Talk:All My Hits: Todos Mis Éxitos Vol. 2/GA1

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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 20:54, 26 June 2022 (UTC)

Infobox

• Needs alt
• On studio use bullet points, location of those studios?
• For producers see Producer
• Don't use flatlist, but bullet points
• "Cien Años" has no indication it was released as a single, nor a date

• I couldn't find a date. But I added a source. – jona ✉ 14:10, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

 Done

Lead

• By 1999, → In 1999,
• music critics → link to music journalism
• The album ended 2000 as → The album was
• certified double Platinum (Latin) → remove the wikilink

 Done

Background

• A.B. Quintanilla; himself, Suzette Quintanilla → A.B. Quintanilla, Suzette Quintanilla
• By 1999, Selena → In 1999, Selena
• In the past five years → which past five years? From 2017-2022?
• has been → was
• recognized Selena → recognized that her

 Done

Music

• Divide this section in three paragraphs, two have too much information
• "Is It the Beat?" maxi single in support of the Selena movie soundtrack → two wikilinks for the same article?
• "sensuous flavor" according to Mario Taradell of → "sensuous flavor", according to Mario Taradell of
• soundtrack, which → soundtrack, but
• Following the impact of Selena's death, Christopher John Farley of Time magazine, wrote how the producers were most likely regretting their decision → this information is not relevant for this section
• "Bidi Bidi Bom Bom" on All My Hits: Todos Mis Éxitos Vol. 2 is → "Bidi Bidi Bom Bom" is
• Johnny Herrera wrote the song, which was originally written for Lisa Lopez as a follow-up to her 1982 number-one single "Si Quieres Verme Llorar". → remove, has nothing to do with the music section.
• and was redone with updated arrangements that transformed it into a sentimental ballad for Anthology (1998) → and was redone with updated arrangements, becoming a sentimental ballad for Anthology (1998)
• of All My Hits: Todos Mis Éxitos Vol. 2, and is modernized on the album with a new arrangement → and features a new arrangement

 Done

Critical reception

• "A Boy Like That". → release date in between brackets
• which Ronquillo calls a "beautiful song" → which one? There are four mentioned

 Done

Commercial performance

• On January 22, 2000, it was revealed that EMI Latin was preparing to release the second volume of All My Hits: Todos Mis Éxitos.[35] Three weeks later, the company revealed that All My Hits: Todos Mis Éxitos Vol. 2 would be released on Leap Day 2000. The album includes a heart-shaped commemorative pendant with a picture of Selena. → move this to the Background
• Los Temerarios → Los Temerarios's
• The album remained at number three on the Top Latin Albums chart and number two on the Regional Mexican Albums chart for two additional weeks → too detailed, remove. Just weeks that mark a difference, not regular ones
• The album dethroned Shakira's MTV Unplugged from the top spot → in which chart?
• its sixth week, the album fell to number two on the Top Latin Albums chart, while remaining at number one on the Regional Mexican Albums chart. → too detailed
• In its eighth week, the album sold less than 7,000 units and fell to number four on the Top Latin Albums chart, while it remained at number two on the Regional Mexican Albums chart. The recording continued to descend on the Top Latin Albums chart, falling to number five in its tenth week. Over on the Regional Mexican Albums chart, the album regained the top position. It was knocked off the top position a week later by Joan Sebastian's Secreto de Amor → too detailed
• double Platinum (Latin) → unlink

 Done

Track listing

• Fine

Personnel

• Two collumns

 Done

Charts

• Please fix tables according to Template:Album chart

• I'm not going to disrupt the citation style I have used for a template that even on its documentation page questions its usefulness. – jona ✉ 14:10, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

I understand that. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:10, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

Certification

• Fine

See also

• Fine

References

• Rename section to Citations, it will become a subsection of References

  missed the second portion. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:16, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

• RIAA.com → see Certifications and sales figures
• Source check: 6, 9-11, 14, 17, 18, 24 32-34, 37, 41, 49, 50-52
• AllMusic is the publisher, not work
• Remove Nielsen Business Media, Inc. from the Billboard sources. You already have the work, there is no need for the publisher

 Done

Works cited

• Retitle to Websites

 Done

Overall

• Let me know once you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 17:02, 28 June 2022 (UTC)

• Thanks for your review. I have fixed most of the issues and left responses to the others. Best – jona ✉ 14:10, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

  I marked those that have yet to be addressed. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:41, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

• I have fixed the remaining issues. – jona ✉ 15:06, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

  Wikilink the first instance of Billboard, El Norte, Los Angeles Times and Newsday. Also fix "Kxan.com", the genre of the album is not sourced. Neither are the studios or mentioned in the body of the article. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:15, 30 June 2022 (UTC)

•  Done – jona ✉ 11:56, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

  You can't use the genres provided by AllMusic on their tab. Either remove the genre or find a reliable source. You can keep the studios, you just need to mention them on the body of the article with a reliable source. These are the last fixes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:12, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

• I have removed them. Thanks – jona ✉ 20:24, 2 July 2022 (UTC)