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Did you know nomination

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by AirshipJungleman29 talk 19:00, 20 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Andrew Gillison c. 1915
Andrew Gillison c. 1915
  • ... that Australian military chaplain Andrew Gillison died on 22 August 1915 of wounds sustained while trying to rescue an injured soldier from no mans land?
  • Source: I've cited it to a book that had more detail but you can get the outline readily from: >McKernan, Michael. "Andrew Gillison (1868–1915)". Australian Dictionary of Biography. National Centre of Biography, Australian National University. Retrieved 16 July 2024.
Created by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 859 past nominations.

Dumelow (talk) 13:26, 19 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Image is public domain, article is new and sourced. Plagiarism checker flags are down to a few quotations and key facts - free of copyvio. My preference for hook would be ALT5 below, or ALT1. Arcahaeoindris (talk) 02:41, 20 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Arcahaeoindris, can you review the paraphrasing please. I reworded "appointed a part-time chaplain to the Australian military" from the lead which in summarising the article I had returned to wording close to the source. The rest of the things flagged look to be proper names of organisations or quotes which I have attributed in the article. Can you please advise on the neutrality issue, is it a concern with WP:NPOV of the article? If with the hook then the requirement at Wikipedia:Did_you_know/Guidelines only applies to living persons. That he took up arms whilst being a chaplain was certainly the most interesting fact in the article for me. Happy to look at alternatives though, I have drafted the one you recommended and a couple of others below - Dumelow (talk) 06:20, 20 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Arcahaeoindris: Please review the above. Z1720 (talk) 04:16, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Sorry @Z1720: for keeping you. I find ALT1 and ALT5 the most interesting - maybe ALT5 would be my first choice. However, there is still possible copyvio detected, above 40% for three different sources, see here. Arcahaeoindris (talk) 12:30, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Arcahaeoindris, if you look at what is being flagged by the automated tool it is largely proper names and quotations I have attributed in the article. I am happy to look at any particular instances you think are problematic but you cannot just rely on the raw output of the tool - Dumelow (talk) 08:36, 6 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Arcahaeoindris: Does the above satisfy your concerns? Z1720 (talk) 19:46, 15 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks @Z1720:. Have had another look and happy to pass this. thank you for your patience. Arcahaeoindris (talk) 03:37, 16 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Arcahaeoindris: If this DYK is approved, please add the green checkmark by pasting {{subst:DYKyes}} under this comment. Thanks, Z1720 (talk) 02:13, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Sniping as a non-combatant

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Does actively fighting while under the official status of a non-combatant not constitute a violation of The Hague/Geneva conventions, i.e., a war crime? 77.183.179.27 (talk) 09:25, 31 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]