in New York during his college career in Providence, Rhode Island.
I agree but there are no free images available of him in the NBA.

Thanks for taking the time to review the page. DaHuzyBru (talk) 16:39, 8 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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