Talk:Austin Wolf/GA1

GA Review

Unsuccessful. Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 06:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.

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Nominator: Benmite (talk · contribs) 06:14, 23 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 12:54, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the contributions to this article. Will proceed right away. Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 12:54, 4 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Lede

Remove and won three International Escort Awards. It doesn't belong there
Reword here He made his debut as a pornographic actor in 2012 with the gay pornographic studio Randy Blue, with whom he worked for three years before signing an exclusive contract with Falcon Studios
Change He began working exclusively with CockyBoys starting in 2019 and with Men.com starting in 2023. Perhaps "He has worked for Cocky boys and Men.com in 2019 and 2023 respectively"

Early life

After Texas. Please full stop and continue perhaps "He was raised with his only younger sister".
This phrase He started coming out at age 17 to his friends and family, including his mother, who was initially upset before coming to accept Wolf's sexuality Unlink the "coming out of age"
Start the sentence with "At 17, Wolf had shown himself especially to his friends and parents; his mother was initially upset with his sexuality thigh later came to accept it."
Soon after? Never. Use Afterward, or Later.
This line To editor Soon after, he began working out and putting on muscle and, according to him, became arrogant due to becoming "society's attractive man".: Is not cited. Find reference or I advice you to remove it (looks also like a personal point of view)

@SafariScribe: Looking at this article again, I'm not sure it's ready for GA. You can deny it as well as Jacob Elordi. benǝʇᴉɯ 02:09, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Closing comment: I am failing this GA as "inactivity of the editor". The article needs more editing but I believe the editor is unwilling or maybe some personal issue. Whenever you are ready, you can nominate this again . Withdrawn by nominator also applies here!. Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 06:46, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.