Talk:Blown Away (Carrie Underwood song)/GA1
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Reviewer: CyrockingSmiler (talk · contribs) 15:36, 9 August 2014 (UTC)
Hi! My review for "Blown Away" will start shortly. CyrockingSmiler (talk) 15:36, 9 August 2014 (UTC)
Links
[edit]- Disambiguation: None found.
- External: They are okay.
References
[edit]The references are okay. But the link for Reference no. 1 is dead. Either remove it, or a find better source.
Prose
[edit]- Lead
- "Underwood said that when she heard first the song, she already had ideas of a possible video for it, and wanted it to be a dark Wizard of Oz in 2012" A semi-colon would be better instead of a comma after "already had ideas of a possible video for it"
- "It earned the singer" It earned "Underwood" would be better
- Writing and composition
- "...she started to work on her fourth studio album, then untitled." Which was should be inserted before then untitled
- Critical response
- "elevate this cinematic tune to an instant classic." [They further commented], "When the girl shuts herself in the storm cellar, leaving her alcoholic father passed out on the couch in the path of a twister, you can almost feel the wind."
- "Chris Richards of The Washington Post gave the song a mixed review, deeming the lyrics as "gripping", but [negatively] comparing the instrumentation to the ones of Taylor Swift songs"
- "Bobby Peacock of Rough Stock" If "Rough Stock" is a printed publication, it should be italicized. If not, then it's okay.
- Chart performance
- "Blown Away" also peaked at number 27 in Canada, and is Underwood's first song to chart in the United Kingdom, reaching number 155 [insert comma here] despite not having a proper release in the country
- Accolades
- Everything is alright.
- Music video
- "As her abusive father arrives, he asks if she needs help but she denies, gathering her things and leaving the room; however, as the *daughter stands up, he grabs her arm to make her stay, yet she pulls it away and leaves." This sentence seems odd. Try breaking it down into smaller ones.
- "The singer revealed" Underwood said
- "As the video continues, we see the daughter" the daughter is seen
- "The daughter enters the house and stares her father" stares [at] her father
- "alcoholic drink bottle" a bottle of alcohol would sound better
- Live performances
- The name of author is Amy Sciarretto. It has been misspelled in both the text and the link as "Sciaretto".
- Charts and certifications
- Everything seems fine.
- The order of precedence has only one entry, so it is unnecessary to collapse the table.
GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- A. Prose quality:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- A. References to sources:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- A. Major aspects:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
- Pass or Fail:
I fixed all the errors. So in my opinion, this article is adequate for GA classification. Good job! CyrockingSmiler (talk) 09:45, 11 August 2014 (UTC)