Talk:Briggsdale (Columbus, Ohio)
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Peer Review Comments
[edit]-Good information on the history. It's very detailed.
-The locations of the neighborhood might fit better under a Geography section.
-In the history section, not sure if I understand when you say "16 years his junior."
-Under the Briggsdale Methodist Church, cite the references for all of the dates you researched.
-What is the significance of the Briggsdale School?
Users: Kristiana Burgi and Andrew Love — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2602:304:CDD9:9090:4598:1F6E:41C:DD9A (talk) 04:02, 5 December 2014 (UTC)
Instructor Comments No. 1
[edit]- Good Start
- I agree with Lisa, too much commentary on Family, but some of the information is useful.
- It is never mentioned that Briggsdale was named by Briggs - need to mention that.
- What is the Geography of Briggsdale? Boundaries? What neighborhoods are nearby?
- On Geography: I believe there is a more formalized historical boundary, but are there nearby businesses/churches with Briggsdale in the title? This would suggest larger commonly interpreted boundaries.
- Is there any signage?
- WorldCat@OSU Lists several City Directories that have various names in them of residents and businesses. May want to look at these for some more information.
- Briggsdale Apartments info is useful, but it needs to be under a residential subhead.
- Was there a Briggsdale Railroad Station on the Columbus and Xenia railroad?
Kenitzer.1 (talk) 15:42, 18 November 2014 (UTC)
Instructor Comments No. 2
[edit]Well-written
[edit]- Lead Section Needs Work
- Haven't updated it with current feedback
- Add Geography Section
Verifiable with no original research
[edit]- Good work here
Broad in its coverage
[edit]- Well done.
Neutral
[edit]- Be careful here, Example: Joseph M. Briggs was one of the most prominent and influential citizens of Franklin Township, Franklin County, Ohio. It should read: Joseph M. Briggs was a prominent and influential citizen of Franklin Township, Franklin County, Ohio By doing this you remove the opinion from it (passive vs. active voice).
Stable
[edit]- No comments yet.
Illustrated
[edit]- No Images, and it needs them.
- Also, see if you can add an info box.