Talk:Appu Chesi Pappu Koodu/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
Reviewing this article tomorrow. MWright96 (talk) 20:28, 23 August 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Plot
[edit]- "he sends goons to attack him." - Goons is informal
- How about a "mobster"?
- Yes I think that is more appropriate. MWright96 (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- "Usha, is strained and attempts to marry her off are thwarted." - Who made the attempts for marriage?
- Ramalingam made the attempts and Govindam thwarted them. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.
- What exactly is meant that Ramadasu learns his lesson?
- He comes to terms with the reality and apologises for his misdeeds. I have mentioned the same as per your suggestion.
Production
[edit]- "N. T. Rama Rao and Savitri were chosen for the leads," - leading parts
- Done
Music
[edit]- "Cheyi Cheyi Kaluparave" was parodied by the Indian National Congress as a part of their election campaign during the 1989 general elections." - remove "a"
- Done
Release, reception and legacy
[edit]- "considered the Laurel and Hardy of Telugu cinema at the time." - considered by whom?
- It was a film historian's opinion. I have tweaked it accordingly.
References
[edit]- no dead links
- Thanks to Internet Archive.
That is what I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 12:41, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- @MWright96: Thanks for taking up the review. I've addressed the concerns you have listed above, and i hope that i have succeeded. Yours truly, Pavanjandhyala (talk) 15:38, 24 August 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks. Can now promote to GA review. MWright96 (talk) 16:10, 24 August 2016 (UTC)