Talk:Belgrade Theatre/GA1
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Reviewer: Alan Islas (talk · contribs) 15:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
Hi, Ballpointbiro, I'll be taking on this review. More to be added as I work through the article, but see initial comments below:
- The lead section needs to be expanded to include the main topics of the article with the appropriate weight. This essay might be useful as a guide: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:How_to_create_and_manage_a_good_lead_section#Content_and_structure
- I don't think it is necessary to include full list of staff members. Perhaps some of the names could be included in the Management section, as part of the text instead of a list format.
- Add Authority control template
- Perhaps one or more images could be added that show a closer view of the building. There are some available in Commons.
- The subsection "Events in collaboration with Coventry UK City of Culture" might be redundant.
--Alan Islas (talk) 15:18, 21 April 2021 (UTC)
More:
- The first paragraph of the "Design and Construction" section relies heavily on the Gould reference. Found a couple of sources from Dr Alistair Fair that might be useful, an online article: https://c20society.org.uk/building-of-the-month/belgrade-theatre-coventry and a journal article: https://www.jstor.org/stable/41418357?seq=1 (as you probably know, JSTOR can be accessed with the Wikipedia library card platform).
- An image of the extension of the theatre would be useful to add. Found this one in Commons, but perhaps there are more:
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- More information and archive links could be added to some of the sources. For example, reference 15 about theatre in education does have a named author.
- Paraphrasing might be too close to the text of reference 15 (about the Pow Wow project).
Alan Islas (talk) 13:10, 22 April 2021 (UTC)
It has been two weeks without any response. Failing. Alan Islas (talk) 22:57, 5 May 2021 (UTC)