Talk:Attack of the Alligators!/GA1

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Reviewer: Matthew RD 22:27, 7 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I shall be conducting the review. -- Matthew RD 22:27, 7 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

This is how the article compares against the GA criteria:

Well written: Notes below, only two notes
Factually accurate and verifiable: All fine. Passed
Broad in coverage: Passed
Neutral: Passed
Stable: No issues. Passed
Images: One image used, non-free, appropriately tagged. Passed

All titles (Mr, Mrs, Dr etc) should have full stops after them, such as Dr. Orchard, Mrs. Files.
"This was the only episode where Scott Virgil Gordon and Alan all participate in a rescue directly at the danger zone" That is trivial information, most likely posted by an IP user. I would like this statement to be removed.

That is all that needs to be done, do this, and I'll pass the article. Please do it soon, there are giant mutant alligators circling my house! :) -- Matthew RD 22:55, 7 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for reviewing! Sorry about that particular sentence, it's something that I missed before. Regarding full-stopped titles, is that in the Manual of Style somewhere? Since the article is about an episode of a British programme, it would be expected to follow BE writing conventions, in which (as I understand it), punctuation is usually not required when it comes to such titles as "Mr", etc. Sorry if asking this question leaves the alligators circling ever closer... Super Mario Man 01:24, 8 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

That's fine, the first point does not have to be rectified, as it is not a big issue, I will pass it. Nice work. Now I should really call International Rescue about those alligators. -- Matthew RD 01:31, 8 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you very much! Super Mario Man 01:35, 8 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]