Talk:Battle of Cer/GA1

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 19:42, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 19:42, 30 June 2013 (UTC)

• Capitalize mountain: Cer Mountain

Done.

• Stocks of munitions: had better munition stocks,

Fixed.

Check again.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:30, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

How about now ? 23 editor (talk) 01:53, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

• Only name year in dates on first mention or if its in another paragraph.

Done.

• Not necessary to give nationality of each unit if it's clear who it belongs to.

Removed.

• "the Cer" reads very oddly. Use either just Cer or Cer Mountain.

Done.

• Second use of this phrase: across the Drina brought an end to the first Austro-Hungarian invasion of Serbia Reword one or the other.

The repeating sentence has been removed.

• Cannon is both singular and plural.
  • Remove the "s"--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 01:30, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

Done. 23 editor (talk) 01:55, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

• Any book or source that you don't use in the article should either be deleted or moved to a "Further reading" section

All books and sources provided seem to be used as refs in the article.

• Image licenses good
• Couple of duplicate links that need to be removed

Done. 23 editor (talk) 00:07, 8 July 2013 (UTC)

• External links good, no DABs.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 02:42, 4 July 2013 (UTC)