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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:12, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:12, 16 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Improve the non-free use rationale for the poster with this template.
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:17, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Here and in the rest of the article, films should have year dates after their first mention.
Done. I didn't add the years to ones where the title is re-used or the year is noted earlier in a sentence. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:17, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the commas after "in 1961", "United Kingdom", and "reviews in Italy".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:17, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot and cast

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  • Plot is under 700 words, so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
  • Remove the commas after "vows revenge" and "of her life".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:19, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • I think "cricifix" might be a typo.
Indeed it is. Fixed. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:19, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a comma after "beauty restored".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:19, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is there a reason why the "credits adapted" sentence is small?
Not that I know of. I've restored it back to normal size. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:19, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Production

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  • Remove the comma after "film of his own".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "being around" → "was around" (to remove the double use of "being")
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The word "bares" might be another typo.
Changed phrasing. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the comma after "unsatisfactory".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add commas after "Choma Kruvajan", "Khoma Brut", "Bachelor of Hearts (1958)"
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "travelled" → "traveled" (consistency)
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove the commas after "later in life", "cast in bronze", "scenes together", "George Higgins III", and "Andrej and Kruvajan".
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "scene which" → "scene in which"
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Release

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  • "licence" → "license" (consistency)
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

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  • This section looks good.

Legacy and influence

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  • "materialised" → "materialized" (consistency)
Done. Andrzejbanas (talk) 14:54, 18 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

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  • Archive sources.
Done. Think there was only the NYT article not archived. Andrzejbanas (talk) 16:23, 17 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

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GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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