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Well, as per the tags on the top of the page, there are quotes that do not immediately site sources (not permitted by policy; see WP:NFC and WP:BLP) and extensive quotations - the entire commentary on the band at [1], for instance. The writing would be nicely colorful for a piece of journalism, but we don't pass judgment on whether or not something is sad: "Sadly, the belated honor was too late". Not even if we think it is. :) The first paragraph under "Biography" is a doozy and should probably be broken into multiple paragraphs. Much of the content seems to have been copied from The Famous Flames, which needed attribution, but I've added that in. There is concern expressed by another editor that some may have been copied from other places as well. Reading through the policies linked in the template at the talk may be helpful; WP:TONE would probably also assist. --Moonriddengirl(talk)23:13, 9 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I've removed and rewritten a decent amount due to other PAG issues. What remains is either copied from the Famous Flames article or fine from a CV standpoint. Sennecaster (Chat) 01:26, 23 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
