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1st Review

Dannyryan33, I'm pleased to see you have sufficient content for a good start of the Wikipedia article. I recommend:

make sure any non-novel claim is sourced, this is very important.
remove the editorializing terms (see example templates); if a harbor is "great" for example, that's not for us to say. If someone reputable/notable said it, then we need to quote them.
in order to get to a minimum viable product, don't delay too much longer on the first 2 issues, even if it means putting other sections aside for the moment.

-Reagle (talk) 18:45, 30 October 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 7 September 2021 and 17 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dannyryan33.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 17:53, 17 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

Hey @Dannyryan33: You have an extensive article so far that covers a lot of ground. I think the lead intro could be clearer; I'm still not sure whether Bearskin Neck is a peninsula (isn't Cape Ann itself the peninsula?), a village, or a section of the town Rockport (all in one probably, but could be clarified). You have detailed and reliable sources, but text itself could use more citations. After the minor clean-up stuff is done, I think an image of the place would make this article perfect. I shot ahead and made some copy editing changes. It's up to your interpretation, but I think moving Motif Number 1 and Granite Shipping out of the history section would be good since they're still around and relevant. --LatakiaHill (talk) 03:07, 12 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]