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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 18:14, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]


I'll review this one over the next few days. --Coemgenus (talk) 18:14, 30 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Checklist

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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Comments

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Lede
  • "As of 2014..." might be better as "Since the 2014 general election..." Requires no updating that way.
  • The second "As of 2014..." could probably be deleted altogether.
  • "and as of November 2014..." Again, could probably delete. See WP:ASOF for more ideas on that line.
Bharatiya Jana Sangh (1951–77)
  • "The first major campaign of the Jana Sangh was an agitation demanding the complete integration of Jammu and Kashmir into India." This reads a little awkwardly. Maybe "The Jana Sangh's first major campaign centered on a demand for the complete integration of Jammu and Kashmir into India."
  • With the footnotes: if notes 10, 11, and 12 are meant to stand for the entire paragraph, why not combine them in to one note, since they're all from the same source. If you want to make each stand for a different section of the paragraph, it would be best to scatter them among the sentences to which they correspond.
  • "Mookerjee was arrested for violating orders..." What orders? From whom?
Janata Party (1977–80)
  • "It merged..." The antecedent is a little unclear here.
  • " After a brief period of coalition rule, general elections were held in 1980." Did the government collapse, or did they call elections voluntarily. Or does it even work that way in India? I assumed so, by analogy to the UK system, but I'm not sure.
    • I've clarified the first point. Wrt the second; a fragment of the Janata Party led a minority government for a while, with outside support from the Indian National Congress.
Babri Masjid demolition and the Hindutva movement
  • "...and made it a part of their election plank." I think this should be "election platform"
  • "The BJP withdrew its support to the V.P. Singh government..." should probably be "withdrew its support from the V.P. Singh government..."
  • "...leading to fresh elections being called." don't need the last two words here.
  • Active voice: "The VHP was briefly banned by the government..." reads better as "The government briefly banned the VHP..."
  • Again: "Kalyan Singh, Chief Minister of Uttar Pradesh during the demolition, also was criticised in the report." is better as "The report also criticised Kalyan Singh, Chief Minister of Uttar Pradesh during the demolition."
  • "...forcing it to resign after 13 days." Maybe "...forcing the government to resign after 13 days."
2002 Gujarat Violence
  • "On 27 February 2002, a train carrying Hindu pilgrims was burned outside..." Who burned it?
  • "...then Gujarat chief minister..." needs a hyphen, I think: "then-Gujarat chief minister"
General election defeat 2004, 2009
General election victory, 2014
Social policies and Hindutva
Economic policies
Foreign policy
  • "Leading RSS and BJP figures criticised..." Who? Naming one of the critics would make the sentence less nebulous.
  • There's a [clarification needed] tag here, and I understand why: earlier you say the Kargil War ended with the ouster of Pakistani troops from a disputed region; here, it says no territory changed hands. Which is it?
    • I've addressed the first point, though the source is rather thin on names. As to the clarify tag; I confess I don't quite see the issue, but this is perhaps because I know the details. Here is what happened; perhaps you can think of a better phrasing. The entire Kashmir region is disputed. Some of the state has been in Pakistani hands since 1948, and some in Indian. Infiltrators from Pakistan were discovered in some Indian held territory, across the Line-of-control that has been in place for a while. After some fighting, the infiltrators were expelled from the previously Indian held territory. The line of control did not shift. Now if there is a concise way to summarize that, I'd be happy to hear it. Vanamonde93 (talk) 13:41, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Since the first point has now been deleted by AP, here is the original quote. It is fairly obviously relevant; I welcome suggestions on paraphrasing. "M.S.Golwalkar, the founding guru of BJP’s parent body RSS, ridiculed India’s description as a land of ahimsa (non-violence) since “every Hindu god is armed.” Foreign Minister Jaswant Singh blamed the “ersatz pacifism” of Buddhist, Jain, Vaishnav- Bhakti and Gandhian views for “twisting India’s strategic culture into all kinds of absurdities” and enfeebling a once fierce nation. The argument goes that one has only to peruse core ancient Indian treatises, Arthashastra and Mahabharata, to glean the “essence of the Indian military mind” which enabled Hindu kings to extend their sways as far as Central and Southeast Asia. For ideologue K.N. Govindacharya, forging a Hindu India “embracing Kshatriya/Shakti [warrior] tradition of revolutionaries instead of the timorous Brahminical Bhakti [devotional] tradition” is the main psychological makeover for BJP foreign policy." Chaulia, 2002.

Commenting on invite/request Diff. I think this is not due in this article. Golwalkar was not the founding father of RSS, Hedgewar was. RSS was not the originating body of BJP, it was Jana Sangh. Golwalkar died before the formation of BJP and never fought any election or campained for any party in his life. Mentioning him and relating it to BJP is not correct. I do not see the quote suggesting that India had a militant past and BJP wishes to uphold that. We have very good academic peer reviewed journals discussing India's foreign policy under NDA's regime and we can/have use them. --AmritasyaPutraT 09:56, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The point isn't that the BJP was attempting to uphold a militant past, but that the idea of a militant past informed the thinking of the BJP. It is undeniable that Golwalkar was never directly involved with the BJP; it is equally undeniable that he was a major influence on its thinking, especially the old guard from the Jana Sangh days. I think we should get a third opinion here; Coemgenus, what do you think? Vanamonde93 (talk) 10:29, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Images

Most look fine, with good fair use justifications where necessary. One question, though:

Notes

That should do it for now. I'll put this on hold and await your reply. --Coemgenus (talk) 17:58, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Dubious

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Regarding: "its period in power saw a rise in support for the RSS, marked by a wave of communal violence in the early 1980s." BJP came to power first time in 1998. Congress was in power in 1980-98. And for the biggest riot of early 1980s is 1984 sikh riots Congress ministers where directly implicated. This statement is factually impossible. --AmritasyaPutraT 19:19, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The full sentence reads "Historian Ramachandra Guha writes that despite the factional wars within the Janata government, its period in power saw a rise in support for the RSS, marked by a wave of communal violence in the early 1980s." This makes it crystal clear that the second part of the sentence refers to the Janata government, not the BJP. Vanamonde93 (talk) 22:58, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Congress was in power in 1980-98. and as I gave reference the biggest communal riot of early 1980s was 1984 anti-Sikh riots for which Congress is held responsible directly. --AmritasyaPutraT 01:34, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
If you had made it clear that your objection was to the dating and not the riots, it would have helped. Here is the quote, and I am tweaking the article appropriately. I suspect that the previous version of the sentence was a product of previous disputes, or alternatively lost in translation with multiple copy-edits. "There was once more a distinct political party to represent and advance the ‘Hindu’ interest. As it happened, the formation of the BJP heralded a wave of religious violence in northern and western India. There were major Hindu-Muslim riots in the Uttar Pradesh towns of Moradabad (August 1980) and Meerut (September–October 1982); in the Bihar town of Biharsharif in April–May 1981; in the Gujarat towns of Vadodara (September 1981), Godhra (October 1981) and Ahmedabad (January 1982); in Hyderabad, capital of Andhra Pradesh, in September 1983; and in the Maharashtra towns of Bhiwandi and Bombay in May–June 1984. In each case the riots ran on for days, with much loss of life and property, and were finally quelled only by armed force." Guha, pg 563-64. Vanamonde93 (talk) 12:53, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for your correction. But do not blame me, I am helping you improve the article. I made my point amply clear. It is alright if you failed to see the point previously; you can always ask your doubts. mm --AmritasyaPutraT 13:06, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Considering your track record on this page, it is hardly surprising that I bridled somewhat easily. Don't cry wolf, and all that sort of thing; or have you forgotten Koenrad Elst and that book already? Vanamonde93 (talk) 14:24, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I hope you can be more civil. Thank you. Another misrepresentation which was corrected earlier. --AmritasyaPutraT 14:57, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks

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for your review, Coemgenus. I will go through the points you raised, and address them; give me a couple of days. Regards, Vanamonde93 (talk) 22:58, 31 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Guha 2007

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Coemgenus, Vanamonde93, I noticed there are some exceptional and highly critical remark mostly sourced to one book Guha 2007. It wasn't an academic thesis or peer reviewed work or even an academic publication. I could not locate it on jstor or questia or mylibrary British Council, I have a non English hard copy but I am not able to match page numbers. It was published by Pan Macmillan which deals with literature publication. And we just noticed a mistake sourced to this book in the section "dubious" above. This raises doubts on using it on 23 occasions for such claims. It is quite possible there are others, how can I check it most suitably (since I do not find it on my no-bars subscription in three reputed sites)? It is also needed because Guha has always been critical of BJP and sympathetic towards Congress (I remember reading his chapter on Emergency where he summarized that India wasn't ready for a brave-heart lady like Indira, indirectly absolving her and putting the blame on common masses for the emergency and its difficulties) and using him for BJP bashing is a suitable deception someone might have done in this article. --AmritasyaPutraT 13:41, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The reasons for using Guha are numerous, and somewhat obvious, if you know the topic. Guha is perhaps the best known, and certainly one of the best known, among Indian historians. India after Gandhi is essentially the only text that comprehensively covers Indian history since its independence. Despite being relatively recent, it is already considered a classic text; I know of several universities, both within in India and outside it, that use it as a course text. I have yet to hear of academics accusing Guha of bias in his scholarship. Finally, Wikipedia does not require neutral sources; only reliable ones, and Guha is eminently reliable. Vanamonde93 (talk) 14:33, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
He is reliable. This source is not so much, and I said why. And I said why we should check again. Any help in that direction is appreciated. --AmritasyaPutraT 15:03, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
No, you haven't, really; you've given me some speculations, is all. Palgrave macmillan publishes fiction, certainly, but the bulk of its stuff is academic, and that is what it is known for. It has editorial oversight of the highest quality. This makes it reliable. Unless you bring further information into this discussion, I'm not really interested in pursuing it. Vanamonde93 (talk) 15:11, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I expressed my concern and sought assistance. I humbly disagree that this is an academic publication. And why is not in any online subscription? Who is the editor? I will wait for any other guidance or continue with whatever resource I have. --AmritasyaPutraT 15:27, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
On WorldCat, I found 6 libraries within 25 miles of my home that have this book. It seems perfectly reputable to me. I'll assume good faith and accept the source as valid, as far as the GA review is concerned. --Coemgenus (talk) 18:50, 1 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
My main concern is any misrepresentation from it. That was the case in previous section "dubious". --AmritasyaPutraT 02:30, 2 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Update. I may not be able to check further due to time cosntraint. I made two minor improvements according to the source here and here. Thank you. --AmritasyaPutraT 07:51, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Also redone this edit which was removed here. --AmritasyaPutraT 10:51, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Prose for the table

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This concerns mainly the prose for the table at the General election results section. I feel the prose already repeats the content in the above history section, so the table can supplement that rather than have its own section with additional prose. Previously mentioned at Talk:Bharatiya_Janata_Party#Prose_in_general_elections_list and Talk:Bharatiya_Janata_Party/Archive_3#GA_nom. As reviewer, what do you think? -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 09:55, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I think the first two tables are fine as they are. I had considered earlier suggesting that the list of party presidents be moved to its own article. Since others seem to agree, I'll suggest that now. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:40, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I will make the move shortly. I intend to just cut and paste, and flesh it out afterward, and any help is welcome. Vanamonde93 (talk) 02:45, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I moved the list to List of Presidents of the Bharatiya Janata Party. Comments and suggestions are welcome. Vanamonde93 (talk) 07:49, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Neutrality and other concerns with this article

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I have mentioned most of these concerns already (see the archives) but the problems persist in the article. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:49, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I agree with some of them and not with others. Like the further reading section or order of sections isn't a requirement or a violation. Others should be discussed and improved as part of good article review. I agree with some of the concerns of neutrality raised. --AmritasyaPutraT 17:47, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

1 (Sources with anti-BJP bias not attributed or balanced)

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  • There is undue weight given to Guha. He is a notable historian, but the book cited is a history on India, not on the BJP or political parties specifically, and he clearly has an anti-BJP pov. Imagine if the Republican Party Article would rely that much on general history of the U.S. written by an author with an anti-Republican stance. We can cite him, but to add balance other authors should also be used, and his non-neutral statements should be attributed to his opinion.
I would say, keep the references, but the controversial should be attributed to Guha, and for some of them, the response by BJP or others should be given. This is not the case in many places. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:36, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

2 (Integral Humanism)

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  • Integral Humanism is the official philosophy of the BJP. It is only mentioned in a single sentence. This is far too less. As long as this is not treated sufficiently in the article, this article should not be a Good Article. (Some sources are Koenraad Elst's Decolonizing the Hindu Mind (he discusses it in about 15 pages), G. Heuze "Ou va l'inde moderne", and Graham "Hindu nationalism".)

"The BJP defines its ideology as based on "integral humanism" and its constitution states that the party is committed to "nationalism and national integration, democracy, Gandhian Socialism, Positive Secularism, that is 'Sarva Dharma Samabhav', and value-based politics".

    • It might be a good idea to include a paragraph on integral humanism. --Coemgenus (talk) 14:25, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
      • Coemgenus, I am happy to add details if it is deemed necessary. However, I would point out that the stated ideologies of the BJP are mentioned in various places; "swadeshi" in the economic policies section, and "positive secularism" in the social policies/hindutva. Academic coverage of the BJP has tended not to go into integral humanism very much, nor does it feature prominently in the media; so I personally feel the current level of coverage is appropriate. Vanamonde93 (talk) 08:51, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
How can you say that a single sentence, "The official philosophy of the BJP is "Integral humanism"", is appropriate coverage for the official philosophy of the BJP?--Calypsomusic (talk) 12:54, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
        • How about this: under "Social policies and Hindutva", add a brief description of what it means. "The official philosophy of the BJP is "Integral humanism", which is [description]." Just enough to let the reader know whether he wants to click the link for more information or be satisfied with the summary. --Coemgenus (talk) 11:12, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
          • I would appreciate some help with that. Scholarly interpretations with what IH means are already covered. The summary of IH as created by its proponents is very peacocky, and I have struggled to strike a balance. Vanamonde93 (talk) 11:17, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I may add 2-3 sentences on this over the weekend, using Elst's "Decolonizing the Hindu Mind" from Rupa Publications since that is the book I have available, and is the most detailled scholarly and secondary source I know of on this topic, and maybe 1-2 other sources. I have seen that there are also books with the title "Integral Humanism", but I don't have those. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:54, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Yes, balance and NPOV are important. I'm not looking for much, just a sentence or so, reliably sourced --Coemgenus (talk) 12:56, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I could give this a shot; a way around it might be to simply attribute the statement to the BJP constitution or to Deendayal Upadhyay, and thus get around any problems in wording. Vanamonde93 (talk) 22:06, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Coemgenus, I've taken a shot at this; please take a look. Vanamonde93 (talk) 06:23, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I have added a fuller description on the meaning and history of the official BJP party doctrine (Integral humanism). It is not perfect, but as it stands now, its ok. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:37, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
My additions were removed. There should be a fuller description for the official doctrine and philosophy of the BJP.--Calypsomusic (talk) 12:21, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Why is the style of the sections in this article so different than that of other major political parties, viz the REP, DEM, and Indian congress parties? In absence of a style policy, the Democratic party and Republican party articles should be considered as best practice for major parties articles. In these articles, the orders of the sections starts with economic policies, and then "social policies" (and not social policies and Hindutva). In the Congress Party article, the order also begins with Economics. It would be more neutral if the same Manual of Style would be followed here also. The economy focused politicians in the BJP are arguably more important within the power structure of the BJP.
Not really npov, but ok enough. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:38, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Article is also missing a lot of information compared to Democratic Party (United States) and the Republican Party (United States) articles. It should have sections on the BJP's name and symbols (about the BJP flag), more about Integral Humanism, environemental policy,.... It is incomplete. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:21, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

4 (textbooks)

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  • The article criticizes the BJP for the NCERT textbooks, but does only give the viewpoint of the BJP critics, without also mentioning the BJP viewpoint (for example, that there were also accusations of bias in textbooks before and after the BJP).
Here is one source saying "that what was being termed as saffronisation by the Leftists was nothing but correcting the distortions interpolated by Marxist historians. The NCERT books conformed to the national curriculum framework of school education-2000, it said. The Supreme Court had upheld the validity of the curriculum and rejected allegations of saffronisation, the resolution said.Opposition to the UPA’s attempt to change the text would form a weapon in the BJP’s Hindutva arsenal, the resolution hinted. The book developed during the NDA regime gave respect to all communities and religion rather than follow the Marxist attempt at denigrating India’s historical past. In the earlier NCERT text books there were passages that hurt the sensitivities of many communities like the Sikhs, the Brahmins, the Jains and the Jats through “willful denigration.” A national hero like Guru Teg Bahadur was described as a robber who committed plunder, it said."
Maybe we could also cite Arun Shourie on this.
Here we still need a counter-argument from BJP or other source, otherwise it is not neutral. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:39, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

5 (illegal immigrants and refugees)

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  • Section on Bangladesh immigrants and refugees: I have looked up the source, and found this quote in the source: ultimately however it was an Indian government led by the Congress Party under the leadership of Narasimha Rao that after 1991 instated the harshest measures against undocumented immigrants. This means that the source accuses both the BJP and the Congress party, and the Congress party it says had the "harshest measures". So why is this only in the BJP article, and why does it not say that the Congress party is also accused of this. What is the point to have this section in the BJP article at all, if also the Congress party is accused of this, and Bangladesh is a majority Muslim country, so what is the issue in saying that most refugees would be minorities (in this case, minorities are Hindu or Christian)?
In my opinion, the whole paragraph about this should be left out. Firstly, the source criticzes both political parties and the Congress party even more. Secondly, as AP said, it is not noteworthy that a party is against illegal immigration. Thirdly, Bangladesh is a majority Muslim country where attacks against the Hindu and Christian minority happen as they do also in Pakistan, so you would expect Hindu and Christian refugees. I have never heard of attacks of the minorities against the majority Muslims in Bangladesh (but let me know if I'm wrong), so you would expect that Muslim immigrants from Bangladesh are not refugees. Then what is the point of criticizing the BJP for what is more or less common sense? Also, Modi and BJP has acted against the separitists who recently attacked Mulisms in NorthEastern India and the section does not mention it. --Calypsomusic (talk) 13:08, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I still think this should be left out, but I have at least added a response from a BJP source. With the addition, it is more neutral. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:42, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

My addition was removed, making the section again non-neutral. It doesn't matter if the source is older, academic sources are always some years behind. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:21, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]


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  • "The failure of the moderate strategy championed by Vajpayee led to a shift in the ideology of the party toward a policy of more hardline Hindutva and Hindu fundamentalism". I couldn't find the quote, could the full quote be provided on this talkpage? It is also pov, such a statement should also be written neutrally. You have to say, "according to ..."
It should also be attributed to the source. Can the full quote be provided? But it is ok enough. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:43, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

7 (Godhra and Gujarat riots)

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  • The section on the Gujarat riots. It should clearly state that it was an attack upon Hindus, not merely seen as one. That is what the commission and the court concluded. The section should also state the official numbers of the vicims, 790 Muslims and 254 Hindus, and not just estimations.
    • It seems there's a great deal of disagreement about this. It would be nice if you guys could arrive at some consensus that was adequately accurate and neutral. --Coemgenus (talk) 14:25, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
      • I agree with Coemgenus, lets leave it like that or you propose a wording and seek consensus. It is a controversial subject and not entirely central to this page. --AmritasyaPutraT 17:47, 4 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
        • The language right now is about as neutral as we can make it; raking this up again is just opening a big can of worms. In general, we should trust the academic source over the government one; the court ruling has very little weight. Vanamonde93 (talk) 02:39, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
          • I wouldn't just dismiss this with "raking this up" if s/he has a concern. But yes, s/he should propose a better statement. There is no denying that this page has broad coverage of Babri and 2002 in "BJP(1980-present)" section -- from formation till now! That makes it unbalanced/less focused in that section. --AmritasyaPutraT 02:52, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Then we should mention both the official numbers (which many academics will also mention) and the estimates by these scholars, as both are notable, and the opinion of an academic is not necessarily more trustworthy than the court, as they can also be biased. --Calypsomusic (talk) 13:15, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
A discussion that deep gets off topic. As far as this GA review is concerned, let's just leave it be. I doubt everyone can be satisfied with any wording. --Coemgenus (talk) 18:36, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
It can not be off topic if the section is included in this article. I have concerns that the section is not neutral and have explained the issue. What is so difficult about also including the offical, court or commission version? It is also known that some of the sources used in the article have an anti BJP pov, so where possible, balance should be given. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:48, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The section is not neutral. It makes all kinds of accusations against the BJP, but does not even mention that it was an attack by mobs on the train, and what the actual numbers of the victims were. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:21, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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  • Finally, some books were removed from the further reading section, even though they are on topic:
    • Ramesh N. Rao: Coalition conundrum: the BJP's trials, tribulations, and triumphs, Har Anand Publications, 2001
    • Gurdas M. Ahuja. BJP and the Indian Politics: Policies & Programmes of the Bharatiya Janata Party (1994)
    • Gurdas M. Ahuja. Bharatiya Janata Party and Resurgent India (2004) ISBN 900534-4-2
    • And the book by Elst (see discussion archives).

9 (LK Advani Rath Yatra, other issues)

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Another point is that the Babri section is also not neutral. L.K.Advani made reportedly no anti-Muslim remarks during the Rath Yatra, he broke down in tears when the demolition happened and described it as the blackest or saddest day of his life or of India. The way it is written, these nuances in favor of Advani are not explained, which is not neutral. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:47, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

The whole article focuses on many instances of allegations of anti-Muslim biases. To be neutral, the article should also mention the Muslim friendly actions by the BJP, for example, Muslim politicians in the BJP, the BJP increased the subsidy the government gives to Muslims for the Haj pilgrimage,etc. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:47, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

As far as the GA review is concerned, I think the article achieves a neutral point of view. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:01, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
For anyone acquainted with the topic, it is obvious that the article is not npov, and I have explained some of these issues. Shouldn't special care given to NPOV in a good article, or am I missing something? There are also a couple of other issues, for example, the article claims that the party is strictly hierarchical, but does not mention that it also has very strong internal democratic processes within the BJP.--Calypsomusic (talk) 13:07, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
The section on LK Advani and his yatra is also very pov. It calls the yatra militant, while it doesn't say that the yatra was entirley peaceful. It implicitly accusses senior leaders of the BJP like Advani for the violence and destruction that happened, although the senior leaders like Advani did their best to avoid any violence. That the yatra itself was responsible for the violence is just one of many opinions (there are other opinions, for example many Muslims accused the PM and his government to let the violence and destruction happen, because once this happened, the public support that the BJP gained would vanish). Other opinions, like that of Advani, needs to be given, which I have begun to include. The article is not balanced, it focuses too much on negative sides. For example, the article has many instances of allegations of anti-Muslim biases. To be balanced, some pro-Muslim actions and dialogue of the BJP could be included. --Calypsomusic (talk) 13:07, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I was about to put a NPOV tag on the article. But I have now made some additions which make the article more neutral. With some more work, it could hopefully be fairly neutral enough. --Calypsomusic (talk) 13:06, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I have added a NPOV tag to the article, since my attempts to make the article more neutral were reverted. These issues need to be solved before the tag is removed. --Calypsomusic (talk) 13:14, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

There is also a whole paragraph on the Liberhans report, but only the anti-BJP opinion, without mentioning the BJP opinion on it. Like elsewhere, there is a strong focus on anti-BJP opinions, while the BJP opinion is left out. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:21, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Most of my concerns I already voiced months ago. I told you already then that one single sentence about Integral Humanism is by far not enough and even pointed you to sources, you could have fixed that during these months. You could also have asked yourself what could you do to make the article more neutral. This requires not just relying on your preferred sources which are biased against the BJP, but also using other sources that are neutral or even sympathetic to the BJP. Special care must be taken for npov for existing policital parties, this has not yet been taken in this article.

The neutrality is the biggest problem in this article. But the article is also missing a lot of important information. There should be a section on the BJP's name and symbols (about the BJP flag), more about Integral Humanism, environemental policy, .... The Democratic Party (United States) and the Republican Party (United States) articles are much better articles than the BJP article, they have much more breadth and scope. But even these much better articles are not good articles. I won't have much time to work on this this month, but will have more time next month. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:21, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Outdated sections needing update/expansion

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@Vanamonde93 and Coemgenus: there is nothing in "Defence and terrorism" after 2001 and there is nothing in "Foreigh policy" after 1999. I think we should be able to trace it to a more recent time. I can help with it. --AmritasyaPutraT 09:17, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

This is simply because the incidents and policies that were most significant are from that period. There is no point in listing all of the international visits and conferences that the party was involved in. As and when there is a systematic review of the Modi government's foreign policy, it can be added; currently, such does not exist. Newspaper sources are highly suspect in this regard, for reasons I have covered before. Vanamonde93 (talk) 09:38, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Diff, I have tried to bring it upto 2004 using two academic peer-reviewed Journal articles specifically discussing India's foreign relation and economic stand. Surely we can find references Vanamonde93, and if we do not find peer-reviewed Journal we can still do with other sources, we do not need to necessarily leave the article incomplete if there is a lack of academic journal's covering that particular topic yet. What do you say? --AmritasyaPutraT 10:38, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I have no problems with additions per se; but the current ones seem to be highly redundant. I will make an attempt to make them less so. Give me a little time. What I was trying to say was that the article is not really incomplete; as is frequent with many governments, the broad policy changes of the government tend to be enacted in the first couple of years, and that has been the case here. Both your additions are accurate but very, very general; the article already covers essentially all those points, at a more detailed level, and I am not convinced we need those. I also feel that given the large number of changes that have been made tonight, we should both hold off of editing the article for 12 hours at the very least, to allow Coemgenus to express their opinions. Vanamonde93 (talk) 10:51, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with you Vanamonde93, will wait for others to respond. My additions are from peer reviewed academic journals discussing the very specific topic and covering a time frame which is not already discussed. I do not see that it is repetetion. I may add further details if you suggest so, that would be the right way to go as peer reviewed academic journals are best sources. --AmritasyaPutraT 11:21, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I take that back, at least in part; the economic policies source is useful, especially now that I have reworded it for clarity. I will take a look at the foreign policy one now. Vanamonde93 (talk) 07:10, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I have reworded the foreign policy addition slightly (paraphrasing, rather than copying). I have also removed the "re-evaluated relations" sentence, simply because without further context it is not useful (reevaluated from what? what were the new relations?) and this context is not available in the source, which I read. Nonetheless, a post-2004 summary has now been included. Coemgenus, could you take a look? Vanamonde93 (talk) 07:26, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
checkY Agreed. I am good with your modifications Vanamonde93, I think "realism" cannot be substituted with "pragmatism", it is debatable and we can simply stick with the word that was used by Lall. What to do you think? --AmritasyaPutraT 08:12, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Good god, the two of us agreed on something? This is a moment to be celebrated. Personally I feel the substitution is fine, but I will change it back, in the interests of moving this review forward. Would you take a look at the "militant past" section above, where I provided the quote? Vanamonde93 (talk) 09:17, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Thumbs up icon Commented in that section. --AmritasyaPutraT 09:58, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Reference duplication

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According to Ugog Nizdast, who was performed several GA reviews, all material that could be contested requires a supporting inline citation, even if the actual citation is provided later in the paragraph. This was mentioned by Ugog when he looked over the article soon after the nomination [1] and I implemented it soon after. AmritasyaPutra, I would therefore appreciate if you self-reverted the removal of those duplications. Vanamonde93 (talk) 09:48, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for writing. In fact, I hold the same opinion and give similar advice when conducting GA reviews. Please add it to any exceptional/contentious statement. It does not require tagging several sentences back to back if they are not exceptional. --AmritasyaPutraT 10:08, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
Well then, your definition of what is exceptional is clearly different from his; I duplicated only to those sentences which he tagged. Vanamonde93 (talk) 10:12, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
checkY Okay Vanamonde93, I have reverted. Thank you. --AmritasyaPutraT 10:15, 5 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Use of Venkatesan's article

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Calypso, if you intend to use the article "The Laxman Line" by Venkatesan, [2], then you should at the very least neutrally represent what he is saying. Here is the full quote; "The new emphasis on gaining the trust of the minorities is inducing certain curious changes in the pattern of utterances issuing from the party leadership. When in Opposition, the BJP lost no opportunity to castigate the Congress(I) for providing a subsi dy in the matter of the air fare for the Haj pilgrimage, which in its eyes then was a symbol of minority appeasement. Today, the BJP proudly advertises its decision to increase the subsidy given to the pilgrims." Venkatesan, 2000. This is outright source mis-representation, because he is accusing the BJP of hypocrisy. I had in fact come across this source during my research; I chose to leave it out precisely because of this. I have removed it for now; if you want to use it, represent it accurately. Vanamonde93 (talk) 13:01, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

I didn't read the full article, but used a quote from the article I saw in a book. The point that needs to be illustrated is that the BJP also made pro-Muslim actions and inititiaves, which must also be mentioned. One of them is that it increased the subsidy given to the pilgrims. Rather than deleting the fact, we can add that it previously opposed the subsidy. --Calypsomusic (talk) 12:21, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Regarding all that you mentioned missing in the current article, be bold and add it yourself. The Good article criteria is more lenient than you think, and criteria 3a concerns the article's coverage, that's entirely upto the reviewer to decide. This review is closed, so use the main talk page henceforth. You've mentioned neutrality concerns at Talk:Bharatiya Janata Party#Neutrality of this article is disputed and that's still open. We're waiting for you so that a 2nd (technically 3rd) attempt can be made to nominate it for GA. -Ugog Nizdast (talk) 14:46, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I am not sure that WP:BOLD will help here. There is a dispute about neutrality. Calypso seems to have some long-standing grievances and he finds it an opportune moment to raise them. I have suggested a way forward on the talk page. Kautilya3 (talk) 20:16, 9 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Closing comments

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I think this is a well-written, fairly NPOV article. I regret that the current edit war is escalating, target than approaching consensus. The nominator has done fine work here, and I hope that if the editors can come to a consensus over the disputed sections, this article may someday achieve Good Article status. But for now, it lacks stability and I must fail it. I'm sorry to do it. It is an illustration of how it is easier to destroy an article than to create one, which is Wikipedia's greatest flaw. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:36, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Coemgenus, I appreciate the time and effort you put into the review. I would, however, point out that the disputes and edit wars flared up literally in the process of review; might they not then assumed to be a function of the review? Personally, I cannot but help suspect ulterior motive, when an editor comes out from a 6-month period of no editing, to do nothing but raise old disputes on this page. Regardless of whether the article is currently ready for a GA, it seems to me that such behavior can easily be repeated should the article be renominated, and seems like an easy way to preclude it from ever reaching that status. Therefore, I would appreciate you weighing on the disputes rather than abandoning them, especially since some of the "non-neutral" sections are those which you yourself had felt were neutral. Vanamonde93 (talk) 13:43, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I agree with most of what you've said, but that doesn't change the fact that the article is now the subject of an edit war. If the editors can all act in good faith and get it under control, I hope you'll resubmit it for GA. I'll gladly review it again and help to pass it if it's up to the standards. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:51, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
I appreciate that. I wasn't so much referring to this nomination as to the discussions here, and to the possibility that it could be edit-warred to a fail on frivolous grounds at any point, regardless of readiness. It seems to me that the only way to nix some of these debates is for a third party to say enough is enough, one way or another, and even that often doesn't do it. If you have any other suggestions, I would be happy to hear them. If you had taken a look through the talk page archives, you would see that a lot of the disputes brought up here, the sources used, whatnot, should have been dead and gone because they have been discussed previously with precisely the same editors. How would you deal with said situation? Vanamonde93 (talk) 13:57, 6 February 2015 (UTC)[reply]
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