Talk:Akwasi Yeboah/GA1
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 18:13, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
Am happy to review this article as well for the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 18:13, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Early life
[edit]- Think you also want to state Chigwell is a suburb in London as stated by Newsday
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- "His physical education teacher let him know he was not competitive," - how about told him to better pass WP:LIMITED
- OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- The acryonms of the National Basketball League should be put in parentheses after the first full mention of it
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- Wikilink points and rebounds to their respective articles for non-Basketball readers
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- "and had 19 points in a 12-point" - scored
- OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- "the 2015 National Basketball League’s Division I Playoff Championship." - NBL
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- Wikilink NCAA Division I
- OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:12, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
Stony Brook (2016–2019)
[edit]- Wikilink the term redshirted
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- "as Yeboah sat out due to lack of projected playing time." - I believe it would help to know what exactly Yeboah sat out. The entire tournament or the championship game?
- He sat out the season. Clarified. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- "He scored 21 points and had 16 rebounds in the first round of the America East Tournament against Binghamton." - This sentence is lacking a reliable source to verify it. Please address this issue
- It was sourced to the next ref, but I added a new one. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- "Yeboah averaged 16.7 points and 7.7 rebounds per game as a junior for the Seawolves while shooting 41.3 percent from the floor and 31.6 percent from 3-point range." - not mentioned in the America East source. Please find another source that explicitly states this information
- Good catch. I added a ref. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:22, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
Rutgers (2019–2020)
[edit]- "and first winning season since 2006." - and its
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- "including a three pointer to tie the game at 72" - three-pointer
- OK. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- "in a 75-72 win against Nebraska on January 26, 2020" - the hyphen should be replaced by an en dash (–) per MOS:DASH
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- "and surpassed the 1,500 point milestone." - 1,500-point
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:26, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
National team career
[edit]- Wikilink assists to the relevant article for non-Basketball readers
- Done. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
References
[edit]- Be consistent in how you write the dates in the references
- Fixed. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 9 is missing the date it was published and mention of the Associated Press as the agency who provided USA Today with the story
- Added. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- Reference 13's author is incorrect and the date it was published is missing
- Good catch. Fixed. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
Am placing the review on hold to give the nominator the opportunity to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 19:28, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- Have responded to your concerns. ~EDDY (talk/contribs)~ 22:35, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Editorofthewiki: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:10, 13 April 2020 (UTC)