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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewing this article tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Plot

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  • "he sends goons to attack him." - Goons is informal
    How about a "mobster"?
  • "Usha, is strained and attempts to marry her off are thwarted." - Who made the attempts for marriage?
    Ramalingam made the attempts and Govindam thwarted them. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.
  • What exactly is meant that Ramadasu learns his lesson?
    He comes to terms with the reality and apologises for his misdeeds. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.

Production

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  • "N. T. Rama Rao and Savitri were chosen for the leads," - leading parts
    Done

Music

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  • "Cheyi Cheyi Kaluparave" was parodied by the Indian National Congress as a part of their election campaign during the 1989 general elections." - remove "a"
    Done

Release, reception and legacy

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  • "considered the Laurel and Hardy of Telugu cinema at the time." - considered by whom?
    It was a film historian's opinion. I have tweaked it accordingly.

References

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That is what I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 12:41, 24 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks for taking up the review. I've addressed the concerns you have listed above, and i hope that i have succeeded. Yours truly, Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:38, 24 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks. Can now promote to GA review. MWright96 (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]