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A fact from Albany Convention Center appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 14 September 2010 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that the proposed design of the Albany Convention Center in Albany, New York, includes saving the city's oldest building, which was built in 1728?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2010/September.

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The second sentence in the lead is somewhat awkward, I don't exactly know how to rewrite it. WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 01:40, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed. upstate NYer 03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
In the lead, the phrase "the main draw" (emphasis added) threw me off. Can you replace draw with a synonym (I don't know what it means). WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 01:45, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Draw → incentive. upstate NYer 03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
1. The word lead appears also in other sections with the same usage. Can you take care of them too? WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 01:49, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
After the seventh paragraph in the History section, there is a comment that states . Have you taken care of that? WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 01:56, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Yea, I still have to figure that out. I haven't seen it in the sources yet. upstate NYer 03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
The history section is large, can you split it into several subsections? WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 02:04, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
- Added some sub-headings. upstate NYer 03:11, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looking good, Upstater! WikiCopter^Radio_Checklist^{Formerly AirplanePro} 03:41, 24 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

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