Talk:Backspacer/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 01:13, 9 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it well written?
A. The prose is clear and concise, and the spelling and grammar are correct:

B. It complies with the manual of style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation:
Is it verifiable with no original research, as shown by a source spot-check?
A. It contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline:

B. Reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose):

C. It contains no original research:

D. It contains no copyright violations nor plagiarism:
Is it broad in its coverage?
A. It addresses the main aspects of the topic:

B. It stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style):
Is it neutral?
It represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each:
Is it stable?
It does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute:
Is it illustrated, if possible, by images?
A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content:

B. Images are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:
Overall:
Pass or Fail:

Infobox

Include release date in "Release and reception" section
Put locations of studios in brackets as seen in California King Bed

Lead

According to WP:LEAD#Length, articles with more than 15,000 characters but less than 30,000 characters need a lead of two or three paragraphs
Expand lead section to include chart history, certifications, accolades, etc.
Backspacer is the ninth studio album by the American alternative rock band Pearl Jam, released on September 20, 2009. – Include release information at end of first paragraph

Recording

No issues

Music and lyrics

According to WP:SAMPLE#Guidelines, an audio sample should be less than 10% of original recording up to thirty seconds. "The Fixer" must be less than 17.7 seconds and about 64kbps in quality.

Release and reception

Those who purchase the Compact Disc... – "Compact Disc" does not need to be capitalized
...where it holds an 79 after 24 reviews or "generally positive" reviews. – "...where it received a 79/100 on an average of 24 reviews, which indicated "generally positive" reviews."
Allmusic should not be in year-end chart if it did not rank at all
Album chart information should be in separate section; certification should be separate from charting info, but in same section

Packaging

Try and rename the section to fit all details within it
On the cover and spine of the limited edition gatefold sleeve version, the "Backspacer" keys glow in the dark. – Should not be standalone sentence
Album artwork can have its own section while the album title could be in a "Background" section

Promotion

Not all singles released from album have sources to validate information

Track listing

Sources are needed to validate all information in this section

Personnel

Sources are needed to validate information

References

According to this, there are ten dead links and others with suspicious activity and connection issues.

Overall review

After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to fail the article at this time. Here are the main reasons why:

MoS compliance with Lead: The article should have a two or three paragraph lead because it has between 15,000 and 30,000 characters, according to WP:LEAD#Length.
Accordance to music samples: Audio samples should be less than 10% of original recording up to thirty seconds, according to WP:SAMPLE#Guidelines.
Citations of reliable sources where necessary/No original research: There are some sections that do not contain sources, making it violate WP:VERIFY and WP:NOR
Reference usage: Ten references are dead links and others have suspicious activity and connection issues, making it violate WP:DEADREF.

It is in good faith that I believe this article does not meet the good article criteria to the point where it can not be fixed in the general seven days. Once you have addressed these issues, you are welcome to renominate. Rp0211 ^(talk2me) 02:47, 9 August 2011 (UTC)[reply]