Talk:Aviation accident analysis

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A great start - though it is also commonly called "Reason's Model". I'd check Wikipedia for this to make sure that it doesn't already exist. It would also be great to include a picture to enhance this article. Most sources were good but they weren't all from peer-reviewed journal articles. Great startSkearns4 (talk) 18:01, 27 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Hseong2 edited your article

Hey, I edited your spellings, grammars, and linked some words to other articles to make sure that your article is not an orphan. Try to add more information regarding the application of Reason's model. Hseong2 (talk) 21:24, 18 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]

peer reveiwed by yliu929

the whole article is well organized, but maybe to consider to keep the article with same structure; to using the same format for the Investigation using Reason's model. Such bode the key worlds for point form paragraphs

switch around couple sentence in active failure which explain the concept first then giving examples.so it can be more flow with the rest concepts.

little detail to think about maybe changing subtitle into Reason's model Applications instead. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Yliu929 (talk • contribs) 23:03, 18 November 2015 (UTC)[reply]