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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk00:46, 20 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • ... that Bruno Pereira, an expert in the indigenous people of Brazil, and journalist Dom Phillips, were killed while on a trip in the Vale do Javari? Source: "Bruno Araújo Pereira, a Brazilian expert on isolated Indigenous communities who led grueling expeditions into remote corners of the Amazon rainforest, was killed in an attack in the Javari Valley of western Brazil, authorities confirmed on Saturday. He was 41"

    "Authorities announced that human remains retrieved from an isolated forest location belonged to Mr. Pereira and Dom Phillips, a Brazil-based contributor to the Guardian and former contract writer for The Washington Post. A fisherman this week had confessed to killing the two men as they traveled on an uninhabited stretch of river leading to the city of Atalaia do Norte, police said. The fishermen led investigators to the location where the remains were buried." The Washington Post

Created by Thriley (talk), Erick Soares3 (talk), and InedibleHulk (talk). Nominated by Thriley (talk) at 03:20, 24 June 2022 (UTC).[reply]

  • BLPCRIME "murder" concern(s) The article should be retitled to "killings" before a conviction is reached, per the presumption of innocence, confession or not. This would better reflect such news outlets that still subscribe to such ethical principles. At the very least, tweaking "believed" to "alleged" would seem less prejudicial. InedibleHulk (talk) 06:12, 24 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Article and hook looks good, and the hook phrasing has been altered to meet BLPCRIME. This one looks ready. BuySomeApples (talk) 02:42, 25 June 2022 (UTC) BuySomeApples (talk) 02:42, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@BuySomeApples: Do you think the one word link to the murder article should be expanded to include a few more words so readers may be more likely to click it? Thriley (talk) 03:28, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That's a good idea @Thriley: would something like "murdered while on a trip in the Vale do Javari" work? It loses the link to Vale do Javari, but makes it more clear that it's not a generic page about murder. BuySomeApples (talk) 03:45, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
That works well. I just changed the hook. Thank you, Thriley (talk) 06:26, 25 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Thriley: Please supply a QPQ. Z1720 (talk) 19:11, 6 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
I can help out if Thriley is tied up? Oh, and quick trout to you, BuySomeApples :) theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (she/they) 12:40, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
BuySomeApples (talk) 20:17, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@Theleekycauldron: I can do it! I seem to keep on forgetting about my nominations lately. Thank you very much for your offer!! Thriley (talk) 14:33, 8 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]